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blackdice1001

@blackdice1001

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1061

I just caught up on the last three chapters.. wow you did a great job! I love that Khushi proposed to Arnav, and how. Arnav's plan probably would've worked out in his favour too but this way we're absolutely sure Khushi is ready to do this. Oh and I love that you put the faraq padta hei dialogue in the story. Waiting for the epilogue!

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boreddamsel

@boreddamsel

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#1062

Juhi. I don't know what to say.

Yes, that's what it has come to ..

The Arti who could never shut up has nothing to say!

Hmmm.. ok let me try.

To the first part with Arnav's outburst and her reaction.. so typical!

Second part with the journal .. just like that I thought.. he gave her time.. he took it slowly.. very very sweet!

Third part .. I will sum it up. Beautiful! 😳

Dear CVs, learn .. learn.. learn from Juhi!

This is how you make a show..

The repentance.. the guilt.. Khushi and Arnav both matured in the process.. this story was just perfect! Everything I wanted to see in the show, except the almost-rape of course.

Hmm. wonder who killed Shyam though.. Anjali? 😉

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oceanssea

@oceanssea

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#1063

Read the last three chapters.Juhiji,you are as usual wonderful in your writing.

The last chapter was simply beautiful,specially the part where Khushi reveals
that she was wearing the mangalsutra all this time.

Waiting for more.😊

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1064

i read all this in one go... amazingly written SS... i just dont have any words to express 😊

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RICHA

@ar_sajan4evr

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#1065

wowww
cant belev its nearing its end
a ss wch hooked me cz of d depth of d story...
jus loved ur writng style..
amzingg...
realy liked this part...dere heart to heart convo..
d way arnv helped her out..
n d proposal...
simply mindblownggg
waitng 4 d epilouge now..
thnx 4 d pm...:))

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1066

beautiful poignant

i am going through with a separation from my love but i dont think he would have the patience for waiting this long

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PixieFlame

@PixieFlame

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1067

Just read the last 3 chapters!

Amazing!

I love it! :D

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aditi07

@aditi07

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1068

WOW...WOW...WOW 👏👏👏!!
Just read the whole FF...simply left me speechless, with so many beautiful emotions churning inside me!! it was beyond amazing & wonderful...myriad of emotions...what a superb story-telling!!
all the beautifully written diary entries, khushi-arnav deep & honest convos, multitude of their feelings & emotions, NK's role, all was just too wonderful.

If I were to recall some of the moments which esp. touched me like - sound of the spoon clicking the plate when she started eating (awww) seeing him unwell yet not eating , the way arnav recalls his all actions & behaviours which he did under her effectin front of khushi to evoke a reaction- when she was silent after the incident, the emotional letter of khushi , the way surprisingly she returned back to AR asking the question would she be required to measure male models (made me chuckle along wid widest of smile) followed by an equally fitting reply of arnav, their dates & khushi being elated to see laad governor back, their visit to new home ending with khushi's 1st laughter, arnav's intense & amazing confession & finally most unpredictable & unbelievably true of khushi's character - her confession & her unexpected but honest & beautiful proposal for marriage ... the list is unending!!

Simply overwhelmed with this entire masterpiece...loved it loved it loved it!! Thanks a lot for the PM 😊

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nonasi

@nonasi

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1069

M bak frnz...

Ch 8:

Shyam.Is.Dead. For real?? But...what...how... No wonder Khushi's gone into total shock and denial...This isn't about running away, but a change of scenery is definitely needed for K.

Damn. Laxmi Nagar wale bhi kaminey nikle. 😒

(Okay, I actually got a little excited there with the whodunit possibilities...Anji? NK? Babuji??)

Chalo, at least NK aur doosra namoona ko bhi thoda sa akal aagaye. (Restraining da romance, na?)

Whaa? Khushi going to Australia with NK...hmm. Change of mahaul toh banta hai, but there's something off about this...

Ch 9:

Bwahaha, good. He should be making a mad dash to the airport.

Arrey. *facepalm* Men. (Really, Arnie, a collar grab? Kaise messed up priorities hain...)

Ooh snap, doosra MU. He just comes out looking worse and worse with every chapter.

British Airways? That means...Lavanya! (Oh damn, poor NK; that's a lotta globetrotting...)

Lol, signs of telepathic life after all.

Khushi's letter:

And she finally 'fesses up. (Wow, it's so weird to see Khushi take credit. But change is good, na?)

*sigh* All those sweet memories...

Nahin! Cynical Khushi can't kill the sapnon wali. Na-hin. Lekin sassy Khushi all the way!

To be continued...

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swat.g

@swat.g

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1070

One awesome ending n an awesome beginning!! ❤️ sorry for commenting late but i dint know what to say anything other than that it was beautiful!!! Her struggles..his confession...n her reason for cominb back!! Its a start of a relationship...between them...his house was designed keeping khushi in mind ❤️ n his thoughts!! and the last part was my fav...his planned proposal is ruined coz KKG decides to propose ASR!! By showing him a bridal dress she designed n by asking him to come on a 1yearlong honeymoon n asking if hes not up for it!! Lolz shes crazy!!!🥳u r awesome!!

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