~KriYaansh OS: A Loving Payback~ - Page 4

Originally posted by: Anyaa_KriYaansh

a loving payback!!

Beautifull!!
u kno it was kind f hard to read the beginning!!
i didn't expect this to start soo!!
but still u just killed it!!!;-D
haha tooo gud!!:)
it is awesomee yaa..
nd yesss KriYaansh can never be apart from eachother!!!
<3 than k u so much vo pm!
nd keep up the good work!!;-)

Originally posted by: --Kinjal--

Omggg upasna
it was amazing...

Loved it loved it super loved it

specially the end...

I was waiting to read something amazing today...and here u posted this
thanx a tonn darls

love u

Originally posted by: anjee_007

wowww awsm OS...
loved it...
lovd there payback...
really sweet...
and the last part was really gud...
thanx 4 the pm...

Originally posted by: d3_rox

Pasto amazing OS...

Loved the fight...

N then their love...

Awesome!!!

Btw were hv u been????

Not spoken to u since a long time..how r u??

-Tehmina!!

Originally posted by: asmaju

Upi pasta girl..
I jusrt loved it..
It was an awesome one..
Too sweet to handle it!!

Give moere try for Os..U sure rock it..

Originally posted by: kuhu_Arsha

awww it was mindblowing,,,,,,,,,

i m loving it,,,,,,

thnkx 4 pm :D

Originally posted by: nature2

i just LOve this paybak yaar👏superb👏👏

Originally posted by: shukti_19

wow! wow!! It was freaking awesome ..
Paying back d LOVE.. Undoubtedly a Unique Style of Manofying..! :D
Finishing was just fabulous..KRIYAANSH's lovey-dovey morning Talk n Rey's teasing in b/w d convo..aww..
Want more n more sweet-cute OSes from U

Originally posted by: yogini64

Nyce . . . 😃
looks like things are quite disturbed,,, heated up arguments,, shouting . . . .
they are planning to end it 😳
but naughty rey got a hot idea . . . . 😆
lets return love 1st . . . . 😉
it can't be returned . . . . . It just grows more n more . . . . If u turn it on 😎
RIP fights 🤣
And they must've lived happily ever after . . . . . Fighting & returning love ☺️

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

Upiii meri jaan u knw wht i m always free for reading ur work 😳

awww !!! 🤗 and i'm always dere for you :*

n how can u change my mind by ur write ups soo easily sometime i thought...abhi thodi der phele mai sady sady thi bt ryt now i m smilling wo b badi wali smile 😃

hai ?? really then purpose of posting it is done !! tu khush mai khush !!! 😳 😆 😃

n dis OS wow yaar
mindblowing, amazing, awsome, faadu 😃

thanku :* 😳

love kriyaansh fight
n hayee dat kiss jaan le li usne to 😆

hehhe !!! nahi jaan nai li !! re ghayal kiya re .. meri shaffy ki jaan to mai hu !! 🤣

n ur vocab. hayeee kitni awsome h yaar...kaha se dhundh kr lati h rey tu itni mindblowing n dhassu words 😛

sach bolu i almost licked my dictionary for finding different adjectives !! :( bohot mehnat karna pada ! 🤢 😉

n i love da ending alot
Aww!!! so sweet dialouges
i loved it to core

i love you jaan
muhaaa :* :* :*

i love you more shaffy !!! :* :* :* :*
tight wali jhappi b le le yaar tu to

hehe !! blushwa !! *hugs u back * 😳