ARIYA:An Odyssey of love[part-30(last part)page-132;NOTE-140page] - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
so that is what happened.. actually arjun saved riya from that 🤬.. btw y riya's mother is behaving like this?? 😲

loved that ekta kapoor dialougue!! šŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
good going...but i think u run fast on this part on some track.
every part was superb!šŸ‘
the cute dia btwn shree&chotu,
brotherly avater of rathod,
caring husband arjun,
weeding preparation...
arjun's concern 4 riya...
really it's worth reading😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Indra he s such a b*****d... hw culd he evn thnk of doing sumthn lik this... nd Riya's mom wats wrong with her??? nyways nice update... continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Prohelika:


commenting on three updates in a go, it's good to see the loving and caring side of arjun inspite of all his attempts to act cold towards riya..and about riya's wedding, missing the "lagno" is still regarded as a huge deal in our so-called modern and educated Bengali culture, the girl's life is rendered unbearable in the name of "family honour"😔..and it's a shame that such rubbish mindsets still exists in our society😔. Bdw, it's nice to see team ETF take up new duties and responsibilities for a change, and rathore's new brotherly avatar is truly adorable😳 .


Update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Hello everyone! Hope all r well in the dreamland of Ariya!

Back with another part … hope u can enjoy it. & so sorry if I make any mistake.

PART—3D

Riya is just shocked by her mother's that behavior.what happen to her sweet mother??!!!

Mrs. Mukharjee still now crying. & it's irritated mr.mukharjee.he grab her hand & take her to a room.

Mr.mukharjee: what's wrong with u ranjana? Why r u acting like that?even u know it's not our princess fault at all. It's that indranil's fault who deceive us … & somehow we also responsible for this. We just trust a wrong person & now my princess hav to suffer for this!

Mrs.mukharjee: I know shoumik, it's not riya's fault at all … but I just can't control myself. What'll happen now?everybody will just remind that my child's marriage break up… not the fact that indranil's action… shoumik our child hav to suffer for this & we can't do anything. I just want to kill that animal who play with our trust & my daughter's life… I'll kill him.

Mr.mukharjee: calm down ranjana. We hav to stay strong for our child sake. It's just a weeding that broke… may be it's god wish … that's why it's broke.he'll arrange a perfect prince for my princess… just wait for that…

Mrs.mukharjee: but our family reputation already broke up. & "lagno" will be end soon. U know that means… don't u?

Mr.mukharjee: no .as long we stay together as a true family, nothing can bother me. & u also should forget the so called society.my child need her parents right now. & I m never gonna leave her hand ever.

Mrs.mukharjee: sorry,I shouldn't react like this.

Mr.mukharjee: u asking wrong person's forgiveness. U should say sorry to ur baby girl ranjana.

Mrs.mukharjee:yes,I'll.

[in the mandap area]:

Every remaining guest start to show sympathy[?!] by saying that what'll riya do now etc.etc.

Shree: god! They r sad for this incidents or just happy for get a topics to tuant??impossible people!

Chotu: why they still here? Weeding is over.they should go!

Shree: no, they want to spilt salt in that wound!

Arjun just hearing everyone's talk. They just sad coz weeding called off…. But they should be happy coz indranil's truth came out!all r saying that how bad if a weeding called off in their society,the girl hav to suffer whole life.but they can't see she'll suffer more if that so called weeding took place![he just can't bear that people show a fake sympathy to riya.coz,they also laughing silently at her condition]

A middle age lady go to riya to console her. but her speaking tone disgust riya very much. she screamed loudly.

Riya:enough! Now stop this nonsenses. All r acting like I m the criminal! Don't dare to do this.

She start to cry. Shree & chotu go quickly to her.riya start to cry by holding shree. Shree's eyes also get wet….

Just then arjun rush to riya, grab her hand & start to take her to mandap. All r just too shock that can't react by his weird behavior.

He help her to sit in the mandap & sit beside her.

Arjun: pandit ji,start ur chanting & every things.

Pandit just shocked & afraid by arjun's cold voice.

He start to do her work.

Riya is like a statue…. Rathore,shree,chotu can't even forget how to talk.

Arjun hold riya's hand & make her do the ritual.she didn't protest jusl looking at him in disbelieve. Who is he?!

Arjun [looking at rathore]: why u r waiting here like a statue.go & called mr.mukharjee. coz,he hav to do the 'kanyadan'. It's his work.

Rathore called mr. mukharjee in a shock mood.

Everything happens just in some moment. mr.mukharjee do his job.arjun riya took shat phere, arjun put sindur& weeding chain on riya.pandit declair them as husband & wife!

Riya's mom just come then.she is here to say sorry to riya. But get shock .

Then arjun standup & hold riya's hand. Take her to the middle of the hall.

Arjun: mrs.mukharjee, u tell me not to interrupt on ur family matter,coz I am not part of ur family,right?

But now I am, so I hav the right. U should thank god for saving ur daughter from that lair.but, u?! u start to accuse ur own daughter although u know it's not her fault! She wasn't even choose him,u did.

Mrs.mukharjee want to say something but arjun stop her.

Arjun: no mrs. Mukharjee, I don't want to hear anything. & for all of u [indicating the other people], u don't hav to worry for riya. Coz she isn't riya mukharjee anymore.she is my wife, riya arjun suryakant rawte. So I'll never ever allow anyone to talk about her like that.so put ur sympathy on ur hand & go to ur home. Here's nothing left for u guys.

Shree… get ours bags.we hav to leave now as well.

[shree& chotu quickly go to fetch their bag in a very shocked but happy mood]

Arjun: don't worry mr.mukharjee,I'll never leave her on a midway like u did today…..

Riya let's go.he also silently sign rathore to come.

Everybody just watching when ACP arjun suryakant rawte grab his wife hand & take her to the car….

They even looked at the crowd while leaving the place…. Not even once.

Mrs.mukharjee start to cry again silently….. but not for society's taunt fear…. Just for her daughter….for not getting a chance to say her 'sorry'…..to tell her that she'll never left her side again.

& mr.mukharjee ……. Just smile, coz her princess get what she wanted but never can tell………

ETF team already start to go back in their old life with some new relation equation………

[to be continue]

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Posted: 12 years ago
#87

ohh it was so Superb...
So awsome..amaizing yrr...
loved it dear..update soon..
waiting for your next update...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
lovd it but very short
next update should be long plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Superb yar... bt Arjun did the same thng rite even he left her... yeah i knw dey vl b together bt still y dnt he take her with him nd accept her as his wife... update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
amazing update...!!!😊
cant wait fr d nxt part..!!!😳

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