ARSHI SS: Heart's A Mess NOTE* PG 146 15/4*

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varshapan

@varshapan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#511

awww... i can't help but repeat myself - i just so looovee this arnav. i mean he is a dream.

and now i can't wait to see the anjali angle developing.

thanks for the update!! and the pm..

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A, Anon, Nony, Anamika :)

@Anony_mous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#512

Lovely Update.

Particularly where Arnav comes back and swoops her in a kiss, and whoa, the plaster on his nose becomes the villain :D

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tan2345

@tan2345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#513

nice update

thanks 4 da pm

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Sharna aka Salena

@xMidnightStarx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#514

Ahh, fantastic update!

Anjali has come to Khushi's workplace, hmm wonder if she finds more about her!

Haha, this part was hilarious but adorable:

"Screw it!" Arnav cut her off, pulling her forward on to his chest and bending down to kiss her.

🤣

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Anamika Kumari

@Anamikarocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#515

Really!!! ⭐️⭐️

I won't say heart is a mess!!!

They Kissed!!!!...😳😳

Hope Khushi get everything that she desired and deserves!!!

Loved the words:

SCREW IT...😆😆

Anjali is a doctor or patient!!!!😕😕

HOPe KHUSHI finds out soon!!!😃

Waitinf for the next one... and update of other ffs!!⭐️⭐️

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#516

omg omg
wher wer u??
wer was dis FF??
I M glad i came across dis story
its simplyyy amazzzing, beaitifull
intrigued me completely
only problm is dat ,wen i was reading chps i noticed ...u r nt an regulwr updater...omg omggg plsss update regularly...
i hav fallen in love vit dis story n i want to read read n read till d end...n i cannnt wait fr a long tym ...
plsss update...

n y is dis story gt a few likes??? its amazing...
ppl mite hav nt read...
edit, do.something...that ppl will read dis beautifull story...

one more thing...
i love n adore dis arnav khushi...

yeaaa n they kisssedd

cute cute cute

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Sonia

@sonia_92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#517

That chapter was, hayeee. sasak, that was, oh I don't know, that was, toe curling. heehee

Such an absolutely adorable idea of having a zoned out khushi, rare and absolutely adorable. It sounded so impossible for her character here to ever be lost, let alone for romantic reasons. I loved how you showed the continuation of the scene at her place in khushi's memory, beautiful.

my most favourite scenes? yes there is two this time, the first being when arnav pulled her down on his lap. I believe that is the most intimate way to hold a woman, and good god, you wrote it do beautifully. It was so unexpected that I scrolled back up and re read it to confirm that it actually happened.I still can't get over it.

the second was "screw it". The kiss was expected but it was the apt use of screw it by both, arnav and khushi, that had me awestruck. The way the kiss was supported by his broken nose gave it the cute factor. And then arnav goes on and takes my breath away with his parting words. Are you trying to kill me here sasak?

love
sonia

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@-ARSHI_LOVE-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#518

finally an update and an awesome update...👏...

Edited by sheetalranipd - 12 years ago

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#519

wow u updated...loved the update...them sharing their feelings and ready to put everything on stake and give this relationship a try...and finally anjali here...hope she is OK...