ARSHI SS: Heart's A Mess NOTE* PG 146 15/4*

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shagun05

@shagun05

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

WOW Congratulations !!!!!!

a new story !!! And I absolutely love the Title...

And the way this has started off I am really enjoying it. A little fun and laughter. and loving the way you describe the scenes and situations . And I definitely know this story is gonna be as awesome as YLME and I will wait patiently for the next update of YLME as I know you are gonna be back with a BANG !!!!

What can I say now about this story and chapter...

Fiesty Khushi and Flirty Arnav... What can the readers ask for more???

First meet and he asked her to DATE him !!!

And about the note:

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Ankita C

@aNkItA.C

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Ankitachodhury: Sorry! Totally forgot about the clickable links thing. Will send you one…but you may have to end up getting two PM's. Thanks for reading and commenting. Hope office isn't too boring ;).

haww thnk u so mchwa yaar😳😳😳

offc s vry boring yaar..damn boring😛

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Deepti

@deepti1906

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

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awww lovely update...i must say... It was really-3 awesome...😉😉😃 So khushi is the serious one??😲😆

and yup that's me in mahh dp...😊😊 Thanks for the compliment...😳😳 muaahh...
Awesomely written...👏👏 U Rock... Do update soon...😊😊

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malniy

@malniy

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

heeeyyy😃 , this story seems reallly interesting and fun , love your way of writing , will be awaiting the next update not so patiently 😆 so update ASAP 🤗

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reshmimohan

@reshmimohan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

😛Ah ha! Interesting concept. Loved it. Would like an update soon..😉

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eroni

@eroni

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

thank u for continuing dear.I am glad you are not willing to comprimise with YLME. Love this this story too. Keep up the good work!

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usha

@ushankitvc

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

hey, sasak...awsum updt...loved the arshi convo...poor all khushi can think is of how to reach the organs to the reqd destination...and arnav in naughty business type mood...he wants a date with her...what will she do now????i think she will lecture him and try to convince him...continue soon...

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yazzy

@yazzy

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Amazing, can't wait to read the next update!

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preethi28

@preethi28

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

thank you the for acknowledgement.
the new story is turning out to be pretty exciting.
i love this khushi.
she is a doctor for a change and what's better fiesty, straightforward and blunt and especially not smitten by "the charming raizada " as of now.
and arnav is interested in her bcuz she doesn't give a damn to his wealth and charm! that's good news!
so unlike YLME there won't be any aukat factor i hope.
and since you have already mentioned that you have the story entirely planned i think i am allowed to demand daily updates! 😈

Edited by preethi28 - 12 years ago