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Posted: 12 years ago
i wanted to comment detaily dear...tats y dint res...
now tat i cn write dwn simultaneously while reading...its kinda convinient to me... 😛

ya update...

wht the...dream!!!! 😲 u burst my bubble kiddo...😭
but im glad in a way...tat wil cum around spl in another chap na...tats y😆

get moving idiot... yes i felt like to say the same...love makes ppl insane yaar...
and lav lipstick...😛 tel me one thing whts its use...it is not tat lipstick gonna stay there fr long tonight rgt... ☺️

now fr me...' get moving idiot...u havent read evn a 3/4th of it' 😳
ya im moving up...wait... 😛

black and grey...yaar black is my fav colr.. and he always luk dashing in it...
his hair making him luk innocent... 😆 well he is not...def not... 'looks deceive kuts...

she said al the best...😳
wen he leaned dwn..i was like omg... not now...!!😲
but ther came another shock...
she kissed him on his cheeks... oh gosh...

continue..continue...

'no need to show off...
shraddha i smell sumone is burning out of possesvness here ...cn u smel it huh!!? 😉

he once said in his interview tat he loves 'strwbry lipgloss smell which his wifes uses...'
hope u read tat too...rgt??😳

i hav a doubt buddy...hw cum he say 'he loves the taste'
wht...hw...when...!!!! 😛

arghhh shyam... hit that scumbag to hell arnav...showing off.. chi who admires u tat u doing it... yuck..get lost...😡
showing faces to kushi...u better die in arnav's arms...i would be the one to celebrate it... 😡

ROUND ONE...
punch...punch...punch...
arnav won yaayy...
but wht i loved is tat look he gave to her scream...lovely... 😳

ROUND TWO...
ermmm shal i skip this... 🤔
hmm mhmmm...nope it was well written...wen kushi tuk his name...and he felt it...
i had a cute arshi moment in it so im sparing round two... 😉

ROUND THREE...
wow... arnav won...!!!
though i knew it ...im still happy...

he spread his arms fr her huh...how sweet... she ran to him...loved tat part...awesum ...my romantic rockstar... 😆

revenge!!! 😲 BIG NOOO...
he felt her to be a broken doll...
why are u confusing...wil he take revenge or he wont?!!🤔

his line of thoughts... the way his hrt roped those evidences of her pure hrt... awesum...👏

she made u crazy...!!?
no yaar... u made me crazy...wht the hell u gonna do now..i hv no clue on it...!!! 😭

p.s awesum twist dear... eager to knw the nxt part... 👍🏼 u guys rock seriously and its really not a joke fr tat matter...
Edited by -saranya- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


ok i thought u wll do it for me wthout oranges😉

ok let me save it for future
but i guess i won't need them 😳

hv better options kyu? 😆
who knows better than u 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shivi.10rocks



ok i thought u wll do it for me wthout oranges😉

ok let me save it for future
but i guess i won't need them 😳

hv better options kyu? 😆
who knows better than u 😉


U tricked me!
Ok.. let me wait for ur demand..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update dear
plz don't break her heart
shivi.10rocks thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kuts



U tricked me!
Ok.. let me wait for ur demand..



OMG... I love oranges..
U know I will tell yes to anything
once one gives me orange..

these lines making me mad now
mera to theek hai
but pie agar kisi aur ne ye oranges de ke kuch karne ko kaha u wll do it 😲

hey mahra ram ji
mai lut jaungi
mera kya hogd fir?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank GOD it was a dream !!!!!!
So i was right ASR wanted to revege her, but deep down inside his heart Arnav has fallen head over heels for her!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -saranya-

i wanted to comment detaily dear...tats y dint res...

now tat i cn write dwn simultaneously while reading...its kinda convinient to me... 😛

ya update...

wht the...dream!!!! 😲 u burst my bubble kiddo...😭
but im glad in a way...tat wil cum around spl in another chap na...tats y😆

get moving idiot... yes i felt like to say the same...love makes ppl insane yaar...
and lav lipstick...😛 tel me one thing whts its use...it is not tat lipstick gonna stay there fr long tonight rgt... ☺️

now fr me...' get moving idiot...u havent read evn a 3/4th of it' 😳
ya im moving up...wait... 😛

black and grey...yaar black is my fav colr.. and he always luk dashing in it...
his hair making him luk innocent... 😆 well he is not...def not... 'looks deceive kuts...

she said al the best...😳
wen he leaned dwn..i was like omg... not now...!!😲
but ther came another shock...
she kissed him on his cheeks... oh gosh...

continue..continue...

'no need to show off...
shraddha i smell sumone is burning out of possesvness here ...cn u smel it huh!!? 😉

he once said in his interview tat he loves 'strwbry lipgloss smell which his wifes uses...'
hope u read tat too...rgt??😳

i hav a doubt buddy...hw cum he say 'he loves the taste'
wht...hw...when...!!!! 😛

arghhh shyam... hit that scumbag to hell arnav...showing off.. chi who admires u tat u doing it... yuck..get lost...😡
showing faces to kushi...u better die in arnav's arms...i would be the one to celebrate it... 😡

ROUND ONE...
punch...punch...punch...
arnav won yaayy...
but wht i loved is tat look he gave to her scream...lovely... 😳

ROUND TWO...
ermmm shal i skip this... 🤔
hmm mhmmm...nope it was well written...wen kushi tuk his name...and he felt it...
i had a cute arshi moment in it so im sparing round two... 😉

ROUND THREE...
wow... arnav won...!!!
though i knew it ...im still happy...

he spread his arms fr her huh...how sweet... she ran to him...loved tat part...awesum ...my romantic rockstar... 😆

revenge!!! 😲 BIG NOOO...
he felt her to be a broken doll...
why are u confusing...wil he take revenge or he wont?!!🤔

his line of thoughts... the way his hrt roped those evidences of her pure hrt... awesum...👏

she made u crazy...!!?
no yaar... u made me crazy...wht the hell u gonna do now..i hv no clue on it...!!! 😭

p.s awesum twist dear... eager to knw the nxt part... 👍🏼 u guys rock seriously and its really not a joke fr tat matter...


LOL.. Di, i had to give a shocking twist.. 🤣

lipstick.. 😛 lets see.. 😉
and ha, i too LOVE black!!


and Ha, there public kiss was ON DEMAND specially for our , lilakumariacnw, Di..


I cant smell anything Di.. 😕 specially NO Shyam burning! 😛
Am eating butter - scotch right now.. 😆

uff na na, i dint know! 😲
I love strawberry lip gloss .. 😆

and shit! u got me!!!!! I was too thinking how will he know the taste !! but that could bring another twist in future.. 😆 😉 😆

ROMANTIC ROCKSTAR!!! 🤣
kuch bi ha! 😆

But I admit it, i love to be over dramatic in a filmy way ALOT sometimes. 😳

p.s.-I would have made Shyam win and give a twist.. 😈
but i ALREADY gave one in the start, turning my Minnie's mehnat into water.. 🤢
Sorry Minnie, no hard feelings, just playing around! 😳

Di, u said u wanna know whats nxt! Try writing the next part as a writer that u are, I and we would love to have u as a guest writer yaar, speacially after reading that Part 4 of ur s.s. .. Try bringing anything as ur twist, and put in Arnav the way u want!

What say?? 🤔
Its a big thing am asking, i know, and i know my co-writers wont deny.. Love ur writing style..

So, bolo, likhoge kya?! 😃
Sarah_Jothi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kuts


LOL.. Di, i had to give a shocking twist.. 🤣

lipstick.. 😛 lets see.. 😉
and ha, i too LOVE black!!


and Ha, there public kiss was ON DEMAND specially for our , lilakumariacnw, Di..


I cant smell anything Di.. 😕 specially NO Shyam burning! 😛
Am eating butter - scotch right now.. 😆

uff na na, i dint know! 😲
I love strawberry lip gloss .. 😆

and shit! u got me!!!!! I was too thinking how will he know the taste !! but that could bring another twist in future.. 😆 😉 😆

ROMANTIC ROCKSTAR!!! 🤣
kuch bi ha! 😆

But I admit it, i love to be over dramatic in a filmy way ALOT sometimes. 😳

p.s.-I would have made Shyam win and give a twist.. 😈
but i ALREADY gave one in the start, turning my Minnie's mehnat into water.. 🤢
Sorry Minnie, no hard feelings, just playing around! 😳

Di, u said u wanna know whats nxt! Try writing the next part as a writer that u are, I and we would love to have u as a guest writer yaar, speacially after reading that Part 4 of ur s.s. .. Try bringing anything as ur twist, and put in Arnav the way u want!

What say?? 🤔
Its a big thing am asking, i know, and i know my co-writers wont deny.. Love ur writing style..

So, bolo, likhoge kya?! 😃



😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 omg!!!!
u think i cn make justice to it!!!!

i seriously dont feel so... u guys are fabulous...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update n twist was something unimaginable i was confused as to why he didnt make her suffer for his insults bt never expected him to do such cheap things like playing with her heart
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Posted: 12 years ago
@-saranya- Di..

we all write anything which comes in head. dont think much 😆

and question to justice,let us decide that. 😉

momo121 and shivi.10rocks write great,and you too!

write whatever you feel like and we will be waiting.
Edited by kuts - 12 years ago

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