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Posted: 12 years ago
part 6
awesome...
she has told him her feelings...
that creep is really so disgusting...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg kuts...
lovely yaar...lovely...
**kushi apology...😳

**arnav's anger...ooh i so loved ths angry man..☺️.

**shyaam... frgt him... 🤬

**his attitude... superb...

**their hot talks...fast and furious... sparkling... 👍🏼

**her confession!!!
im dead...
i cn kiss u cz i love u...
who wont be stunned hearng ths... 😛

**be ready to kiss me... now i seriously want u to write tat kissing part... 😆 momo & shivi baby...no harm... u r awesum writers stil wen it cums dwn to naughtiness my kuts steal the shw always...
i mean alwaysss 😳

update the nxt chap asap...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kuts



thanks baby.. 🤗


welcm 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

yep i agree... so beautifully written...
romantic rock star ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
kushi confessed arnav
that shyam he is going to get nicely from arnav
there is no need for worries as asr is there
loved the update a lot
cant wait for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read all d parts in one go
my god u three make an amazing team
missed u trivedhishraddha (hope d spelling is right)
glad to have u back
story Is moving really fast and interesting
addictive nd very beautifully written
It was full of entertainment entertainment nd entertainment



Hope u r satisfied with my comment
pls pm me wen u update
do reply for d comment by scrapping
if u dont mind
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...nice update..kuts...
Khushi is totally in love...she forgot her bag... Wah... Thats confirmatory sign for fact, that she is in love...
Nw arnav is in EGO mood... HW DaRe yOu ShYaM..??..uurrghh...
Loved that scene wen khushi took shelter behing arnav... Arnav protecting her from his evil looks...
Her confession was... Hayyee... Total filmy...i loved it...( i wish i can see all these in film with barun & sanaya as lead... Would my wish ever fulfill..)
She is willing to kiss him... Hayee...i am bit scared too... That evil shyam can be very cunning... So a bit scared... Make arnav win... Let them kiss... Actually i want khushi to kiss him in public... Later they can kiss in private...( just a reader's wish...)...
Eagerly waiting for next update...continue soon plzzz...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --MISHTEE--

Read all d parts in one go
my god u three make an amazing team
missed u trivedhishraddha (hope d spelling is right)
glad to have u back
story Is moving really fast and interesting
addictive nd very beautifully written
It was full of entertainment entertainment nd entertainment



Hope u r satisfied with my comment
pls pm me wen u update
do reply for d comment by scrapping
if u dont mind



thanks for reading nd appreciating our work
wll surely pm u when we wll update next

we wll try our best that u wll be entertained throughout ths journey 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lilakumariacnw

Wow...nice update..kuts...
Khushi is totally in love...she forgot her bag... Wah... Thats confirmatory sign for fact, that she is in love...
Nw arnav is in EGO mood... HW DaRe yOu ShYaM..??..uurrghh...
Loved that scene wen khushi took shelter behing arnav... Arnav protecting her from his evil looks...
Her confession was... Hayyee... Total filmy...i loved it...( i wish i can see all these in film with barun & sanaya as lead... Would my wish ever fulfill..)
She is willing to kiss him... Hayee...i am bit scared too... That evil shyam can be very cunning... So a bit scared... Make arnav win... Let them kiss... Actually i want khushi to kiss him in public... Later they can kiss in private...( just a reader's wish...)...
Eagerly waiting for next update...continue soon plzzz...



i just luvd ur comment di
i too want arnav to win 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
superbbb update ...waiting 4 next one ...😊😊😊😊😊

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