uniqe collab|Pyar ki khasti,arhi ki masti #1 (COMPLETED)

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#531

part 6
awesome...
she has told him her feelings...
that creep is really so disgusting...
cont soon dear...

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saranya

@Sarah_Jothi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#532

omg kuts...

lovely yaar...lovely...

**kushi apology...😳

**arnav's anger...ooh i so loved ths angry man..☺️.

**shyaam... frgt him... 🤬

**his attitude... superb...

**their hot talks...fast and furious... sparkling... 👍🏼

**her confession!!!

im dead...

i cn kiss u cz i love u...

who wont be stunned hearng ths... 😛

**be ready to kiss me... now i seriously want u to write tat kissing part... 😆 momo & shivi baby...no harm... u r awesum writers stil wen it cums dwn to naughtiness my kuts steal the shw always...

i mean alwaysss 😳

update the nxt chap asap...

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crizal

@crizal

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#533

Originally posted by: kuts

thanks baby.. 🤗

welcm 😳

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saranya

@Sarah_Jothi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#534

Originally posted by: crizal

welcm 😳

yep i agree... so beautifully written...

romantic rock star ⭐️

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meenaluma

@meenaluma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#535

awesome update

kushi confessed arnav

that shyam he is going to get nicely from arnav

there is no need for worries as asr is there

loved the update a lot

cant wait for next part

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--MISHTEE--

@--MISHTEE--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#536

Read all d parts in one go
my god u three make an amazing team
missed u trivedhishraddha (hope d spelling is right)
glad to have u back
story Is moving really fast and interesting
addictive nd very beautifully written
It was full of entertainment entertainment nd entertainment

Hope u r satisfied with my comment
pls pm me wen u update
do reply for d comment by scrapping
if u dont mind

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lilakumariacnw

@lilakumariacnw

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#537

Wow...nice update..kuts...
Khushi is totally in love...she forgot her bag... Wah... Thats confirmatory sign for fact, that she is in love...
Nw arnav is in EGO mood... HW DaRe yOu ShYaM..??..uurrghh...
Loved that scene wen khushi took shelter behing arnav... Arnav protecting her from his evil looks...
Her confession was... Hayyee... Total filmy...i loved it...( i wish i can see all these in film with barun & sanaya as lead... Would my wish ever fulfill..)
She is willing to kiss him... Hayee...i am bit scared too... That evil shyam can be very cunning... So a bit scared... Make arnav win... Let them kiss... Actually i want khushi to kiss him in public... Later they can kiss in private...( just a reader's wish...)...
Eagerly waiting for next update...continue soon plzzz...

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shivi.10rocks

@shivi.10rocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#538

Originally posted by: --MISHTEE--
Read all d parts in one go
my god u three make an amazing team
missed u trivedhishraddha (hope d spelling is right)
glad to have u back
story Is moving really fast and interesting
addictive nd very beautifully written
It was full of entertainment entertainment nd entertainment

Hope u r satisfied with my comment
pls pm me wen u update
do reply for d comment by scrapping
if u dont mind

thanks for reading nd appreciating our work
wll surely pm u when we wll update next

we wll try our best that u wll be entertained throughout ths journey 😉

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shivi.10rocks

@shivi.10rocks

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#539

Originally posted by: lilakumariacnw
Wow...nice update..kuts...
Khushi is totally in love...she forgot her bag... Wah... Thats confirmatory sign for fact, that she is in love...
Nw arnav is in EGO mood... HW DaRe yOu ShYaM..??..uurrghh...
Loved that scene wen khushi took shelter behing arnav... Arnav protecting her from his evil looks...
Her confession was... Hayyee... Total filmy...i loved it...( i wish i can see all these in film with barun & sanaya as lead... Would my wish ever fulfill..)
She is willing to kiss him... Hayee...i am bit scared too... That evil shyam can be very cunning... So a bit scared... Make arnav win... Let them kiss... Actually i want khushi to kiss him in public... Later they can kiss in private...( just a reader's wish...)...
Eagerly waiting for next update...continue soon plzzz...

i just luvd ur comment di
i too want arnav to win 😉