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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update hridey...
So arnav gave her lift...wow... & dialoques...i always loved that dialoque...its my most favorite...
Uurrghh...creep shyamm...uurrgghh... Dont u dare touch u *******...
Plzz plzz plzz... Dont even let him come anywer near her... Plzzz
Dont worry khushi our hero haina...woh ayengi...
But khushi... U should have minded his warning...
Thanks hridey for d wonderful update...
Plzz continue soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lilakumariacnw

<font size="4">Nice update hridey...
So arnav gave her lift...wow... & dialoques...i always loved that dialoque...its my most favorite...
Uurrghh...creep shyamm...uurrgghh... Dont u dare touch u *******...
Plzz plzz plzz... Dont even let him come anywer near her... Plzzz
Dont worry khushi our hero haina...woh ayengi...
But khushi... U should have minded his warning...
Thanks hridey for d wonderful update...
Plzz continue soon...
</font>


this update is written by shivi.10 rocks
i wrote the previous chapter...
this was for chap5 or chap4
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ..hrideyy..

Okay okay now u took it the correct way the way i thought...
Just the shyam thing was different ... But our thoughts matched 98% and i liked the huge update.
I know mine was short but kya karo i am cought with studies...
But u rocked..
And this was totally the way it should be ...
A lovely collage love story...
And yaa NK was right agg duno taraf barabar lagi hai...
Bus iss agg ko bujhne mat dena...
Kuch toh hua hai...
Abe NK kuch nahi pyaar ho gaya hai..
A super duper update
khushi realized her love hope sok arnav will also do tat soon...

Loved the update...

Update soon...
Update soon...

Shivi u really rocked...



thanks dear
mai to is aag ko kabhi bujhne na du

m glad u lykd d update
nd nk part ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shanon

Awesome update.

What to tell yaar feeling butterflies in my stomach...
When it comes to my two buddies shradha and shivi they are always romantic... Great update gals...

Nk's dialogues is so hilarious and his songs are so perfect with the situation...

Bloody shyam showed his real face... glad that arnav come to her rescue at the moments...

Wow now I am in arshi's dream land I am in love with arnav...
Kya karo woh bandha itna hot hain... I'm drolling...


Thnx dearies for the update and thnx in advance for the pm.



thanks di for such a lovely comment
m glad u lykng my work
😳
nd ya m indeed a romantic person

i hope everyone s enjoyng nk's role nd dialogues
he s d raazdaar of arnav afterall

nd arnav who dosen't drool over him
haaye
ur welcome di
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shivi.10rocks



omg why ths
didn't u lyk d update?


wht made u thnk tat way...😲 i loved evry single bit of it...😉

arnav's concern😉

kushi's madness😉

arnav- kushi verbal war..

kushi's realisation 😳

arnav's ignorance fr kushi.. 😲

nk's teasing...😃

aman - la bond😳

sheetal entry😆

kushi's jealosy😆

shyam been designd by arnav's arms... wow i loved tat description... 😆 👏 👏 👏

finally kushi's confession...😳

the way she felt that nail marks...☺️

their tight hug...☺️

their bike ride...awww adorable..😳

and finally last but nt the least..

im in love wit u arnav... i love u... ☺️

ths line flattered me and it caught hold of my whole brain tats y i mentioned it alone as its like icing on cake... 😆

i loved the entire chap dolly... hats off fr ur effort...👏 👏 👏

lovely chap...just like u... 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ..hrideyy..

ek aur comment toh banta hai..

i liked the way u incorporated the highlite of my update in ur's the family diologue of khushi...
liked the line of khushi
arnav if u will leave me i will die..
and all u r my family.

an indirect confession of love...

hope too see more masti in this pyaar ki kashti of arshi...
wah wah kya ryhme bani... (pats on my back)(sew how shamless i am lolzz tats wat i am )
ahivi rocks u totally rocked saying this again...

and aur kya bolo said everything
now i am tired chalo will me tommorow for spamming...
byeee tace care...
stay beautiful at heart kyun shraddha di agree or not.



ya i too lykd d way i was able to connect it wth urs
nd ya it was indeed a silent conession that he means everythng to her.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ..hrideyy..

i gave two long comments...
nobody will appreciate me...

chalo i will myself appreciate my
*pats on my back*
once again...

hope u enjoyed the comments by me...
ab pakka wala byee...
meet u again... very soon..
if i will be alive after studying mathematics :-(



lol u commented so much
now atleast click lyk button on my update
😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
un res on page 65..
it was damm long man!! i mean the update.. no GUTTER .. LOL...

and oh God.. am going nuts.. LOL

i LOVE u..🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

ROFL!!
🤣

😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh... Shivi dear...awesome... Awesome...
Love u ... For giving such a long update...
On ur face shyam...u creep... U ****...u *** ...u ******...
I love this arnav... He is sooo sweet...loved d way he caried khushi back...
He is soo caring... Khushi's dialoque was superb dear... Clap...clap...
Loved that hug... That scene was emotional... I had tears...
Great writting dear... Its a writter's power to make a reader cry... U did it... Hope everything will be fine nw... I am loving this NK... Have always loved him... Last scene... Wow...khushi is in love... Hope she confess soon... Hope arnav wont disappoint her...
Waiting arshilisious update... More...&...more...
Plz continue soon...waiting...

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