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Posted: 12 years ago
omg fab update am just loving this ff. Aww it was so much hilarious too. Plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Eee please don't discontinue na :/ I live this story!! Such a good plot!!!! Nice update awwwing manvi is falling for virat n that boy have no clue :/ sighs!!!! :D looking forward to te next one continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update yaar! hmm manvi is feeling jealous n his words affects her now! woah new twist in da story! I like it😉 n dat little lesbo part just cracked me up😆 so virat was making out na now send some really hot guy to manvi's rescue b4 virat n make jealous 😛 n continue soon!
Edited by sindhu4karanika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG...ur stories...r just FAB!!!!!👏
i have been reading the whole day nly ur stories...!!!😃
its just awsome...❤️
can u plz send me pm fr the nxt part...!!😊
i luved it!!❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsm updt in your superb writing style... loved it to the core... yeahhh !!! manvi gt jealous and then fainted too... I hope nothing is wrong with her instead of Loveria ...:)) And making virat worried like that fr that long was the best part... I totally enjoyed it... virat got his punishment fir ignoring mannu... great... cont soon pls... am eager to read the next part...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 15
This is the last time I am posting this SS on IF. After this it will be in my blog which will be password protected. I will make one final pm list and after that no matter how many pms you send me or comments you post you will not be added.

As soon as I spotted her my heart skipped a beat. There was Manvi passed out on a rock looking pale and sick. I ran as fast as I could and swiftly lifted her in my arms. She opened her eyes a bit and gave me a weak smile. "Thank god you are here. I was scared I'll get raped in this dark corner." She laughed at her own joke. Jeez typical Manvi. She can barely talk and yet she is cracking jokes and let me tell you I didn't find it funny at all. Given the situation, her joke didn't seem far off. What if some psycho had spotted her passed out in this corner? Even thinking about it gave me shivers.

"You are stupid. I don't even know why I am friends with you." I basically yelled at her causing her to flinch at my words.

Okay I admit I shouldn't have yelled at her especially when she was already not feeling well but I couldn't help it. What the f was she thinking? Running off to some creepy corner in the beach and getting me worried for over 5 hours!? Heights of irresponsibility.

"Put me down." She said sternly. I didn't have it in me to argue with her. If I'd go on I would end up yelling at her again and I didn't want to make her feel worse so I set her down but I didn't let her go completely. I still had my arms around her waist. Man this girl needs some food in her- she is so light and petite.

She tried to move away from me and stand on her own but I was adamant and I wrapped my arms around her waist whilst I held her hand with my other hand.

"Let go Virat." She struggled to get my hands off her and in the process almost fell down.

Okay I'm not standing here arguing with this stupid, crazy girl. Shaking my head at her stubbornness I lifted her again, ignoring her punches on my chest.

"Virat I can walk. Put me down. Viraaattt. What the f**k is your problem?? Viraaattt put me down. I hate you. You son of a ... You are a jerk, dipshit. I hate you so hard." She kept yelling insults at me but I couldn't care less.

We finally reached her room and I set her on her bed.

I was expecting her to yell at me more instead she just sat there staring at the ceiling. *sigh* I can never tell whats going on in that little head of hers. I sat next to her and held her hands.

"You want to tell me what is going on and why you ran off to psycho's paradise?" I asked her gently.

Manvi always confides in me. There isn't a thing that she won't tell me so naturally I expected her to spill the beans. What happened next shocked me and to be honest it hurt me too. She removed her hands from mine and shifted away from me. "I am tired Virat. Leave me alone."

I don't know what to make of this. Why is she suddenly so distant from me? What happened today that totally changed her? "Manvi.." I tried but she stopped me. "Virat please leave me alone. I want to sleep." Without another word she covered herself with a duvet and laid on the bed.

I stood up and after one last glance at her sleeping form I left the room.

SONG: Heart attack (demi lovato)- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gLGtKw_UQCk

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Posted: 12 years ago
Ok! So by gvng short update to us only u cn make us please cz atlearpt u updatedit after a quite gud time bt nyways how r u feeling nw?

Regarding update i thnk its so obvious so how amazing it is...virat rescuing her holding her in hs arms n she is being typical manvi!we cn expect tis only frm her only bt it was nice!

Hmn suddn change in manvi towards is it indicating smethng has changed for hm frm her side...eeeks i thnk sme likness ir being developping! Dam eagerly waiting for next update of tis all other stories of ur!

Thank u
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Posted: 12 years ago
eeeks looks like our manvi has fallen for virat n he has no clue abt dis! wanna c how our Casanova is gonna handle dis!😉 how r u now? aren't u suppose to be resting surfer? be careful yaar. p.s pls update break my heart...
n don't forget to add me to ur blog readers list!😳
Edited by sindhu4karanika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh han do add me to ur other stories' pm list also plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
heyo nisha...i hope ur doing fine now..n thnk u for the update ..i need not say how good it was since u never fail to make it one of the bests every time..I'm kind of loving this distance bw them right now as it would bring them closer i suppose..nice work n continue soon..take care!

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