SS Manvi and Virat from the beginning part15,16

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Afshan

@afshanmk093

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

hehehe the characterization of manvi is superb beyond ny words! the bond btw the sis is the highlight of the epi! so nw Jeevs hs also here oh ya how could i forget mr.casanova too

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Pyaasi Chudail

@PyaasiChudail69

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

nisha this was so good yaar brilliant work i m totally in love with maanvi's character and the way u expressed bow down to ur writthng skills omg viraat in Maanvi's party xcited to read further

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Jannat

@Jannat94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

wow oh Nisha
Freaking superb update
Loved the sister bonding and teasing sequence was also too gud
I loved the manvi character in this ff
Virat was here in her party wow oh
Waiting 4 ur next part... Update Soon
Thanx 4 d pm dear

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Syed695

@Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Superb Nisha..⭐️! Maanvi's character in this ff is great...emtionally stiff..right word told my her younger sister...but it was so nice that she cant see her sister in any problem no any body speaking ill abt her...n the way she made the girl apologize was hilarious...n her thoughts as well...one unique piece.😆

okay nw this was a girl's party wht exctly is virat doing there..?Is he there to irritate her further or gate crash her party...??well we have to wait for the next update.,..Thanks for the PM!

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ammu

@Paruvirman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

hey..nice update..

i luv this maanvi..

and misty and jeevikas teasing..

hilarious.😆.so jeevi is here..then dere will be more fun..

nw waiting for the party 😊 ..

plz pm me..

i snd u a buddy request..😊

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vaarya

@Vaarya53

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Wow nisha..had been waiting for the next part n girl seriously i think the wait was worth!! Seriously yaar where do u get these ideas from...im speecless...it was simply amazing the way u portrayed manvi's sisterly love ...her anger...ghosh it was the best part for me n not to mention jeevika's entry n the way they r partying like maniacs!! It was woow!! N u stopped at virat's entry ...now cant wait to see the ambience of the party after that!!! Plzz continue asap n plzzz pm me wen u update...n if need to send a buddy request to u plzz do let me know ...thnks:)

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preity_d

@preity_d

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

loved the swiming thing...
jeevs returned wow will be real masti
loved mist manvi bonding ha ha
omg virat is there in the party and manvi drunk omg

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FlowerHater

@FlowerHater

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

first of all thanks 4 d pm! about the upd8 I would say that I really wanted manvi to show that *ahem * ahem* her place and you made her do this in this upd8! luvd the sisterly bond and bickering as well and surprise surprise what Virat is doing in the party that too at Manvi's house!!!! looks like "some Dhamakas" are in store!!!!

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saemeen

@shabsem

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Amazing update. .really liked manvi teasing her sister. though she tease her so much she cant tolerate anyone saying wrong to her thats gr8. .loved d trio hug on d floor. .thanks 4 pm

Edited by shabsem - 12 years ago