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missmystic

@missmystic

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Hilarious update

I just loved how manvi spoke back to blondie haha

and virat calling manvi shorty, awww so cute

great update as always

your updates bring a smile to my face

thanx for the pm :)

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naina

@naina927

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

hey nisha thanks for updating it...

mping wid joy wen u pmed me its heading was break my heart n i was jumping wid joy n then it was a lol moment... 😃

coming to the update it was fab like always... 👏

virat n manvi met each other... woww... 😃

paige n manvi convo was also fun n not to miss manvi's frnds... they were just jealous thta virta the cassanova is paired wid manvi who in turn is reallt not interested in him...

virat called manvi " shorty " 😆

manvi 5'6 really...??? i think she is taking sum medicine n stuff... 😆

so paige that bimbo isnt virat's gf n he said that in front of paige only... 😲

looking forward to the nxt update...

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Wow!! Awesome!!
Loved it!! Superb update!!
Love how u portrayed manvi's character!!!
Virman's first interaction was amazing!!!
Can't wait 4 the next update!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!

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mary9053

@mary9053

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

the story and the concept is quite interesting
it would be a great pleasure to read the upcomin parts
plz pm me when u update!!

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Kanwal_chohan

@Kanwal_chohan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Lol loved your update loving manvis anger it reminds me of
Someone Lol poor Alex and the rest of her friends have
To deal with it love the nicknames manvi had for virat and paige
Loving manvis character Lol she wanted some of her mums genes
She wanted to cry damn it was awesome loved the ending can't
Wait to read more loved it thanks for the pm do continue soon
And do pm me

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Wow nisha...superb update...loved the virman first conversation...haha...manvi was halirious... 😆 ...the way she talk to virat girlfriend was superb...loved the whole update to the core...plz continue soon..wanna noe how virman will become friends...thank u so much for the pm... 😊

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shona v p

@Shona1907

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

🤣 i love dis Manvi... Seriously i jst luv her attitude... Poor girl is stuck wid creepy ppl around... Ok wen she called that bimbo 'hey blondie' i was laughing like mad 🤣 i was imagining da whole scene and Manvi is super cute... I like dis style of ur writing wer u write how dey are talking in der head lol its funny and light and gives more insight to da character... Now that she said she hates virat i guess he'll be interested to noe why... Ummm bt why did he say bimbo is not his gf? Is she faking around? Whatever bt i jst luv dis Manvi, super cool!! 😉 thanx for da pm Nisha

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ammu

@Paruvirman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

heyy..i just luv ur ss..😊

like the way u describe maanvi's character..she telling abt her sister.her breeakup history r so hilarious..😆

maanvi's character is totally different..and like always one thing remains the same..hating virat..

coming to this update..luv manvi's rply to that blondie..😆

and virman's interaction is so virmaanish..

do continue soon..n plz pm me..😊

Edited by Paruvirman - 12 years ago

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MaebyFunke

@MaebyFunke

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

I stared at the mirror waiting for tear drops. Maybe if I cry I will feel better? Today is probably the first time in my life I wished I had some of mom's genes in me, then perhaps I wouldn't be staring at the mirror with dry eyes. 🤣 🤣

The first paragraph itself is a blockbuster LOL. I love Manvi's character in this story, her comebacks, attitude, the way she reacts to the people around her everything is making me love her more and more. The whole lot of Manvi sounds like you huh, excluding the Virat's part I guess this everything is your story!

Awesome work with this! Update soon hun! You've made him impatient..I really can't wait!