Virman-ff-two left feet - part 18-ii

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naina

@naina927

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#471

read part 14 (ii) and part 15 together...

and i loved it anu...

seriously u have made me speechless again...

i always knew viat would react like this but it is evident he is not ready for giving up manvi at any cost...

manvi n virat patch up canteen scene was fab...

and manvi's dialogues... uff they were way too manvish...

cont soon n keep rocking...

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Geminimanna

@Geminimanna

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#472

Hey Anu,

Wonderful update...Thank God Virat decided to support Manvi. I was so desperate to find out about his feelings. Thanx for this lovely update and PM.

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Kanwal_chohan

@Kanwal_chohan

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#473

Wow such a fast update loved it specially how
Virat accepted his baby Lol @ what manvi screamed
In the canteen beautiful update loved it continue soon
And do pm me

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Kiekeboe

@Kiekeboe

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#474

What a wonderful update, such a caring and loving Virat...

I liked how Virat came to Maanvi, comforted and calmed her ❤️

Happy that they are staying at the Vadhera house.

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jazzy.malhotra

@jazzy.malhotra

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#475

its been ages since i commentd on ur work. i luv all of ur ffs. i startd followin ur work on fb nd now tat im in IF i follow it here too. ur works r fabulous.

u updtd 3 consecutive days nd i couldn't b happier. i luv the direction this story is headed towards.

virat is imperfectly perfect. i dont knw if tat makes sense. he is not cheesy yet so romantic in ur story. im luvin it ;)

Edited by jazzy.malhotra - 12 years ago

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deepika03

@deepika03

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#476

nice...i wish they manage to balance both virat and manvi's lives...whether they be together or far...

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#477

superb update!!
Loved it!!
Virat's concern for Manvi, Manvi's pain, everything is well portrayed!!
loved the canteen part, especially their conversation!!
Manvi is so sweet!!
Plz update soon!!
Will be waiting for the next part!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!

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Riya

@sanjana24

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#478

very nice plzzz update tomorrow😉👍🏼

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virali

@ViRaLi13

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#479

Another awesome Update Again! loved it... pm me when you continue...😊

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#480

As promised...Proper comment..Goldie banne k khushi...i din tyoe in much...Coming to the Update...! Loved it..from Virat eagerly wanting to speak to Maanvi and sort out and explain what his POV is...n in the end he couldnt see her in pain and accept and decided to go with the flow...And their small lovey dubby moment...Love the flow and way u have progressed the story...👍🏼!

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