Virman-ff-two left feet - part 18-ii

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Kiekeboe

@Kiekeboe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

*res

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I am first ... yes!

OOhhh Virat ... what did you do???? Poor Maanvi does not know what she did wrong...

very touching update and thx for the pm 😊

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preetipc

@preetipc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Loved Virat's confusion on his changing feelings and attraction towards her.Poor girl my Manvi😭😭😭.Hate to see her feeling rejected.Loved the way u showed them struggling with their feelings.Loved Virat more in this update for a change.Waiting for the next . Thanks for the pm😊

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Bhabani90

@Bhabani90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

U hav portrayd da emotns superbly..

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Great update Anu.. You described their emotions beautifully👏.. Poor Manvi.. She is blaming herself for the incident.. She felt rejected because of Virat's silent treatment 😭.. I really want them to understand each other's feelings.. Hope they wont drift away from each other after this.. Thank you so much for the pm.. Take care 😊

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Shivani Rajput

@ShivRajput

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Omggg... Awesome update... She is feeling rejected... Y Virat is acting like dis.. Loved it yar... ❤️
Fab update... 👍🏼

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Awesome update as always...everything have been described so well...especially their emotions...poor maanvi...feeling bad for her...she is feeling rejected... 😭 ...hope virman sort out their differences soon...continue soon if possible...plz continue saccha pyaar also if possible too...will be eagerly waiting for your updates...thank you so much for the pm... 😊

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naina

@naina927

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

wat an update dear...

read the two parts together...

i am ryt now speechless... so do excuse me thid tym...

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Syed695

@Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Nice n Emotional update..! Felt bad for maanvi..seriously u have described her emotions so wel..Virat has just realized 1% of wht he feels for maanvi n i.e. attraction...i guess he does...Thnks for the pm..!

Happy New Year..~!

P.S: watin 4 SP Update..!

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Superb update!!
Very emotional!!
Loved it, continue soon!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!

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preity_d

@preity_d

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Posted: 12 years ago

#150

here virat himself confused of his new feelings... he was so confused how could he be attracted to the girl whom he had see from almost childhood.then the kiss thing...very beautifully shown
and Manvi's guilt... how much she was craving for his a few words ...
really you showed their mental conditions very well
now waiting for the next...hope soon the two realize their love for each other
weldone Anu

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