ARHI TS: BETRAYED note on page 1&43

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abika

@abika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

wow amazing intresting

is kid really arnavs

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@AJlovesArshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

I M FEELING SO BAD FOR ARNAV!!! 😭 😭 😭 😭

CONTINUE SOON...!!!

Edited by AJlovesArshi - 12 years ago

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ashred12

@ashred12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

it is arnav's fault...if he hadnt tried d shortcut, their lives wudnt ve been destroyed...

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--MISHTEE--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

update nd pls
finish it soon
u promised

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Loved d update nd
d ending d story was well written
u should continue to write more stuff
like this

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silent_whispers

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

ts completed on page 23. please see and give me your views

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Muskaan_87

@Muskaan_87

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

amaizing update:)

thanks alot for thiss incredible and wonderful story:)

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jyothirmai chowdary koganti

@jyothirmai07

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

loved it
arnav fulfilled khushi's fantasy eventhough she went away from him hoping that one day she will be back
finally khushi is back and both are married and lived happily

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-MKM-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

AWSMMM 👏 👏
LOVED IT😃😃

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#170

okay wow that was something
sorry meant to say more but my mother dragged me away from here and finally got the chance to get back
wow he made her dream home come true
that was one beautiful mansion man and all what khushi dreamed of cool
omg to think he didnt betray her was such a relief
la was the one who betrayed him not the other way around
it was because of her arhi were separated her obsession for arnie the reason they couldnt be with each other
so he never slept with her but she used her pregnancy to trap him and told her father the half truth so he would make sure that arnie would be married to her
and he did that because la's father had threatened to ruin him and his fathers business which he couldnt let happen as he had already ruined his chances with khushi (or so he thought) but couldnt let her dream not come true
la at least you were ounished for all that you did to arhi
he actually tricked her into coming well he knew that she would come from wherever she is to see babuji right and he was correct
wow you sure added the twist there and what a twist
we finally had the happy ending we had hoped of now that the full truth was out
and they married had a daughter of whom all were very possessive of
as they are of khushi too especially our arnie here
and hope you will continue with more writing too
cheers for pm

Edited by chavvi16 - 12 years ago