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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: patie

wow jus luv d u descrive their feeling...wow
very deep & meaningful...luvd it👍🏼



thank you very much dear😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shivangi_Taarey

AWESOME UPDATE magha dii!!

Specially the TR part at Taayam's place.. loved it!

N Taayam bond.. Taani made a cake for them.. Awhhh!!!

N that jerk Veer.. I hate that Creep!!

Loved the update dii.. thankyou soo much for the pm and keep pming me when u update!!



thanks shivangi...ur comments means a lot to me...
taayam..i'd loved these two for always.
i'll sure update you.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow..loved your update!!!rey was so angry when taani ignored him...and rey felling taani s looking more angelic day by day was awesm...and taani making cake for whole gang was swt...taayam part was swt n cute.😳..n that looser veer😡!!hate him 🤢uski haadi pasli tudwa do rey ke haato se is ss mai plsss😃 !!n jaldi se update karo sab stories🥱
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Wow,megha ur superb yar...next part plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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GREAAAT UPDATE...!👏
update sooonnn plzz
n thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arina23

GREAAAT UPDATE...!👏

update sooonnn plzz
n thanks for the pm



thanks arina...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pari-luvstaarey

Wow,megha ur superb yar...next part plz



thanks pari...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: bags07

wow..loved your update!!!rey was so angry when taani ignored him...and rey felling taani s looking more angelic day by day was awesm...and taani making cake for whole gang was swt...taayam part was swt n cute.😳..n that looser veer😡!!hate him 🤢uski haadi pasli tudwa do rey ke haato se is ss mai plsss😃 !!n jaldi se update karo sab stories🥱



thanks bags...i soo love ur comments...but when r u gonna update??otherwise i'll not update ever...😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys..third part...okay get me enough comments and i'll again update soon..i'm so loving this...hope you all enjoy...

PART 3

Taani is shocked as wellhams had refused to have dinner, after the evening snacks they had clearly told that they don't wanna have anything.

Taani: But aap logon ne toh…

Veer: Koi written statement diya tha kya… ya phir tumhare college mein guests ko ye treatment milta hai, ki you don't even serve dinner…. Maximum a hour and dinner should be ready otherwise we're gonna complaint about it…got it!!

With his statement he left the room with a smirk, leaving tension behind on everyone's face.

Aashi: Ye toh limit cross types ho gayi, humne insist bhi kiya tha tub toh mana kar diya tha, aur ab….ab hum inke liye khana kahan se laye….canteen bhi band hai, aur college mess bhi….ab kya hum inhe khud khana banakar khilayenge…. And upar se ye log complaint karne ki dhamki types de rahe hain…

Swayam: it's the limit, how they can do this…

Taani:*looks thoughtful, a bit disturbed* bhai, you don't worry….i'll handle it, you guys have enough to concentrate.

Swayam: Okay, but what you are gonna do…?at least please tell me…. What are you gonna do…?

Taani: Bhai, don't get hyper….but I guess I have to cook food for them…. I can't put our college's reputation at stake. But please don't worry…. I'll manage…. It's my responsibility.

Swayam was about to snap back at her, he couldn't digest the fact that his sister will cook for those jerks….she's GS not a cook… but before than this Rey came in between….. isn't talking to that jerk wasn't enough that she'll cook for them…why not go on a dinner date with him….

"Why the hell would you do anything like this….i'm the AGS, leave the matter in my hands… I'll do it….tumhe itna shauk kyon hai un bloody loosers ke liye cooking karne ke liye…hmm…" his outrage couldn't stop him from this time, and he shouted these words at her.

Though Swayam had swore not to interfere ever, but this time he did…. "Taani….sorry for interference but what rey said…..I have to, sorry but I agree with Rey…. I mean I won't let you do it…. In any case… we'll just order the food from somewhere….got it…" Swayam said in an authoritative tone…. Which Taani knew she couldn't deny ever.

"But bhai…."she still tried to protest, but Swayam continued and gathered her in a hug…. "Look you know what as GS, you may be my boss, but as I am a bit elder than you, you can't ignore me….and yeah you know what I can't even think that my sister will cook for these jerks…. Now toh I can see that I'm privileged that you cook for me with so much love…. And main kisi aire gaire ko ye privilege nahin lene de sakta. Got it…" he completed while everyone was doing awww…. Seeing the siblings love.

Then Swayam said to Aashi…. "Aashi I need you for some papers, so will you please stay for few minutes…." And before he completed his sentence boys hands were indicating chemistry, and rey has to put them down forcibly.

"Yeah sure…"Aashi agreed and Taani excused herself from there as she has to do other preparations for dinner, as it was quite late and mess helpers were not there.

Rey called a restaurant and ordered the food with a note that he wants it as soon as possible…. And she was doing the arrangements, then rey too thought to join her as he wanted to be with her, although it was a useless hope but still….. that they won't fight this time.

Taani went into the kitchen and starting to organize everything… she was doing it, but she felt tired, she had been so tired doing all the work by herself….. her encounters with rey sucked out all the energy from her. She was so tired of everything, but then now she had admitted and consoled herself that this never ending torture was her fate…. To be in front of him, to see him, yet to stay more than miles apart. To live without him, and still finding him always against her…..alas….what had she done to deserve such a cursed fate??

"So everyone got the plan…."asked Veer from his two best friends….

"Yes…. Everything will be fine…"they answered in unison.

"Okay then…" he said and left the room.

*Veer POV*

How can I forget her…..there is something so wonderful, so magnetic about her…. How much he wanted her, only he knew…..she was an amazing combination of cuteness, innocence and hotness…. He had decided….at least for once, he'll taste her….by any means…. He couldn't forget her…her prominent curves, her full lips which seemed full of heavenly nectar, her mesmerizing gaze, her engrossing smile, her sweet, gentle voice, her intoxicating smelling hair…..everything…. it doesn't matter that the whole college girls may be drooling over him, but he wants her…..

Thinking so, he started to walk towards kitchen, and quietly entered it. Suddenly someone switched off the lights and other guy shut the door from outside, leaving Taani and veer in the kitchen.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yeee...i m first. ...pm se pehle hi padh liya ...love taayam...how swayam dont want her sister not to cook for the jerks ...and rey too...and that bloody creep veer...he want to taste taani once...how cheap thinking...now u have to update ASAP...in the kitchen veer and taani...want reyam to beat up that creep veer...
Edited by Dipu_taarey - 12 years ago

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