Taarey SS: Veer *Completed* - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow this is really good just read all the parts in one go! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey its so awesome love the way in which you show rey's feeling its so heart touching dear plz update soon and ya don't forget to pm me when you update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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all parts were awesome aashna 👏hate that veer😡 and love my taarey❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gr8
the story is going gr8😊😊😊
update fastly😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aashna plz update na am eagerly waiting to read the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey it ws really vry nice...n.pls update soon n ols pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey aashna plz update na!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys, i am sorry. I am a little busy. I promise me aaj sham tak update kr dugi. Or sbko pm krugi. K?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Al da 3 parts r so nice...rey's feeling was so heart touching
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys, I am updating, but warning that this is just setting the environment. So, I am not sure if it will be interesting enough. Next update, soon soon soon.

A new day started. Rey woke up. He remembered last night. But he felt like that was a dream. It was too good to be true. Usake karib rehana bhi, was like asking too much.
He still felt like sleeping peacefully. Neend puri nahi hui thi. A proof that whatever happened was not a dream. Maybe. Ajib lag raha tha subhe subhe, jab wo sab wapis yad aaya. Use esa kyun lagta tha ki Taani usake liye feel karati he, use trust karati he. Jab Taani ne khud keh diya tha ki... 'he used her'. Phir wo thoughts kaha se aaye. Maybe wishful thinking? His imagination?
He sighed heavily sitting on the bed. Why am I so messed up? Sochana bandh kar Rey. Just don't think about her. Agar usane khud kaha he, jo bhi kaha he, then stop overthinking it. He sighed and shaked his head trying to convince himself again and again.
Irritating. Why should he feel dreamy with just her thoughts? It felt like falling in love every second again and again with her. And when there is no happy ending, then why should he give himself such wrong hopes. Since when do I live in an imaginary world, trying to analyse every moment spent with her. Trying to conclude all her thoughts from her every movements.
He irritatedly got up and freshended up. And with the team went to the basket ball court.

The welhelms got ready. In their practice cloths. It was time to practice. They all went to the basket ball court. Again ready to practise as much as possible. Veer was in a determind mood right now. Ready to humiliate anyone who got in his way. Ready to win. Welhelms are winners afterall. This match was nothing to them. They could easily crush those baby players of the great St. Louis college.
They all made their way to the basket ball court, ready to practise. But Veer's good mood was ruined by the sight in front of his eyes. The basket ball court was occupied. The St. Louis boys were there already, playing around. Veer was angered. He was not used to this. They always get whatever they want. They were born to win, the way is not important, what matters is winning. And they win all the time. They get their way all the time.

There was a huge group of girls there, looking disheartended. They all had woken up early to see the welhelms hotties practise again. But getting up early at 4, was of no use. Some girls even cursed their own time under their breaths,
irritated. They saw the welhelms standing there.
Veer saw those girls, drooling over them, giggling and trying to get their attention. He gave his wolfy evil smile seeing them. Seemed like only his good looks were enough to get all of them against their own team. It didn't surprise him much. He knew his way around girls, how to get their attention. He always got attention.
He narrowed his eyes and took a quick scan of the girls. Hmmm. Someone was missing.
The GS girl wasn't there. He got little down and frustrated. He wasn't used to it. It was his first time that the girl he showed interest wasn't giving any attention to him. This angered him.
All these girls, he could easily get. But he wanted her. She had made this game, the most exciting game in his life, from the very first meeting of theirs. He could get any girl. But he wanted her. He was excited by this challenge. He looked at those two boys. All the St. Louis boys had noticed them and stopped playing. Including those two bodyguards of 'TAANI'. He smirked as her name came into his mind.
The welhelms moved into the court.

Swayam and the team looked at them. Just in time, when they noticed those welhelms, they stopped playing. No use showing them, how untrained players they were.
Swayam(in an undertone to all): Guys, compose yourself. Just be confident. Don't get disheartened and don't let them know anything about our practise okay?
Nil and Vicky exchanged angry glances at the welhelms entry and nodded quitely to Swayam. Bharat and Amar too. Rey too.
Rey felt angry at the sight of Veer. But he kept control over himself. No use fighting for silly reasons.
Veer and the team stayed face to face with them.
Veer: (in full attitude) Tum log yaha kya kar rahe ho.
Vicky: (same tone) Tut tut. Hamari billi hamko hi meow. Ye college hamara he, aur basket ball court bhi.
W member 1: billi what?
Amar: (laughing lightly) Pehle standald ki hindi bi nahi aati aul match kya kheloge?
W member 2: Hmm?
Rey (In angry dazzler attitude): Rehne do guys. Inhe samjhane me hame hamara time waste nahi karana chahiye. (Coming face to face with Veer) Yaha tum logo ka attitude nahi chalega. Here, first come first practise. You wait for your own time.
Veer: (with his angry irritating expression) Itana attitude to tum logo ke liye bhi achha nahi he. (narrowing his eyes) Esa na ho ki isaka result bahot bhari pad jaye.
Swayam: Hey, that will be decide in the match
Bharat: Haan, abhi jao kat lo yaha se.
Nil, Vicky, Amar, Bharat: Haan, chalo jao yaha se.
Veer: (angry, but then cooling down and smiling evilly) Dheere now. Tumhari friends ko nahi to pasand nahi aayega ki tum logo ne hamse ese bat ki. (indicating towards where Neha and girls were sitting) After all, we welhelms are there heroes. Don't you know?
All 4 got angry and came to hit them But Rey and Swayam stopped them.
Rey: Guys, guys guys. Cut it short. Lets not waste our time with these 'guests'.
Veer and team exchange watch out expressions to each other. Now, only the match will decide.
Veer and the team leaved.

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