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Ur welcum!!!!😊

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This story was just tooo, hot & romantic:)
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Originally posted by: aaaziiz

This story was just tooo, hot & romantic:)

😆 Thanks
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Afya, have you written something more!.?
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Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Afya, have you written something more!.?

No, I haven't , Vandana. Have been toing and froing if I should write. Currently I am enjoying reading some fiction. There are so many good writers in the forum.😊
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Originally posted by: sanjanaseth1994

awesome story... loved it!!!

Thank you😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Afya i am so enjoying this ride...

Chapter 1 - 5

I loved the way this SS started, the damn pool in Shantivan got finally used...and what a sweet brilliant scene you wrote out for us.
Loved every thing about it.
I enjoyed reading how arnav corners khushi to finally get her to call him just Arnav...bas and the lovely shopping addition was to die for.
Loved how this arnavji looked after the needs of his lovely wife.
And hats off to the brilliant redecorated room that you gave to Arnav and khushi...Now that looks like the bedroom of one of india's richest man who has a helicopter at his disposal 😆
And the bathroom was to die for, seriously that was one amazing rocking room that you gave them.
I loved how they baptised the bathroom for the first time. A blush worthy scene there totally. ☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chap 6 - 8

Can i just applaud you for bringing an extremely important social issue to you update. It was incredible. And it was great how you connected that for Arnav to realise what a arrogant ass he was the first time he met khushi.
I loved the fact that they revisited purple orchid once again in style 😆 and once again full marks on bringing out the confident hottie ASR who will punch the crap out of rowdy's who trouble the ladies close to him or his family.
Loved the entire hospital visit and my antenna is up wondering what might be the fruit of this visit 😳 and it was amazing reading the different facets of their married life, the longing the desires so beautifully penned down by you.
Loved the way Arnav continued to look after Di but did not go in the total ASR mode well that i guess we have khushi to thank for.
Khushi first visit to the pool was so cute...
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ Kondhili

Thanks Liza for your detailed feedback. Loved reading them.

In this SS, I pretty much wrote out what I would have liked to see in the show. I am happy you enjoyed it.😊

Arnav-Khushi story had so much potential. But by the end it felt like it was being written by a 10 year old..

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