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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kendra

hey when r u updating??

i just love ur story!!
rishbala ,arshi and yuvreen r my fav.😃


Hey Hi...First of all thank you so much...it is lovely to know that you like my FF so much...and will update as soon as possible and ll send u a PM on the update..!!! 😃😃😃
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I know how difficult it is to adjust these 6 people into one update, but u just have done it perfectly, the story is just unique and ur writing is like icing on the cake. Continue soon

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Originally posted by: shobrakapooor

I know how difficult it is to adjust these 6 people into one update, but u just have done it perfectly, the story is just unique and ur writing is like icing on the cake. Continue soon


Thank you so much Shobra...and ya will continue soon..!!!! 😃😃😃
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this part was really awesum...I just luvd da way u r going on...do continue soon
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ohhh..a new ff..great! with all my fave couples..!!read parts 1, 2, 3..nice!! the way you're handling all charcters is good..
keep up the good work! n thanks for the pms
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great ff..the last part was pretty interesting..continue soon!
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[ Do not copy /paste or reproduce the materials or
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Part 6: Crazy-Romance-Confusion-Naughty-Emotion
Readers and lovely friends please do note one thing this part is not that very fab compared to the other parts of this FF...sorry but feeling very less creative these days...just trying my best to revive my creativity back...and hope to come back with a bang...!! But still one thing plase do let me know honestly about the part...criticize or appreciate but do something...😆 and ya also please let me know which is the best character...I have a small question for you guys at the end of the update...please do read it and answer it..!! 😉 Also note my apologies to Yuvreen fans because we have both Yuvraj and Suvreen in the update but we don't have them together...Sorry for that...!!


Airport Book Store (Sports Section):
Yuvraj (to himself): Shit…What did I do? Why did I have to talk that rude to her? Ma tho always keeps talking something or other like this, but what had gone wrong with me? How could I hurt someone like that?
Madhu was done choosing the cooking book she wanted to gift Padmini, she looked around to see if she could site Suvreen.
Madhu: Arey, Suvreen is no where around. Looks like she has some trouble in finding the right book. May be I should go help her out. (To the sales guy nearby) Excuse me, May I know where the Sports Section is?
SalesPerson: Mam, it is right there in that corner.
Madhu: Thank you.
She walks towards the sports section.
Airport Waiting Lounge:
RK: Madhubala, so you want to go to Mumbai right? The so called city of dreams, but that is not going to happen. I will not let you hurt Raj. (with a smirk)
He finds an airport cleaner standing nearby. He walks up to him and whispers something to him and the cleaner gives a feeble smile to him.
Here, Madhu again finds her lost. She does not understand where exactly the sports section was. She finds Kushi and Arnav lost in each other's eyes. She walks towards them.
Madhu: Excuse me?
Suddenly Arnav and Kushi come out of their trance and face Madhu. Arnav, again tries to cover his Arnav behind the ASR mask.
ASR: Yes, Ho…
Kushi, suddenly identifies Madhu. Before Arnav could complete his sentence she jumps in front of him.
Kushi: Arey Devi Maiyya. You are the one who helped me rescue that girl the other day, right?
Madhu: Ohh…Haan. Actually I wanted to know where the sports section is?
Arnav very well knew where the sports section is and he was about to answer.
Arnav: Sports Section is…
But again before he could complete.
Kushi: Why are you wasting your time asking this Laad Governor?
Arnav and Madhu: Excuse me?
Arnav was again filled with anger, while Madhu was smiling.
Arnav: What did you call me just now? Laad Governor?
Kushi: Haan Laad Governor. Because you are a big time Laad Governor. (Arnav was about to reply, when Kushi cuts him again) And ya I don't have all day to waste my time fighting with you. (To Madhubala) Come let us find the sports section ourselves.
Saying this she pulls Madhu along with her as she walks away in search of the sports section, leaving behind a furious Arnav.
But, suddenly she comes back running.
Kushi: Devi Maiyya, I completely forgot. Here take your this book. (Hands over Arnav the book he was reading before colliding into Kushi, and returns to her search of the sports section)
Wait, Wasn't Arnav angry some time back. But no, now he was smiling with amuzement. There was no one like the Kushi Kumari Gupta who could make the Arnav Singh Raizada angry, shocked, surprised and confused all at the same time. She was certainly the only one unique piece in the world. In Yuvi's words "Now she is the one who deserves to be ASR's girlfriend. Lavanya jaise tho hazaron mil jayengi. But it would be hard to find a girl like her. She best suits my bhai."
Arnav: Unbelievable. (while nodding his head)
Here in the waiting lounge, the cleaner walks upto Raj.
Cleaner: Thum Raj ho na?
Raj: Ji Haan?
Cleaner: Thumari Behan Madhu thumhe bhula rahi hein waha coffee shop ke paas.
Raj: Madhu didu ne??
Cleaner: Haan Haan Jaldi karo…wo kuch jaldi mein thi. (he wlaks from there)
Raj: Why did Didu call me there? May be she wants to buy something, yeh didu bhi na..
Raj starts walking towards the Coffee shop. RK who is seeing this from far has a smirk adorning his lips.
Here, Madhu and Kushi reach the sports section, they look around for Suvreen, but then are unable to find her anywhere around.
Madhu: Arey Suvi cannot be seen anywhere around. I don't know where this girl disappeared all of a sudden.
Kushi: Madhu you don't worry she will be somewhere around. I am sure we will be able to find her.
Suddenly they see Yuvraj standing there, murmuring something on his own. Both Madhu and Kushi immediately identify him, both in unison shout out "Yuvraj ji".
Yuvraj is startled suddenly. He turns around to find Madhu and Kushi staring at him.
Yuvraj: Kushi? Aur thum Madhubala ho na?
Kushi: Haan haan…you are right. This is Madhubala, but how come you both know each other?
Madhubala: Kushi that's a long story. We will talk about that later. (to Yuvraj) Yuvraj ji…
Yuvi: Arey what is this Yuvraj ji – Yuvraj ji from that time. I know you both are my juniors but then, please call me Yuvi or Yuvraj, no ji and stuff.
Madhu: Okay Yuvraj, I wanted to know if you have Suvreen around?
Yuvraj's face turns pale as soon as he hears Suvreen from Madhu. Madhu and Kushi both are confused due to the change in expression on Yuvi's face.
Yuvraj (to himself): Yeh kya? Why is Madhu asking about Suvreen? Isnt she supposed to be with her? Wait…if Suvreen is not with Madhu then where is she? (both concerned and afraid)
Annie was walking around the book store searching for Yuvi.
Annie: Now, where did this monkey disappear? Where else will he go, I am sure he might have hopped into the Sports section. When does he ever stay in one place?
She was walking murmuring all this to herself, when she suddenly collides into someone. She closes her eyes fearing to hit the ground.
Annie: Aaahha… (but she find herself resting in someone's arms)
She opens her eyes and finds that a guy had grasped her firmly. She was lost in those eyes, she could hear the violin playing the romantic Mohabatein tune. She was smiling just like a fool staring deep into the person standing in front of her. Suddenly something struck her. She straightens herself.
Annie: OMG…(overexcited) you are Anees Nair right? Yuvi's classmate?
Anees: Yes, but how do you know?
Annie: I found your picture in Yuvi's class photo.
Anees: Oh now I get it. That's what I was wondering how come Yuvi told you about me? I mean Yuvi and talking about me?? That is just impossible. (with a smirk) by the way what is your name beautiful?
Annie: Annie…Annie Singhania (Still lost in Anees)
Annes: Oh nice to meet you. Anyways got to go, if possible hope to meet you soon. Bye
Annie: Bye…(waving her hands as Anees walks from there)
After that Annie suddenly could hear some faint girl's voice crying. The voice was coming from the store room nearby, the door of which was left half open. Out of curiosity, Annie slowly moved towards the room.
Here in the sports section:
Madhu: What happened Yuvi? Why did your face turn all pale when I asked about Suvreen?
Yuvi: No nothing at all (pretends to act all innocent)
Kushi: Did you see Suvreen?
Yuvi: No…I mean yes…She was here a while ago, but then she left.
Madhu: Left? How can she leave?
Suvi: She said she was going to meet you directly at the waiting lounge. Actually, her dad had called her from her home.
Kushi: Ohh…Okay…Come Madhu lets leave then.
Madhu: No wait. What did you say? Her dad had called?
Yuvi: Haan kyun? Uske Dad use call nahi karte kya?
Madhu: No, but then her dad is right here in the airport then why will he call her from her home?
Yuvi: Oo teri…yeh Ladkiyan tho mujhe pagal hi kar dengi. (to himself)
Kushi: Kuch kaha thumne?
Yuvi: Ah Nahi tho (with a fake smile) Kuch bhi tho nahi. Wo kya hein na usse kisi ka call aya tha, tho mujhe laga ki uske Dad ne hi call kiya hoga. Ab mujhe kya pata kiska call tha? Why don't you go to the waiting area, she might be looking for you there.
Madhu: Oh okay. Anyways thank you.
Yuvi: Arey iss mein Thank you ki kya baath?
Kushi: Hum chalthei hein.
Both Madhu and Kushi leave from there. As soon as they leave:
Yuvi: Uff…Thank god. These girls are worst than the Delhi Police, chodne ka naam hi nahi lethi. But now where do I find Suvreen? Arey Yar..Kahi kuch galath…Nahi Nahi aisa nahi ho saktha…Jab se mili hein Naak mein dhum karke rakha hein iss ladki ne…Chal beta Yuvi…Now its time for the cheetah to to find Suvreen Guggal.
Here Kushi and Madhu were walking towards the exit of the book store when suddenly Kushi stops
Kushi: Madhu, I forgot some important work. I will just finish with it and be back. You carry on, I will meet you at the waiting area.
Madhu: Ya sure.
Kushi with a naughty smile rushes in, while Madhu continues with her walk towards the waiting area.
Here, RK was rushing in a hurry, as though a thief is running away from the cops, when he suddenly collides to someone and some books fall on the ground
RK: Sorry…(he bends down to pick up the book)…Thum?
Madhu: Thum?
Both of them get lost in each other's eyes. RK for once forget all that he was running away from, as though the time has come to a halt. There was silence all around, Madhu was now staring into his eyes as though she was searching for something. RK's eyes were filled with a different kind of guilt and fear, but Madhu did not know what? She felt as though these eyes were something very familiar to her, as though she was always connected to them. Both RK and Madhu could hear nothing but just hear each other's heart beat. (Dhak… Dhak… Dhak…) RK slowly held out a book to Madhu, which she slowly caught hold of still lost in each other completely. Now, not just that their eveyes met but also their hands were touching each others. As soon as Madhu could feel his touch and weird current ran down her spine. She could feel the chill…Don't know for how long they had stared into each other when suddenly an Ariport Cleaner lady came upto them and started shouting
Cleaner: Arey, If you want to romance then go to some park. This is an Airport not any couple park that you guys romance right here in front of all. Pata nahi kaha kaha se aa jathe hein log…
Both RK and Madhu startle.
Madhu: Thum yaha iss tarah bhaag kyun rahe the? (coming to her true self but still eager to know the reason for the guilt and fear that was hidden deep in his eyes)
RK: (Again returning to the same old akkadu RK) Suno Miss Madhubala, RK kabhi kissi se bhaagtha nahi…kyunki saari duniya uske peeche Bhaagthi hein. By the way I don't think there is any need for me to explain you, because I never waste my time explaining people about my actions. So stay out of it.
Saying this he walks from there.
Madhu: Ekh Number ka Akkadu hein yeh. But, why there is something wrong. What is it afterall? Madhu whats gone wrong with you? When did you start worrying about some random guy? No no…I will have to find out what is wrong with him. (Still confused)
Here Kushi reaches the Book Counter, where ASR walks from the other end.
Kushi: Uncle ji, This is the book I want – "The Book for Anger Management".
Arnav was stealing glances of Kushi from nearby.
Cashier: This one? Mam, Sorry but I think you have mistaken this is for people who loose their temper very soon, but you look like a very cheerful person?
Kushi: (giggiling) This is not for me Uncle ji. This is for someone very special…a special gift for someone very special. (in a mocking tone)
Arnav gets all alert as soon as he heard that Kushi was going to give this to some one very special. He clenches his fist in anger.
Arnav (to himself): Someone special? Kushi has a boyfriend? No no ASR what are you thinking about? Even if Kushi has a boyfriend why do you care? Aaah…this girl is driving me crazy.
Cashier: Oh okay. It is Rs. 100.
Kushi: Thank you Uncle ji.
Saying this she has a naughty smile on her face.
Here, Annie walks into the store room. In the corner she finds a girl sitting and crying. That was none other than Suvreen. She had found this place after the argument with Yuvraj. Annie rushes to her.
Annie: Hey what happened? What are you doing here? Why are you crying?
Suvreen does not know why she hugs Annie and starts crying her heart out.
Now what do you think will happen next? Will Madhu be able to get rid of her confusion? Was Arnav feeling 'J'? What naughty prank is Kushi planning to play and who is the victim after all? Will Suvreen find a new friend in Annie after Madhu ? Will Yuvraj find where Suvreen is? What plan is RK cooking up? Why does Yuvraj not like discussing about Anees? Is he of significance in the FF? Wait and watch for Under One Roof Part 7.

PS: Which one of them did you like? Crazily Romantic Annie, Confused and Romatic Madhubala, Naughtily Romantic Kushi Kumari Gupta or Emotionaly Romantic Suvreen?

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Posted: 12 years ago
The update was just mindblowing.. Arhi scene was perfectly funny👏 The way u described Annie's insanity nd Khushi's naughtiness was fab and loved the way u handled the 6characters, it was all balanced! Good job!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow manish superb and I loved emotional suvreen bring in some crazy ness in yuvreen waiting for the next update!!!!!!!!!😊

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