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PAYAL WIPED HER TEARS AND ACCIDENTALLY HIT KARUN'S ARM....KARUN OPENED HIS EYES AND SAW PAYAL WIPING TEARS.

KARUN: AAP MERI BAAT SUNKAR RO RAHI HAI?
P: ..........(NODS IN YES) WOH LADKI KAUN HAI?
KARUN: MY BEST FRIEND.
P: SIRF BEST FRIEND.........
KARUN: SIRF BEST FRIEND.
P: AAP JHOOT BOL RAHE HAI.....AAP USSE BAHAT PYAAR KARTE HAI NA?
KARUN: HA PAR WOH PYAAR NAHI JO AAP SAMAJHTI HAI.......WOH PYAAR JO YEH DUNIYA KABHI SAMAJH NAHI PAYENGE......NOW COMEON MERI BAATOPAR PLS DHYAAN MAT DENA MEIN TO PAAGAL HU KUCH BHI KEHTA REHTA HU.....KOI KUCH NAHI SAMAJHTA..
P: DONT WORRY MEIN SAMAJHSKTI HU.....MEINE BHI KOI AISA KHOYA HAI JISSE MEIN BEINTEHAA MOHABBAT KARTI THI.....
KARUN: HAMARA HAALAT KUCH EK HI JAISA HAI TO FRIENS?
P:....... (LOOKS AT HIM)
KARUN: JAB DO INSAAN EK HI DOR SE GUJARTE HAI TO WO EK DOOSRE KO JYADA ACHHI TARASE SAMAJHTE HAI.HUM DONO AKELE HAI AUR HALAT BHI TO EK HI HAI.....TO KYA SOCHA?
P: FRIENDS.....WAISE LAGTA NAHI HAI KI HUM DONO KI KUCH JAMNE WALI HAI.
KARUN: KYU?
P: KYUNKI MUJHE BAHAT BOLNE KI AADAT HAI AUR AAP TO BAHAT I CHUP CHAP REHTE HAI.
KARUN: WELL SABSE PEHELE MUJHE TUM "TUM" KAHO AUR MUJHE DO YA TEEN DIN DO MEIN APNE AAPKO SAMAAL LUNGA.
P: DO YA TEEN DIN KE LIYE HUME EK SAATH HONA BHI TO CHAHIYE NA.
KARUN: TUM KAHA JARAHI HO?
P: WELL I AM GOING TO AMERICA.
KARUN: MEIN BHI FLIGHT KAUNSA HAI?
P: ABHI YAHASE TO QATAR AUR WAHASE YEH MUJHE PRONOUNCE KARNA NAHI AATA AUR PHIR WAHASE NEWARK AIRPORT MEIN HAI.
KARUN: REALLY? MERA BHI.
P: WOW TO LAGTA HAI YEH SAFAR YAADGAAR HONE WALI HAI..

LETS SEE KUNAL AND NIMMO.
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hey thnxxxxxxxxxxxxxx a lot abhi 4 posting but it soshort 😊 and wheres kaannu and nims😭
Edited by jazmeen - 19 years ago
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NOW ITS THEIR TURN, IMEAN KUNNU AND NIMS TURN.AND IT WAS NOT SO SHORT CUZ I MIXED THE TWO.....THE PREVIOUS AND THIS ONE IS ONE.
Edited by MUNNIBABA2006 - 19 years ago
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ya soory yaar i didnt see 1st part b4 coooooooooooooooool yaar da way dey both express dier feelings and especially karun's plzzzzzzzzzzzzz con soon wid kannu and nims 👏
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NIMMO AND KUNAL ARE HOME AND IS IN THER ROOM.IT HAS BEEN ONE DAY SINCE THEY ARE THERE. WHENEVER NIMMO TRIES TO TALK TO ANYBODY ABOUT KARUN THEY JUST CHANGE THE TOPIC. SHE COULD NOT FIND HIM ANY WHERE AND NOW SHE IS REALLY MAD.SHE COMES DOWNATAIRS AND SEES PRIYANKA IN THE LIVING ROOM LISTENIN TO HER IPOD. SHE GOES NEAR HER.

N: PRI(THAT'S WHAT EVERYONE CALL HER) KARUN KAHA HAI?
P(BUSY LISTENING MUSIC): .........
N(TAKES THE EARPHONE OFF): PRI KARUN KAHA HAI?
P: MUJHE KAISE PATA HOGA WAIS BHI PEECHLE KUCH DINOSE WOH GHAR BHI NAHI AAYA.
N: KITNE DINOSE....
P: MAYBE 1 WEEK NAHI NAHI 11 DAYS....AUR USKE GHARME GAYI THI TO AUNTYNE KAHA KI WOH KAHI CHALA GAYA...
N: CHALA GAYA?
P: HA...CHALA GAYA...KAHA YEH KOI NAHI JAANTA
N: OK

SHE LEAVES AND PRIYANKA GIVES AN EVIL SMILE. SHE WAS ABUT TO GO OUT WHE KUNAL STOPPED HER.

K: NIMMO KAHA JA RAHI HO.....BAHAR ITNI BAARISH HAI.((FORGOT TO MENTION BEFORE)
N: WOH KARUNKE GHAR JARAHI HU.
K: OK RUKO MEIN BHI CHALTA HU..
N: THIK HAI CHALO..

BOTH OF THEM WENT TO KARUN'S HOUSE. KARUN'S MOM GREETED THEM AND CALLED THEM IN..

N: AUNTY WOH ACTUALLY......HUME KARUN...
KM(KARUN'S MOM):MUJHE PATA HAI TUMHE KARUNKE BAREME JANNA HAI NA....WOH BETA CHALA GAYA....KAHA GAYA KUCH PATA NAHI HAI....US DIN

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NIMMO AND KUNAL ARE IN THEIR HONEY MOON. IT IS 11 IN THE MORNING. KARUN HAD JUST CALLED NIMMO AND WAS SLEEPING FOR SOMETIME. HIS MOM ENTERED.

KM: BETA KYA KAR RAHA HAI?
KARUN: KUCH NAHI MOM...WOH BUS ABHI NIMMO KO PHONE KIYA USIKE BAREME SOCH RAHA THA....
KM: OK...WELL NATASHHA KO SHOPPING PE LE JAO NA....KABSE KEHRAHI HAI...AUR APNI BHI KUCH SHOPPING KARLENA.
KARUN: OK MOM...

NATASHHA AND KARUN GO FOR SHOPPING. EVENING AT AROUND 7. NATASHHA ENTERED THE HOUSE.

KM: ARRE BET KARUN KAHA HAI?
N: KARUN....WOH TO 3 BAJE NIKAL CHHUKA THA.....USSE EK CALL AAYA AUR PHIR WOH WAHA SE CHALA GAYA......PHIR MUJHE SHAINA MILI AUR MEIN USSKE SAATH SHOPPING KAR RAHI THI...KARUN KO ABHI TAK TO AJANA CHAHIYE THA...
KM: OK ANDAR JAKE CHANGE KARLO.

AFTER TWO DAYS. KARUN ENTERS THE HOUSE....HIS NOSE IS BLEEDING.....THERE ARE BLOOD RUNNING DOWN HIS HEAD.....THERE WAS A GUN SHOT ON HIS RIGHT ARM....KM WAS SITTING IN THE LIVING ROOM SHE SAW HIM

KM: OH MY GOD YEH KYA HUA.....HEY RAAM
KARUN: NAHI MOM KUCH NAHI HAI.....MEIN BAHAT TIRED HU MEIN APNE KAMREME JARAHA HU.

HE LEFT TO HIS ROOM. NEXT MORNING. KM KNOCKS ONHIS DOOR. SHE OPENS IT WITH A SPARE KEY. SHE SEES THE ROOM ALL MESSED UP ANS KARUN WAS THROWING ALL THE STUFF FROM HIS CUPBOARD. HE FINALLY FOUND SOMETHING AND KEPT IT INSIDE HIS BAG.

KM: YEH SAB KYA HAI?...KARUN KAHA JA RAHA HAI?
KARUN: MOM MEIN YEH TO NAHI BATA SAKTA KI KAHA JA RAHA HU BUT ITNA KEH SAKTA HU KI SABKE JINDAGISE BAHAT DUR JARAHA HU....ESPECIALLY NIMMO KI....
KM: PAR BETA...
KARUN: DONT WORRY MOM I AM FINE.... AUR HA ABHI KUCH DINO KE LIYE MEIN HOTELMEIN RAHOONGA PHIR SHAYAD EK HAPTE BAAD MEIN KAHI JAAONGA...MUJHE YAHA KUCH KAAM NIPTANA HAI....MOM MEIN AAPSE CONTACT KARTA RAHOONGA...BYE MOM
KM: TU KUCH BHI KAR, KAHI BHI JAA HAMESHA YAAD RAKHNA... MEIN TERE SAATH HU OK BYE.

THEY HUG. KARUN LEAVES..

END OF FLASH BACK.

KM: WOH EK HAPTE TAK CONTACT KARTA RAHA PAR ABHI DO TEEN DIN HOGAYE HAI USKA KOI ATTA PATA NAHI HAI..

NIMMO WAS IN TEARS. KUNAL TRIED TO CONSOLE HER.

K: THANKYOU AUNTY.....NIMMO CHALO....

KM: RUKO...(SHE GOES TO A TABLE OPENS THE DRWER AND TAKES A LETTER) NIMMO KARUN TUMHARE LIYE YEH CHHODKE GAYA HAI.....

NIMMO TAKES IT AND WITHOUT SAYING A WORD SHE LEAVES. KUNAL OPENS THE DOOR OF THE CAR AND NIMMO JUST SITS DOWN. THEY REACH HOME AND NIMMO STRAIGHTLY WALKS TO HER ROOM. SHE OPENS THE LETTER THAT KARUN HAD LEFT FOR HER.......

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THE LETTER

DEAR NIMMO,

MUJHE PATA HAI KI MMMA NE TUMHE SAB KUCH BATA DIYA HOGA. I AM GOING AWAY.....AWAY FROM EVERYONE. MEIN YEH NAHI BATA SAKTA KYU...YEH SHAYAD PEHLI BAAT HOGA JO MEINE TUMSE SHARE NAHI KIYA......SHAYAD KAR NAHI PAO. I AM SORRY...WELL PLS MUJHE JYAADA MISS MAT KARNA....KUNAL KE SAATH TUM BAHAT KHUSH RAHOGI I KNOW THAT......USSE BAHAT PYAAR DENA PAR UTNA NAHI JITNA TUM MUJHSE KARTI HO.....JUS KIDDING...KUNAL TUMHE DUNIYA KI HAR KHUSHI LAKE DEGA....ISS CHHITI KA MATLAB YEH NAHI KI WE ARE OVER...HUMNE DOSTI KI HAI MARTE DUM TAK NIBHAENGE HAI NA......MEIN TUMSE CONTACT KARTA RAHOONGA AUR TUMHE PATA BHI NAHI CHALEGA......JO BHI HO.....BAS YEHI KEHNA THA...SHAYAD MEIN LOT KE AAU SHAYAD NAI BHI....PHIR BHI ALWAYS REMEBER I LOVE YOU AND ALWAYS WILL.....TUMHE YAAD HAI MEINE KAHA THA KI IS SHAADI KI WAJAH SE HUMARE RISHTEY PAR BAHAT BADA ASAR PARNE WALA HAI...SO HUA.....OK BYE ...LOVE YOU

TUMHARA KARUN

NIMMO STARTED CRYING REALLY HARD. KUNAL SAW HER CRYING. HE READ THE LETTER. HE HUGGED HER REALLY TIGHT. SHE WAS A BIT COMFORTABLE NOW AND HAD STOPPED CRYING. THEY BOTH FELL ASLEEP REALLY FAST. NEXT MORNING KUNAL WOKE UP AND SAW NIMMO WITH HER EYES WIDE OPEN...IT WAS ALL RED AND THERE WERE DARK CIRCLES AROUN HER EYES.

K: NIMMO....\(HE TOUCHED HER ACE AND IT WAS BURNING) OH MY GOD TUMHE TO TEJ BUKHAR HAI.
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wowwwwwwwwwww nic 1 karun poor guy plzzzzzzzzzzz raaz kholo aur batao wats da secret y did he left
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SORRY YOU NEED TO WAIT FOR A WHILE ONLY KARUN CAN REVEAL HIS SECRET, NO ONE ELSE CAN. 😈 HA HA HA
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K: NIMMO TUM RAAT BHAR NAHI SOYI.
N: ..........
K: UFF...RUKO MEIN MOM KO BATATA HU.

HE GOES AND TELLS HIS MOM. SHE COMES AND SEES NIMO IN SUCH CONDITION SHE WAS STILL HOLDING THE LETTER. KUNAL'S MOM READ IT AND KEPT IT AT THE SIDE.AND SHE CONSOLED HER AND MADE HER SLEEP. PRIYANKA WAS IN HER ROOM. SHE GOT A CALL.
P: HELLO....
KARUN: HEY.....PRI...KAISI HO?
P: KARUN...WAIT MEIN DARWAAZA LOCK KARTI HU... HA BOLO ...MEIN TO THIK HU...TUM KAISE HO?
KARUN: FINE YAAR...WELL NIMMO AUR KUNAL KA KYA KHABAR HAI?
P: WOH DONO TO KAL HI AGAYE AUR NIMMO KO PATA CHAL GAYA KI TUM GAYE HO TO.....UM..
KARUN: KYA HUA NIMMO KO?
P: AISI KUCH BAAT NAHI HAI....WELL USSE TEJ BUKHAR HAI...SHAYAD RAAT BHAR NAHI SO PAYI...
KARUN: ....SHIT...WELL USKA KHAYAL RAKHNA MEIN CHALTA HU...AUR HAMARI YEH BAAT KABHI HUA HI NAHI OK...YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN RIGHT?
P: DONT WORRY...I'LL NOT TELL ANYONE...MY LIPS ARE SEALED.

THEY HAN UP.

P(THINKING): DONT WORRY KARUN...MEIN KISSIKO KUCH NAHI BATAONI...ISSE BEHETAR CHANCE NAHI MILEG TUMHE NIMMO SE DUR LEJANE KE LIYE.....AUR PHIR APNA BHI TO BANANA HAI NA...... 😈

MEANWHILE KARUN,

KARUN AND PAYAL ARE STUCK IN THE NEWARK AIRPORT FOR TE WHOLE NIGHT.(MY STORY).

KARUN(SADLY): SAB MERI WAJAH SE HUA...NA USS DIN WOH SAB KUCH HOTA... NAHI MEIN YAHA AATA....NAHI NIMMO KO DUKH HOTA...ITS ALL MY FAULT..
P: KARUN MEIN KUCH BOLU?
KARUN: BOLO
P: WELL MUJHE KUCH PATA TO NAHI HAI BUT........USS DIN JO KUCH BHI HUA HOAGA USSMEIN TUMHARI GALATI NAHI HOSAKTI...TUM KUCH GALAT KAR HI NAHI SAKTE.......
KARUN: ITNE YAKEENKE SAATH KAISE KEH SAKTI HO?TUM TO MUJHE JAANTI BHI NAHI HO...HUME MILE ABHI 24 GHANTA BHI NAHI HUA.
P: KISSIKO JANEKE LIYE KABHI PURI JINDAGI KAM PAD JAATI HAI AUR KABHI EK LAMA HI KAAPHI HOTA HAI....TUMHARI AANKHOMEIN MAINE BAHAT BHOLAPAN AUR INNOCENCE DEKHI HAI.....TUM KABHI KUCH AISA NAHI KARSAKTE JISSE KISSI AUR KO DUKH POHOCHE AUR NIMMO TO ...SHE'S YOUR BEST FRIEND...TUMNE JO KUCH HI KIYA USKE BHALEKE LIYE HI KIYA HOGA......

KARUN WAS STARING AT HER.

P: AISE KYA DEKH RAHE HO?
KARUN: YEH DEKH RAHA HU KI TUM JAISI......I MEAN A BUBBLY PERSON LIKE YOU CAN BE SO.......
P: SO?
KARUN: SO.....YOU KNOW IT?
P(LAUGHS): I KNOW...
KARUN: PATA HE SIRF NIMMO MUJHE ITNI ACHHI TARASE PEHECHHANTI THI AUR AB TUM......HUMARI DOSTI BAHAT AGE TAK JAYEGE...
P: YOU BETCHA

NOTE: WELL YOU HAVE TO TOLERATE PAYAL AND KARUN FOR SOMETIME AND THEN ILL AGAIN GO BACK TO TRACK WITH KUNAL AND NIMMO.....IT MIGHT TAKE 1 OR 2 EPISODE WHERE IT WILL BE NO KUNNU AND NIMS..SORRY...
Edited by MUNNIBABA2006 - 19 years ago
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plzzzzzzzzzzzzz con yaar u said dat last part was ur story so does dat mean ur friend varun had a friend lik nims b4 or just da lines were same 😃

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