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tu ishe kab updat karegi?

oops! iske baare me bhool gayi thi!😆 don't worry pehle triya ss update karoongi n then ise jaldi jaldi update karoongi! 😊
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oops! iske baare me bhool gayi thi!😆 don't worry pehle triya ss update karoongi n then ise jaldi jaldi update karoongi! 😊

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oh hi guys!

ki haal hai? sab wadiya? ok! ab aate hain point par! guys i know maine ye ss 5 months se update nahi kiya hai! i know its heights so i am cutting this ss a little short! guys pichle update me maine kaha tha ki mai taani ki saari feelings uski diary ke zariye dikhaaungi but now i have decided cut that part! ok here you guys go-

PART 9:- FRIENDSHIP PYAAR KA PEHLA STEP

Rey read the whole diary like this n at the end there were tears on his eyes. He closed her diary n sat on swayam's bed. Tears were flowing from his eyes.

Rey- taani ne itna sab kuch saha sirf mere liye! N shivam ke saath wo sab ek naatak tha! Oh my god! Maine ye kya kar diya? Usko maine aaj tak kya kuch nahi sunaya! Uske aankhon se aansu behte the sirf aur sirf meri wajah se!

He cried holding that diary close to his heart. He wiped his tears n went to taani's room. He looked at her angelic face n went to her cupboard. He kept the diary n closed the cupboard but when he was going out of the room something fell due to the wind due to which taani woke up. She saw rey going out of her room.

Taani- rey!

Rey stopped there n turned towards her.

Taani- aap itni raat ko yahaan kya kar rahe hain?

Rey- wo mai.. mai yahaan... actually mujhe neend nahi aa rahi thi isliye socha tumse baat kar loon but tum so rahi thi!

Taani- oh ok! Waise ab meri neend bhi toot gayi hai so chaliye baatein karte hain!

Rey- ok fine!

Taani- nahi ek minute rukiye! Mai na hum dono ke liye coffee banake laati hoon! Phir baatein karenge!

Taani goes to kitchen n behind her our rey goes n stares at her leaning on the wall. Taani got busy in making coffee. The soft breeze was playing with her hair. Rey got totally lost in her. Taani felt his gaze on her. She turned n they have an eyelock.

Taani- aap aise kya dekh rahe hain

Rey coming out of trance- haan? Ah wo mai coffee ko bante hue dekh raha tha!

Taani murmuring- mujhe laga mujhe dekh rahe the!

Rey smiles hearing this- kya kuch kaha?

Taani- nahi kuch nahi! Waise boys are not allowed in my kitchen!

Rey- aisa kyun?

Taani- kyunki boys na kitchen ka naksha badalne me mahir hain! Isliye go out!

Rey sadly goes out. He sits on the couch. He started talking to himself and at that time taani was coming with coffee. Taani stops to listen to his talks.

Rey- yaar maine use itna kuch kaha aur usne kuch bhi nahi kaha! Chup chap sehti rahi!

Taani in her mind- wo kya hai na mai aapki tarah nahi hoon na mr. Reyaansh singhania!

Rey- abhi bhi kitna sweatly baat kar rahi thi na! She is so sweet!

Taani in her mind- wo to mai hoon! N aap gadhe, ullu, idiot sab hain!

Rey- aur mai! Mai kamina, gadha, ullu, idiot hoon!

Taani in her mind- unhe mere mann ki baat kaise pata chali?

Rey- thank you taani!

Taani- thanks kisliye?

Rey looks at taani and gets shock. Taani comes to him with two mugs. Gives him his coffee n sits.

Taani- boliye na thank you kyun?

Rey- tumne sab sun liya?

Taani taking a sip- haan! Ab bataiye na!

Rey- wo tum hamesha meri help karti rahi but mai hi tumhe misunderstand karta raha! I am sorry!

Taani- dekhiye rey its ok! N friendship ka ek hi rule hai, iss rule ko to mat todiye! No sorry, no thank you!

Rey- hum friends hain?

Taani- haan! Kyun?

Rey- nahi wo itna sab ho jaane ke baad mujhe nahi laga ki hum ab bhi friends rahenge!

Taani- rey jab friendship sacche dil se ki jaaye na to wo kabhi nahi toot ti! Chaliye coffee pijiye!

Taarey take one sip.

Taani- so kya strategy banayi hai kal ke match ke liye?

Rey- tum jab dekhogi tab pata chal hi jaayega!

Taani- but mai to wahaan hoongi hi nahi! Haan shaayad match ke baad uska video dekhoongi!

Rey- arey tum kal match dekhne nahi aaogi?

Taani- umm nahi!

Rey- kyun? Tum to GS ho! Tumhara aana sabse zyada zaroori hai!

Taani- mai aaungi to aap distract ho jaayenge n acche se khel nahi paayenge!

Rey- arey mai distract nahi hounga! But agar tum nahi aayi to zaroor distract ho jaaunga!

Taani- kyun?

Rey- uh uh kyunki... kyunki tum meri bohot acchi friend ho! Ya!

Taani- wo sab mai nahi jaanti! Mai nahi aaungi!

Rey- agar tum nahi aaogi to mai nahi khelunga!

Taani- kya!!! Arey but aise kaise nahi khelenge? Nahi aapko khelna padega!

Rey- maine keh diya matlab keh diya ki agar tum nahi aaogi to mai nahi khelunga!

Taani- urgh itne ziddi kyun hain aap? Fine mai aaungi! Abhi chaliye coffee peete hain!

They both were sipping there coffee.

Rey- tum kuch batao apne baare me!

Taani- ab mai kya bataun? Aap nahi jaante hain kya mere baare me?

Rey in his mind- jaanta hoon taani but har pal tumhe aur bhi zyada jaan ne ka mann karta hai!

Taani- arey boliye na!

Rey- uh ummm tum Jodhpur me apni life ke baare me batao!

Taani- maine apna bachpan wahaan bitaya hai! Meri maa, papa, tauji, taaiji yaani bhai ke parents sab wahaan hain! Mai na unn sabke liye princess hoon ! maine jo maanga mujhe mila n kabhi mujhe rone nahi diya!

Rey spits out- mai bhi tumhe kabhi rone nahi doonga!

Taani shocked n confused- huh?

Rey- I mean mai apni acchi si friend ko rone nahi doonga!

Taani- oh like that! Pata hai rey mera na ek best friend bhi hai! Rohan! He is such a sweetheart! I really miss him a lot!

There was a clear sense of jealousy in the air. Rey was jealous.

Rey- handsome hai?

Taani- uspe na jodhpur ki saari ladkiyaan marti hain! He is the mr. perfect!

Rey- tum like karti ho use?

Taani- ab rey ye bhi koi poochne wali baat hai? Mera best buddy hai to like to karoongi hi na!

Rey was holding his mug tightly but controls himself.

Taani- pata hai rey hum dono ne na bachpan me sagayi(engagement) bhi kar li thi ! you know bachpan ka khel! Hum jab bhi ghar-ghar khelte to mai kabhi bhi ushi ko uski wife banne nahi deti thi! Humesha mai hi banti thi!

Rey was in anger but then he was confused.

Rey- ek minute ye ushi kaun hai?

Taani- ushi! Yaani ki ushita! Meri bestie hai wo! N ghar-ghar me wo bhai ki wife banti thi! (she looks here n there n then calls rey near) shh! Kisiko batana mat! Ushi na bhai bohot like karti hai!

Rey- sacchi! Haww! Ab?

Taani- actually na love triangle hai!

Rey- wo kaise?

Taani- arey see ushita bhai ko like karti hai n ushita ko rohan like karta hai! I hope ushita bhai ko bhool jaaye! Waise bhi bhoolna padega! Kyunki mere bhai to Sharon ke alawa kisi aur se pyaar karne se rahe!

Rey happy that rohan likes ushita- haan I too hope so! Arey but ek minute! To phir usne tumhare saath sagai kyun ki?

Taani- arey jab wo bada hua tab use ushita bohot pasand aane lagi! Humaari sagai to bachpan me hui thi na! lekin ek baat hai!

Rey- ab kya hua?

Taani- wo kya hai na agar mujhe koi ladka nahi mila yaani ki maine kisiko choose nahi kiya to pakka rohan ki shaadi mere saath hi hogi n ushita ki bhai ke saath!

Rey- ye to galat hoga na! I mean sabki zindagi barbaad ho jaayegi! Iss tarah to koi bhi khush nahi reh paayega!

Taani- wahi to! See bhai ko Sharon nahi milegi n of course ushita ko bhai kabhi pyaar kar hi nahi paayenge n mere rohan ko uski ushita nahi milegi!

Rey- n tum?

Taani looks into his eyes. He can see all the pain.

Taani normal- mera kya hai? Mujhe to bas baaki sabki khushi chahiye!

Rey- agar rohan ko tumse pyaar ho gaya to kya uski khushi ke liye tum usse shaadi kar logi?

Taani- uh uh rohan mujhse kabhi pyaar kar hi nahi sakta!

Rey- ye baat tum itne confidently kaise keh sakti ho?

Taani looking into his eyes- kyunki jab ek baar ye dil kisise saccha pyaar kar leta hai na to uske liye kisi aur se pyaar karna namumkin sa ho jaata hai n kisi aur se phir pyaar karna bohot mushkil hota hai! Uski yaadein, uski baatein, uske saath bitaye hue har ek pal ko bhoolna bohot mushkil hota hai! Bohot dard hota hai rey jab ye dil toot ta hai! Aisa lagta hai jaise kisine dil ko hazaar tukdon me tod diya ho n hare k tukde ko berehmi se pairon tale(under) kuchal diya ho! (she was actually saying her story to him, explaining her pain to him) rey mujhe lagta hai ab hum dono ko so jaana chahiye! Good night!

Rey- good night!

Taani goes from there n rey here sits for some time thinking n trying to feel her pain. He then goes to swayam's room to sleep.

Hey guys! here the update ends! aap sabko kya laga mai ye ss discontinue kar doongi? no ways! ek writer ka kartavya yaani duty hoti hai ki wo apne stories poore kare n above that this is my first work on I-F n that too on taarey! mai ise discontinue karne ka soch bhi nahi sakti! so guys if you liked it then hit the like button n accha lage ya bura comment to banta hai boss!

Edited by adi.cutiepie - 12 years ago

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