It all started with 300 Rupees Chapter 33

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akanksha84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#931

I rread ur story in one hit... you wite just superb, its great detailing of every emotionfeelings and each n every aspect... good work!

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vks11

@vks11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#932

I love you. I love you. Please Please pm me your next update. Add me to yuor buddy list.

I dont know how to express my words to you. You are one of the - no the greatest writers i have met.

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paaskhanna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#933

Hi..started reading this after I had done reading Fate Mate...

Love the modern, confident , independent Khusi in this one though all her insecurities which are there due to her past are still there...how beautifully you bring out the simple but complex human nature in your writing. Loving the repentant, loving, naughty, caring Arnav.

The way you wrote about the collective loss of their baby was sooo true and touching... Infact what I love the most while reading your stories are that you make the reader feel like an invisible entity in the scene along with the characters and can see/feel everything that is happening 😊 Love the attention you pay to details...dialogues and the "texting" sequence always leaves me with a big smile on my face...

I can go on rambling but in a nutshell I enjoy your stories and hope to read many more of them

Poonam

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sanjubanju

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Posted: 12 years ago

#934

Pls pls pls pm me when you update. Wanted to tell you the way you portrayed how Arshi dealt with the loss of their baby , how they held the ultrasound picture together... It was just awesome. You brought out their feelings in that scene so well, u should have been the writer if IPK. You portray the emotions in your writing so well. Really love your work. Pls pm me when u update here and in Fate Mate. Thanks

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vks11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#935

I love your story. But one request. Why is Kushi not asking abot Arnav's family? Why is he not in touch with them?

What about Kushi's family. It would be nice if you bring them into the story.

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MaddyWaddy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#936

you are superrrb!! simply superb!!!!!!
pls update soon!!!!!!
waiting... no actually dying to read what comes next!!!

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vks11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#937

Please Please update next. Please Please include Arnav's family and Kushi's family in the next chapter.

I am asking this because Kushi is a person who loves her family and would die for them. Want to know how they feel for all the sacrifices she has done. Want ARnav to talk to them and let Kushi know ABOUT THEM. Want Kushi to get in touch with them.

Please Please forgive my request. Your story will be a blockbuster and complete with these included.

ANYWAY IT ALREADY IS!!!

PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE. i CANT SLEEP. I AM GOING CRAZY.

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MAS_5253

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Posted: 12 years ago

#938

hey dear juz 1 word fantabulous is all i cud think after reading d update..
neways dear i didnt recieve pm for dis 1 plz dear wenever u update next plz do pm me il really appreciate dat n do cntnu sun

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800734

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Posted: 12 years ago

#939

I read it in one go...fantastic...
I thought fate mate is great...but this one even better...
OK thank god that I am reading it much later...because I would have a heart attack after chapter 28 where Khushi said "she is not your daughter"...😆

OK I have to confess something stupid...I am a silent reader of fate mate...When I read fate mate I thought you kinda believe in divine love so no kiss even after 34 chapter...so you avoid showing any physical intimacy or may be you are not comfortable writing intimate scene...😆
but you proved me wrong big time in this FF...😳
you are great!!!!
Please pm me...

Edited by Luv_isnt_classy - 12 years ago