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@Pankhuri96

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Nice.different concept.plz jald hi update dena.mujhse ab aur wait nahi hota.

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: pankhuri96
Nice.different concept.plz jald hi update dena.mujhse ab aur wait nahi hota.

Thank u dr fir liking n commenting,
ohhh dr ok i will update next part today thank u so much

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@life93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

hi piya...superb concept dear...so riya ko bachane mein arjun ki maut ho gayi...riya is now gonna engage with rathore...but she still loves arjun...arjun came back...thank god...update soon yaar...supernatural cocept is just out of world for ariya everything is possible...kash serial mein bhi aisa hota hume humaari riya waapis mil jaati

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: life93
<font color="#990033">hi piya...superb concept dear...so riya ko bachane mein arjun ki maut ho gayi...riya is now gonna engage with rathore...but she still loves arjun...arjun came back...thank god...update soon yaar...supernatural cocept is just out of world for ariya everything is possible...kash serial mein bhi aisa hota hume humaari riya waapis mil jaati</font>

Thank u dr for liking the concept...
humm arjun is dad but...
kuch to hai...
n yes riya ke engagememy hai...
n. thats also true that riya saw arjun ,
but...is he realy arjun. or not...
eskeliye next part ko padna padega...
thanks dr for liking n commemting

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

**PART-2**--
"Ye dream hai ya real"

SCENCE--RIYA INSIDE HER ROOM N TALKING TO ARJUN PICTURE--
Arjun i promise main jald he anoge...
but now i hv to go...
Mahak-kahan the riya main kab se tumhara wait ker rahi the.
Riya-are waha ek to khud late ati ho..or oper se mujhe blame ker rahi ho..tumhen yad bhi hai na ke aaj meri engegement hai..
Ma-are baba ab gussa kyun hoti ho..main to kab ke aa jati per tumhare us khados ke karan late ho gaye...
ab batao apni engegement bale din bhi use kaam kerna hai...to esmainmain bhala kya ker sakti huin..
riya's mom--are stop u both behaving like this..ab tum dono ehse he bahas kerti rahogi to palor kab jaogay...
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BOTH GOES TO PALOR..
SCENCE-SHIFT IN PALOR---
Dekhiye acche se tayar kerna koe kami nahi honi chahiye...
P. lady-ohh dont warry mam,dont bother about them...we wil do our best..
apki fr bahut achhi lagegi...
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"riya wear red n green mix lahanga...all makecup has almost dowm..only jewellry r remain...she looks mor beautiful.."
Mam wher r yur jewellry boxRi-mahak jewellry kahan haiMa-riya vo vo jewelly...
R-kya huya??saf saf bologi..
M-lagta hai by mistake gher per hi reh gaye..
R-what??tum bina mistaken koe kamm nahi ker sakti...
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M-i kno mujhase galti ho gaye..ab. tum mujhe arjun sir ke tarah datna band karo.
mahak bite her tungh by slip of word by mistake she remind her arjun...
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riya hears arjun name..its hit inside her heart ,
a deep pain easly visible in her eyes...
ma-riya vo..by mistake..plz i m sorry..vo main..
R-its ok mahak i understand..
or vaise sach bhi to hai..
arjun or unka angry look..
vo bhi kya din they...
kash vo us din vahan nahi...
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M-hey cherup dont forget madam aaj tumhari engegment hai..ager kuch bhi kami reh gaye tumhen tayar kerne main to tumhari mom to mujhe...dant dant ker ..

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

dant dant ker ...mera encounter ker dengin...ager bymistake bach gaye to tere mr khadus..apne angry look se mar dalenge...or mujhe es tarah se nahi marna...
hahhhaaa both brust out with laugh..
R-mahak tum bhi na ek dam kamal ho..kuch nahi ho sakta tumhara..
M-accha madam ab do min yahan baido ..main abhi gaye or jewllery leker aye..
R-ye bar bar madam kya laga rakha hai...
M-vo kya hai ..abhi se adat dalani padegi ..sir ke hone vali wife jo hai...
R-mahak ki bachhi tumhen to main batati huin...
ruko kahan bhag rahi ho...
M-madam jewllery lene ...engezment ajj hai..years baad nahi...ab samjhe ya samjhayon...
she left after saying this...but by mistake again remind arjun...
R-aaj ye kya ho raha hai mere sath..kyun bar bar mujhe arjun ke yad...
aaj meri life ka ek naya din...
phir kyuin mera past...
sach to yeh hai tum kabhi mere past they he nahi...tum aaj mere mujhme jinda ho...
kise ne sach kaha hai...
pyar mange nahi milta...or jab milta hai..to hamare sath nahi rehta...jitna bhulane ke koshish kertain hai..vo kyun hamen utna yad ata hai...
kyun kabhi kise ka pyar pura nahi hota..
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P-lady-madam madam...
riya comes out his thought..
R-haan
p-lady-vo jo madam jewllery lene gaye the ..vo abhi tak nahi aye..
R-main abhi pata kerti huin..
ab ye mahak kahan reh gaye..main abhi phone kerke dekhati huin..
are yahan to netwark he nahi hai..
bahar jaa ker dekhati huin..may be vahan network hon..
SHE GOES OUTSIDE THE POLOR--
are yahan bhi netwark nahi hai thoda age ja ker chek kerti huin...
SHE IS WALKING ON THE ROAD--
haan yahan per netwark hai..
SHE DIALED MAHAK NO..
hellow mahak.
M-etna traffic hai kuch sunaye nahi pad raha
R-mahak kahan ho tum or kitna time lagega
M-kya kuch sunaye nahi pad raha
R-are mahak meri
SHE IS BISSY WITH MAHAK ON HER PHON SUDENDLY BANG ONE PERSON...

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

n her mobile fall on the road..
she bend down n when she wanna to took her mobile hear one sound...
R U BLIND DEKH KER NAHI CHAL SAKTI..ROAD PER KOE ES TARAH MOBILE PER BAAT KERTA HAI...
Riya think...ye avaj to...bilkul...per how...is i m dreaming..or is it reality..
vo arjun...
she turn her face toward that person side...
but there is no one...yes vo arjun he tha...mere kaan dhoka nahi kha sakte...
arjun ...arjun..without waisting any minute she get up n run the same direction ..where the person has gone...N continueusly sreemining his name...
Arjun...nnn...arjun...nn..roko arjun...plz dont leav me alone...arjun kahan ho tum bus ek bar mere samne aa jayo...main phir tumhen kabhi apne aap se dur nahi jane dungi...
she ask every single person about that person...
excuse me bhaye hv u seen one man ..who wear's white shirt n black pent...
but no one know about that person...
she madly reaches his here n there..
she almost forget that today is her engazement...
Arjun ek bar bapis aa jayo ...bus ek bar...
she was unware one car is coming from her opposite side...
Ahhh...arjun...
she fall on the road n car stop...
TO BE CONTI...
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PRECAPE-riya's family searches her gor everywhere...finaly rathor found her ...
one big pary on chauhan menstion's...
did u wana to meet chauhan family...
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hop u all like ..n plz forgive for any mistake...n dont forget to leav ur lvly comment..its realy importent for next part...
thanku so much for liking n commenting all of u

hope u all