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cheval

@cheval

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Posted: 12 years ago

#631

im sorry i cudnt comment earlier i was a bit busy

bt anyway the update is super awesome dear

i feel sorry for lavanya since she also had been through a lot since childhood she also wants to be loved bt ... life sometimes has ups n downs.

as for asr im happy that he tld her the truth thats a gud thing now im waiting to knw the rest

as for the cast wooow awesome dear all amazing

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Angel13

@Angel13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#632

amazing update

what will decide?

thanks for pm

continue soon

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Nutcase

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Posted: 12 years ago

#633

But then a thought came to mind, what if this was to be a film in different languages. It was such a crazy thought and I came up with three different sets.

Your passion for movie is very much evident in these lines and in this story...hopefully one day I sincerely wish you either face the camera like you wish or work behind the screen..I know its your passion..just don't completely give up the dream...the situations and circumstances might not be favourable currently but who knows? one day it can happen in a different angle and it will be much better than what you dreamt...so fingers crossed! I have faith in you...until then let the imagination rule and lets live life like we want through the characters!

Hindi Viren is Karan Tacker alengil enter future hubby!!!!😉

Aditya has some charm, I like him. he reminds me of our akash...anyways regarding Karan Tacker, whenever I see him anywhere in IF stories I used to think of you :-) You are mad! Pagal ladki..btw for future hubby you got to wait...sorry, I don't have any plans to marry now...I think I might opt for the option which u told me..he he

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#634

C, the update had some missing, like the talk between arnav and La felt not upto the mark...you could have refined it..they need not talk..but long silence and trying to read each other through eyes or something like that..the emotions there was missing...La felt like a black board..no reaction at all...just my opinion..arnav's frustration was clear but La's stunned reaction was not perfect..she might have cried later but in front of arnav also she needed some reaction...

What would la do?? if I was in La's place...---- if I understand that my arnav is very clear about what he wants and if he is ready to face the consequences for his actions (whatever it might be) that he is going to let go of me for another lady and if he is pretty sure that he cant love me...I will let him go...there is something called "self preservation and self dignity/esteem" never compromise on it...but in another situation if he is not sure about the other lady, then talk it out where he lost the connection with me, if possible ask him whether he can give a chance to rekindle the old love charm...

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joe_arhi

@joe_arhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#635

Hey i checked pg 100 before but dint reply coz i already had image for them. For me

Viren - Karan

Anjali - Daljeet

Lavanya - Sana Khan.

Shyam - Abbas

Sorry if i have disappointed u. But for SG i dint have anyone so will choose Prakash Raj.

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#636

Curious to know what La's decision is going to be.

Thanks for the PM and all the best to you.

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archmink

@archmink

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Posted: 12 years ago

#637

Wow
Few chapters before I had read that how Arnav gets hurt and infuriated by khushi's behavior of indifference and he gets drunk and also Lavnya comes home drunk from the party and Arna ends up having sex with Lavnya ... so my point is that there are many obstacle in the way before the two lovers unites , like Lavnya will get pregnant before Arnav devorces her .., and that first chapter also makes sense how Lavnya calls Arnav n talks about their son while he shooting with Khushi and he reassures her that he will never look back once he had made a decision about moving on
Oghhhjhhjjjh this is sooo painfull
Oh I love this story it makes my heart aces painfully

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daljeet

@daljeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#638

Originally posted by: dreamymaya
C, the update had some missing, like the talk between arnav and La felt not upto the mark...you could have refined it..they need not talk..but long silence and trying to read each other through eyes or something like that..the emotions there was missing...La felt like a black board..no reaction at all...just my opinion..arnav's frustration was clear but La's stunned reaction was not perfect..she might have cried later but in front of arnav also she needed some reaction...

What would la do?? if I was in La's place...---- if I understand that my arnav is very clear about what he wants and if he is ready to face the consequences for his actions (whatever it might be) that he is going to let go of me for another lady and if he is pretty sure that he cant love me...I will let him go...there is something called "self preservation and self dignity/esteem" never compromise on it...but in another situation if he is not sure about the other lady, then talk it out where he lost the connection with me, if possible ask him whether he can give a chance to rekindle the old love charm...

1. I understand your point. Such things would have aided to add beauty to the story. But I won't use such refinements. Because, my Arnav is just like me. I f he feels he is doing the right thing, he would act fast, not thinking of consequences or other person's feelings if he is sure about what he is doing. I hope you can excuse him as you know me very well. I am not portraying an ideal Arnav who would sympathise, console La or who is hesitant to voice his feelings .My Arnav is not like that. And I think there are men like that. This Arnav is one of them.

But from the point of view of story it would have added a beauty but I don't go for beauty A. I'm of Plato's philosophy rather than Aristotle's when thought like that😳

2. La's reaction, I won't bring any change even if I get a chance again.

If she didn't know about Kushi at all I would have shown her shock. But she knew. She knew somewhere that she had been fighting a lost battle from the moment Kushi entered their lives. It was her wish that let all of it remain just rumours. But she knew it was the opposite. Because the man who couldn't love her despite living with her for 7 or 8 years, loved a girl whom he just met and it lasted for so long with them being apart for a while too, is not lust or infatuation for sure. La has senses to realize that!

She hoped it was about them and their life when Arnav wanted to talk, but she was also afraid if it is 'something else aka Kushi'!

So when the truth you know hit your face precisely, you feel absolutely nothing for a while. Then you will feel violent emotions. But La knew it is no use to show them to Arnav. She is not OPEN with Arnav yet. They don't have that between them. If Arnav and La had been in love in their marriage, and he comes now and tell her I love someone else, she might have screamed at him. But here there is a lack of it!!!

Have you seen Kerala Cafe Jyotirmayi's act. It was something that moved me beyond depths. Her reaction to Suresh Gopis' affair in the film was something that burn our heart, even though she doesn't evoke violent emotions on screen. She is a sensible woman, so is La here.

What La experienced here is slightly taken from my own experience. Of course, not the same situation. But once a truth that was glaring at me, which I avoided for long thinking of a miracle to happen; when it hit my face one day that I am disillusioning myself, I first did not react. It was not shock because somewhere I knew...then I cried, then I acted stupidly, then I acted sensibly. I think that is how a human react. But I can't generalise. But for me, in my story, I can use only the little experiences I have felt and known. So La's reaction!!!!!!!!!!!!

3. Their talk is not over. But it is not going to be a long drawn one. La was not in a state of mind to listen to him fully. She needed an outlet before it. And from the time she had lived with Arnav, she knows how serious he is about something and how much scope is there in talking out a case to which he has sealed! So she needed some time to collect herself if not her thoughts!

Their talk will continue.

4. But yes, over all I am not happy with my justice to La's emotions. But that is because I had an after thought that maybe I should have made Arnav and La in love before. Only then the intensity of La's pain will pass on to people and only then it becomes more meaningful. Otherwise it is just La fighting for a non-existent thing!

If it was so, then I coudl have tried what you said, try to talk it out, see if it works with them etc. But alas! Either I will have to change from first. But then, no! This is destined this way. So let it go with the flow or I will decide against it later. Not in this mood.

5. So now clear that Viren is younger?!

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daljeet

@daljeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#639

Originally posted by: joe_arhi
Hey i checked pg 100 before but dint reply coz i already had image for them. For me
Viren - Karan
Anjali - Daljeet
Lavanya - Sana Khan.
Shyam - Abbas

Sorry if i have disappointed u. But for SG i dint have anyone so will choose Prakash Raj.

Hey each one of you is free to see your own faces. I am absolutely okay with it.

Which Karan is it? I too have in my mind a mix of Danush and Karan Tacker in mind for Viren!

Anjali yes Daljeet. Lavanya is a mix of Sana and Nayan for me, now Manju too. lol.

Shyam is ofcourse him, can't think of another face. But you know what, there is a surprise to come from Shyam's side maybe, not just from Shyam's side. Will tell later😉

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daljeet

@daljeet

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#640

Originally posted by: archmink
Wow
Few chapters before I had read that how Arnav gets hurt and infuriated by khushi's behavior of indifference and he gets drunk and also Lavnya comes home drunk from the party and Arna ends up having sex with Lavnya ... so my point is that there are many obstacle in the way before the two lovers unites , like Lavnya will get pregnant before Arnav devorces her .., and that first chapter also makes sense how Lavnya calls Arnav n talks about their son while he shooting with Khushi and he reassures her that he will never look back once he had made a decision about moving on
Oghhhjhhjjjh this is sooo painfull
Oh I love this story it makes my heart aces painfully

I think you have got it all mixed up. La is Arnav's wife. So they did have marital relation before too. During the years when he and Kushi were apart, it was a bit more harsh on La.

About the present, wait and see😳

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