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sj_arhi

@sj_arhi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Loved the update Saiyu. Arnav was hurt not because she did not repay him for his help by telling the truth but because she broke his trust. The times he chose her over logic, the obvious left behind, she dishonoured those moments. Hence the mention of the word trust snapped him even when he wanted to believe her.

His anger blinded him completely and his outburst caused hurt but when the possibility of losing her came to the forefront he left it all to get her back. Seeing her stand at the edge of the cliff made him interpret the scene as her trying to end her life, hence the fear came out in the form of another outburst, followed by opening up to her point of view.

The last line was wonderful, she cannot help belonging to him.

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SanzBarbie

@SanzBarbie

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

I am loving this chivalrous Arnav too much.. he really loves Khushi... just love them both..

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smarty94

@smarty94

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

res.

*EDIT*

*comes out of her hiding hole* *ahemm* HI😳 sabse pehle i am very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very sorry for being soOO late... i know giving reasons like uni was tough and life was being a pain are old, but i'll still go with them, cuz that was my current halat at that time i am very sorry for not updating it for a week😕 really sorry 😕

getting back to the update, reading the first half, my reaction----> O.O SH*T SH*T SH*T!!!!!!!!! yeh kia hogaya O.O dance kartay kartay scenerio kahan chala gaya O.O

reading the other half of the update, my reaction----> O.O O.O YES YES YES YES YESSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yehi hona chahiye tha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! mera dil dance kar raha tha😆

the ending has certainly left me in thinking, ke bhai yeh scarifice hai kiaaa????????????🤔

please bata dijiye mohtarma! 😵

and i am very sorry again🤪

take care and update soOn😊

Edited by smarty94 - 12 years ago

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Abi

@Abi.Na

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

congratz on the new thread... nice chapter...

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soniachammu

@soniachammu

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Oh sweet khushi hope sheis not sacrificed for his twin I loved his shouting asking how can u leave me so sweet

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Jennifer

@Jennymyola

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

the last sentence seriously sent goosebumps up my arm! Loved khushi's complete trust and surrender. Now waiting for arnav's reaction to this magical statement... Can u please update sooner than the weekend?
Loved arnav's outburst at finding her near the cliff. Loved his priority to khushi, his respect for her choice. Loved how he came running back searching for her like crazy. And most of all, loved how u did not make this a heartbreaking judai wala chapter!
So next time, at the end of the chapter u should write, 'Hope u LOVED it!' coz like is a tad weak term...