FF:Shameless Thread #6: Ch38 Water, pg1!!

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Arshi94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#971

Oh wow Tina...amazing...

It was so gripping n nail biting...

And your Roy is very very scary...I mean the picture...

But I liked what u portrayed at the end...

Self conscience is very important...n that is what made Roy to hold back Alice n kill himself...

Waiting for the final chapter...

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#972

I am just too stunned to react anything after this part. God so much happened and hats off to you for describing it so beautifully that i could see it in front my eyes running. Awesome part Tina.
Loved the way Roy's life ended with he stabbed himself. I was literally wishing that it shouldn't be Arnav or Khusi who kills him. I just never want them to dirty their hand with his blood.
Fianlly they ll be together n safe. Please make Aman also safe. Don't kill him. He has done so much for ARHI.
I am so waiting for the mother. I so wanna know her prospective over everything...
Waiting for the next part...

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...Chanchan...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#973

WONDERFUL update tina...it was really good...loved it...yu wrote the last bit really well...i meant the death of Alice that was wonderful...cant explain that in words...plz plz plz can yu bring their baby in next chap as well...we would love to read that as well bcoz i know yu will write that part really well...will really love to read a happy ending with arnav khushi's baby..

at the same time im feeling really sad that the shameless journey is coming to an end...but this is going to be my most fav story ever...thanx.

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Priyadarshini Basu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#974

I have just one word... GOOSEBUMPS!!!

what have you done TINA??? this is bloody fantastic!!! I loved it really and when the update ended I was like NOOO it cannot end here...😆

Update soon

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unnimolarcha

@unnimolarcha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#975

The most waited chapter
it was realy a roller coster

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SViji_2706

@SViji_2706

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Posted: 12 years ago

#976

Wow!!! Not a word coming out from my mouth after reading this update...IT was like watching action pack movie combined with trill effect...Never thought detectives will be with Roy in this,loved Arnav how fought with them...Finally Roy is dead and Arnav shot Dia by tricking Alice/Roy & Dia by his play...I liked how Khushi understood the madness of Roy who earns for mother's love and used the very love against Alice...Finally all the evil dead,now looking forward to read abt the Liayana abt whom the fuss was all about...

Is Aman dead??? The Precap gives me inkling feeling abt Aman...

Sad it is coming to end in two chapters...but never thought Alice/Roy would die in this chapter as I assumed it may take another chapter for his death...

Continue soon😊

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barbiebala

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Posted: 12 years ago

#977

super fast excited update
finally love kills the evil
our arshi is fine and completely safe now
waiting for the liyana's update

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aamshula87

@aamshula87

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Posted: 12 years ago

#978

That was an amazin update.each word perfectly written.every sentence wid suspense.kushi proved she is mrs.asr.she well played d game.dia's entry was least expected then.precap was interestin.plz update soon.

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#979

that was ...(ohk...do i really need to say that? but cant restrain my urge to complement u too..😉)

BREATHTAKINGLY AWESOME!!!!

the thrilling update and the mere thought of shameless ending has blocked my mind and i dont think i will be able to come up with something sane...😆

but, Arhi's presence of mind is what i want to appreciate here!! whether it be khushi's plan or arnav recognising his surroundings, they had their minds working even at such paniky state...phew.

well i wont say that i m 'looking forward' to see who the mother of the 3 phycos is...but i definately am curious...😆

its gud to noe that Aman was not involved, rather he tried every possible way to save his Mrs Boss...(aww) but now it would surely hurt to see him die...(and i dont think he is going to survive...😭)...will be waiting...😊