FF:Shameless Thread #6: Ch38 Water, pg1!!

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zinatra

@zinatra

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#1011

That was just mind blowing.. what a pathetic end of Roy... and Dia as well..psychos...

Arnav should have killed the detective..b*st**d

Well done Khushi...

Just hope Aman is fine...

Excellent update Tina... waiting for the final chapter..

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#1012

oh thank the lord and you mostly that the nightmare is over
gosh that was so scary at some moments ]
thought she wouldnt make it away from the maniac
but khushi did thankfully
but so much bloodshed an why because of one lunatic maniac
because he wanted to be a girl and wanted his mothers love
good lord that was scary to the tilt
so the detectives were with him only which is why they never found out about roy alice thing earlier
but poor aman man did he or didnt he make it
chalo lost of the mad family members of the raina family are dead
shame natasha is still alive
would have been so cool if she wasnt there anymore
but i guess it doesnt matter as the nightmare for arhi is over
so we get to see or hear or know more about the reason roy/alice had gone crazy
it was touch at go wasnt it
os many times i though this is it she wont make it but then arnie came in time to save her thankfully
so now they can be at peace just need to take care of loose ends huh
this thriller sent shivers up my spine
no really wow you are brilliant at this
cheers for pm

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#1013

Reading this update felt like watching a Hollywood thriller.

A complete keep you on the edge, nail biting update.

You couldn't have utilized Royalice's dispositive identity disorder in a better way. Good he is dead and ArHi are together.

Waiting to see the final scenes of this story.

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crazy4ArnavSR

@crazy4ArnavSR

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1014

just read all of the update...for chap 38. and i was really surprised to see tht roy/alice's end came from his/her own hand. well...tht was definitely not EXpected...! u know Shameless has always been among my most-prized reads...and i m too surprised too know tht u had hesitated so much in reading it. but..i have always loved it...and m feeeling really sad tht it's coming to end. but...it's good tht finally ROY left. he's been a real pain to all.

thanx for PM! :)

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anuprika

@anuprika

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#1015

it was a thriller.my hands are shivering

my mind is crying.my lips are smiling

and i am shoked!!!!

i loved loved and loved this part

all the details well given..

i could picturise every bit of it..

and when khushi got pain

a pain seared through me...

i will just say this muchyou are perfect

consider writng books

yours was better than many published thrillers i have read

and close to many psychic characters i have came through...

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ARSHI_FAN11

@ARSHI_FAN11

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#1016

Hey Tina, though I couldn't resist reading the update before I left for work, now that I am back, decided to comment now 😊

What an update, seriously, I am not really a faint hearted but I could but get scared at few places, my heart-beat did go up a lot many notches to be honest 😲

I couldn't believe that the detectives were on Roy's side !!! What if Arnav had not been on that trail long back and didn't know that he was being mislead !!! (I know am being silly coz its your story and if he knew obviously you decided that he should know and thus the story but still !!! )

Poor Aman, I really wonder if he survived or not... I really want him to live... but considering Roy's planning am not too optimistic...

Hats off to Khushi and her presence of mind - I have always admired her character for her sheer strength (actually to motherhood that gives a woman that sudden, hidden, unknown power to protect her child) 👏👏👏👏👏

Good end to Dia - by her own brother, she deserved it ! What to say about Roy-al-ice - I know he was sick and really needed help but the way you described him being drenched in blood and that pic - I was shaken literally !!! But I have to admit if not for his love for his mother, Khushi would have been in danger and he too... his love for his mother and his wish to be accepted by her only took his and so many others lives...

I really wonder how did his mother didn't see all this??? All her triplets I feel were/are in some way or the other sick and she was clueless? or was she plain ignoring???? I am waiting for the next chapter and hope you will shed some light on this...

Amazing work Tina!!!!! You are simply brilliant dear !!! 👏👏👏👏👏

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diya

@luckyarshi143

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1017

Omg...dat was amazing n super thrilling update...

D ending was terrific...

Atlast alice is dead...

Atlast khushi n d baby are safe...

Eagerly waiting fr d next...

Thanx fr d pm n continue soon...

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rajvta

@rajvta

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#1018

Edge of the seat suspense and action.

that was super amazing update. Thank god all three are safe.

Great job as always!

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smilystar

@smilystar

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#1019

wonderul, amazing

i have been waiting for this so long..

u wrote very well dear... u r a genius truely..

eventhough i know that there are very less chances that aman will b safe

but still i wish he was survived by anymeans...

cont soon

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Megha. â¤

@-Megha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1020

Hey Devi Maiyya !! Alice Aka Royal Iz Truly Insane :P
Poor Khushi Had To Go Thru His Insanity In Her Critical Tym Of Pregnancy .. :'(
Bt Nw, Finally, They r Safe !! Ofcos, Our Arshi Standz Alone In All The Odd Pathz Of Lyf !! A Thunderous Applause Fr 'Em =) !!
Hoping To c Evrythng As Normal In The Cumin Updates ..
& Natasha Raina Behind Bars >:o

Tina Baby, Chap 39 Soon Pleej !!