MAANEET FF JAANE TU YA JAANE NA #9 Link # 10 pg131 - Page 52

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update Piya
Thxs for the pm
Stay blessed rab rakha
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update...
loved it...
geet happy to see maan caring nature...

waiting fr the next part...
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Luved update..so Msk on full prepn..btw di new season of jane tu..me super happy..when u ll start? Mi eagerly waiting..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update. maan made a first way to geet heart by his caring and showing authority on her.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love this Maan ❤️...lovely update 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks for your love and support dear friends. Here is the next part I hope u will enjoy reading it.


PART 58

There was a smile on her face; her heart had started to beat all over again; the wounds of her love had got the first healing touch making her feel that maybe their incomplete love story was just heading for a perfect conclusion'Yes she could dream all over again' This time her heart silently confessed "BELIEVE IN THE BEAUTY OF UR DREAMS GEET U WON'T BE BETRAYED AS THIS TIME U R OPENING THE DOORS FOR YOUR MAAN; MSK CAN BETRAY U BUT YOUR MAAN WILL ONLY MAKE EVERY DREAM OF YOURS TRUE'"

With this happiness in her heart Geet didn't realize when she stepped back in the world of dream'

Maan continued to caress her, admire her and cherish her as Geet slept peacefully residing on his lap; resting on the cushion of his chest and allowing her heart to accept the fact yes SHE COULD FALL IN LOVE ALL OVER AGAIN'

*****

This became a daily routine for Maan now he used to shower Geet with his love and also used to irritate her crossing all the limits

Geet used to use her acting skills to perfection in order to give him a royal ignorance but deep down her heart unknowingly her wounds had started to get a perfect healing touch

She had always dreamt to get Maan's love and this was exactly what Maan was giving her

Meanwhile,

Geet shared her feelings with Sanju and confessed that out of the 11 qualities that she desires to see Maan had successfully got through 3 of them by showing his authorative, caring and loving side

Sanju was very happy and challenged Geet that it is just a matter of time before she could see all the rest of the qualities herself in her Maan

As usual Geet ignored her words and continued with her work

Days passed and Geet's Hollywood venture turned out to be a mega hit sending roars globally

Geet was praised a lot for her performance and within no time offers started pouring at an unimaginable flow as most of the top directors of Bollywood as well as Hollywood wanted to cast Geet as their leading lady

Sanju informed Geet about Prem's arrival and the whole team decided to throw a success bash inorder to celebrate their happiness

Maan was extremely pleased with Geet's success but somewhere or the other Geet was not ready to digest this fact that MSK can be happy for someone else as she was sure he could only be jealous if anyone becomes more successful than him

One fine day,

At Maaneet's flat

Sanju was briefing Geet about her dates when Maan entered their flat with a freshly bloomed yellow rose

Maan welcomes Sanju with a smile and goes straight away to Geet and declared

Maan: Congratulations on your success Geet. I wish that u touch the skies of popularity with every passing day. A small gift from my side to the one and only girl who resides in my heart

Before Geet could react Sanju asked a question to Maan

Sanju: Maan ye bhi koi gift hua? Gift dena hi tha toh kuch special dethe [Maan what type of gift is this u should have brought something special na?]

Maan: Duniya ke liye ye ek saadharan sa gulab hoga Sanju par mere liye Geet ko dene ke liye isse behter gift koi aur tha hi nahi. [The world might consider this to be an ordinary flower Sanju but this was the best gift that I could ever give to Geet]

Sanju: Aisi kya khaas baat hai issmein zara main bhi toh jaanu [What's so special about this gift let me also know]

Maan looks at Geet and answers

Maan: Kisine ek baar issi flat mein mujhse kaha tha k jis din hum dono kamiyaabi ki uchayiyon ko chu le uss din agar tum mujhe koi taufa dena chaho toh mujhe ye peela gulab hi dena kyunki uss din bhi mere liye iss gulab ki keemat kayi beshkeemati heero se zyada hogi kyunki ye gulab mujhe humesha humari dosti ki yaad dilata rahega [Long back someone had metioned these words standing here right in this flat that Maan if a day arrives wherein both of us become very famous and that day if u wish to give me a gift then I would wait for this yellow rose of yours as the value of this rose will be more superior as compared to countless diamonds even that day. This rose will keep on reminding me of our friendship]

Geet's heart paced at a rapid speed as she recollected her own words from Maan's mouth

Maan: Geet ye rose maine bazaar se nahi khareda balki jisdin hum iss flat mein dubara laute ussi din main eek yellow rose ka paudha humare garden mein plant kar diya tha aaj uss paude mein pehla phool khila hai aur iss phool par humesha ki tarah bus tumhara haq hai umeed hai tumhe mera taufa pasand aaya hoga [Geet I haven't purchased this rose from the market. I had myself planted it in our garden the day both of us came back to our flat. This is the first flower that has blossomed in the plant and as usual only u have the right to claim this special rose I hope u will like my gift]

Sanju had a bright smile on her face as she was sure Geet tough exterior had melted with this soul searing simple confession of Maan

Maan kept the rose besides Geet and was just about to go to his room when Sanju stopped him by taking his name

Sanju: Maan aaj shaam ko Geet ke first Hollywood movie ki success bash hai tum aa rahe ho na? [Maan in the evening there is a success party of Geet's first Hollywood flick I hope u are coming]

Geet: Jin logo ko dusre ki kamiyaabi dekhar jalan hothi hai wo kisi ki khushiyoon mein shamil kaise ho sakte hai Sanju? [A jealous person can never be a part of someone else's success Sanju]

Maan just smiled at Geet's taunt and replied

Maan: Sanju main zarur aayunga; shooting se hi direct party venue ke liye nikal padunga mere liye ek seat reserve rakhna [Sanju as soon as I finish my shoot I will leave for the party venue do keep a seat reserved for me as I am surely going to make it]

Saying so Maan walked inside his room

Sanju: Maan ke liye toh ek special seat already booked hai mere Geet ke bagalwali [I have already booked a seat adjacent to Geet for Maan]

Geet: Sapne dekhna band kar Sanju; MSK party mein nahi aayega kyunki jealousy uske khoon mein lahu ki tarah behti hai [Stop dreaming Sanju MSK is not going to come as jealousy runs in his blood]

Sanju choose to remain silent in front of Geet's confidence and continued to do her work

Later that evening,

Geet had already reached the party venue and was awaiting the arrival of Sanju, Prem and most importantly her eyes were craving to see a glimpse of her Maan

Sanju and Prem were on their way to the venue when all of a sudden Prem's car broke down

Prem: Sanjana tum yahi rukho main check karta hoon car ki problem ko [Sanjana u stay here I will just check the car's problem]

Sanjana steps out of the car as Prem starts examining the defect

A diamond shop caught Sanju's excitement; she walked to the shop and started doing some window shopping

After few minutes

Sanju placed her finger in front of a diamond ring and voiced her wish

Sanju: Haye kitni perfect lag rahi hai ye ring mere haatho par kaash main isse khareed paati [This ring is looking so perfect on me I wish I could purchase it]

Sanju: Khair sochkar kya fayda chal chalte hai [What's the use of thinking let's walk out of here]

Prem: Sahi kaha chalkar hi jaana padega gaadi ka problem mujhe samaj nahi aa raha [U r right we need to walk and go as I fail to diagnose the car's problem]

Sanju turned around and saw Prem standing behind her

Sanju: Lift le lete hai [Lets take a lift]

Prem: Yaar Sanjana kuch chal logi toh weight reduce ho jaayega waise bhi party venue kuch zyada duri pe nahi hai [Sanjana u will lose some weight if u do some walking as it is the party venue is not far from here]

Sanju gave a strange glare to Prem

Prem: Ab ajeeb o gareeb expressions baadmein dena warna party khatm ho jaayegi [Stop giving strange expressions or else we will get late for the party]

Sanjana twisted her nose expressing her displeasure as both of them started walking towards the venue

Meanwhile,

Brilliant studios [ Maan's shooting was going on there]

The atmosphere was fully tensed; everyone was running for their life as an unexpected fire was successful in casting its evil spell at this place

The cast and crew were carrying their lead actor who was severely burnt from head to toe to the hospital' survival was something that could not be assured such was the damage done'

Precap: Geet: " Kotthe utte beh keh akhiyaan milaunde na jaana main tu kabhi chod, tere utthe mardi pyar tenu kardi milega tujhena koi aur, tub hi aa sabko chod ke tub hi aa sabko chod ke meri aakhiyan cho anju rul de [On the roof our eyes met I don't have to leave u ever, I fell for u I love u; u will not find anyone else. U too come, leaving everone as tears roll down my eyes...]

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Part 59: Page 121

Edited by piya- - 12 years ago
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me first yipppeee
awsome update
maan is happy with geet success
but geet taunt him with her words...
opppsss maan is burnt
ab kya hoga
Edited by uteem - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG MAN BURN ...

KUCH NAHI HOGA MAAN KO ...

UPDATE SOON ...


AND YES .. MEE SECOND FOR THE FIRST TIME ON THIS BEAUTIFUL STORY ...


MEEE.........🥳......



Edited by maansee - 12 years ago
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superb update
waiting for next update
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suspense is still on .Is Maan alright?
Pls keep him safe

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