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pm2rose

@pm2rose

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#961

agree the chapter was super long but it was completely entertaining ..it had so many shades to it

firstly khushi thinking about the ring and the expectations that arnav has from this marriage was nice

secondly ..i loved her sari and the way he helps her draping it ..so romantic even though he doesn't admit but he is

thirdly ..arnav getting bold and flirty made me shock and laugh at the same time

fourthly ..the talk about that arnav is not khushi's first was so well written ..his discomfort in explaining his pov and her eagerness to know everything about his past was well worded ..really appreciate your maturity in dealing with this issue

fifthly ..it tears my heart to see him in pain and the fact that he fears that he might hurt her just like his father hurt her mother was so touching n moving

lastly ..the kids issue was cute

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Hina malik

@HinaMalik91

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#962

Amazing update.story is progressing very good.i loved this chapter,emotional and funny.thanks 4 pm.update soon.

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sarrahyusuf

@sarrahyusuf

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#963

Omg.. It took me 3 days to completely read ur fiction cuz I was re-readin the chapters.. I loved the way he proposed.. Love all the characters..love it how u describe when he is jealous..

Want to comment about each and every chapter but then it will be so long..

Just keep goin... Awesome..

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#964

Nice part

Hope that khushi will understand why arnav has been hidding her past and family from her.

please continue soon

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nifty-nia

@nifty-nia

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#965

Cute! And naughty too :P Now its Khushi's turn to tease him. Poor Arnav. Nice update, a complete package of depth and fun :)

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SViji_2706

@SViji_2706

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#966

Nice😊

Never thought that convo will turn this way..

Khushi is naive but smart in her own way...Atlast they ended up in discussing for family planning...

She wants to adopt one of their children that's good to hear...

continue soon..

Edited by vs_2706 - 12 years ago

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#967

Sasak, R u waiting for new thread to post new update?

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trisasak

@trisasak

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#968

Originally posted by: shree10
Sasak, R u waiting for new thread to post new update?

No no...nothing like that! I've just hit a road block with the writing. And somehow I am able to write for HAM. So I am hoping that writing an update for HAM will bring back my creative juices! To be fair I wrote the update twice and then deleted it twice. It was very frustrating!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#969

What a chapter! It encompassed over so many emotions and feelings of togetherness - from the reflections over their first night together to gentle teasing to questions about one's partner which can be troubling to gentle assuaging of such fears to shedding light on insecurities and frustrations to comforting and finally back to teasing! Beautiful chapter!

I specially liked the part where Arnav refused to divulge details which are only Lavanya's to hold. Thats the sign of a good man, good person right there.

And also the last part where they talk over Arnav's past and his feelings of letting down himself and his mother with no one being happy and his questioning his own selflessness and the fears he has for his future and Khushi comforting him and then leading him to another thought - one full of laughter and teasing. Thats companionship. Great job! :)