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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1061

Chapter 6 -7.. That was awesome updates.. It's good to know about Gupta's thoroughly.. I'm glad you dedicated the whole chapters to Gupta... Khushi has a devoted, loving and awesome family.. Aww he was stalking her everywhere.. Seems like he can't keep his eyes off from Khushi.. The way he stares at her.. And he became a full time distraction for her after that incident... Khushi was avoiding him..and Kainaat ki har chey Arshi ko milane ki saazish mein lagi hui hai... Her friends too.. Very interesting story.. :)

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1062

Chapter 8-9... Must say very clear and strong characterization... Each and every character has its persona... And I like Aradhana Raizada the most... She is a strong headed lady.. Who supported her husband and their family... After loosing her little angel... That's really commendable... Emotional description of Raizada pariwar.. I'm feeling sad for Arnav... And aha chapter 9 was very lighthearted and nice.. Khushi wanted that she'll not face Arnav, but she felt disappointed to not see him around when she was in his house... That's really cute..

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1063

An unexpected guest arrives.. So I disappeared for a while...

Masoom si khwaish hai meri..Ban jao na tum dost meri..

This chapter reminded me, Pankaj udas song..Kya mujhse dosti kroge..

Superb part.. I like this stubborn and feisty Khushi..she has so much attitude baba..

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1064

😆First guests and then electricity breakdown..

Uff Mere Khuadya, In Interruptions ka kya naam Doon??

Chapter 11-12... Superb titles.. How cute arnav got wet in the rain just because he was seeing her enjoying the rain so much... And I love the conversation between friends.. And I love arnav's remarks on khuhsi.. Which makes her blush profusely... I had never read arshi school life like this... Loved it the way you describe their teenage crush.. Small, small gestures, remarks.. Awesome.

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1065

Chapter 13-14..Omggg!!! They are awesome... But part 14 was the best chapter so far.. It's damn hilarious.. That made me roar with laughter...

Question: "If Karan Johar were to make a film on Arnav and Khushi, what will he name it?"

Answer: "Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Arnav!"😆😆 .. I like the Title..

Aww, I can't handle this blushing arnav..☺️..so cute...

And another poem.. That was so naughty, naughty... You are really brilliant dear..

"Tum dil se hamein yun pukara na karo,

Yon tum hamein ishara na karo,

Alag alag class mein hain ye majburi hai hamari,

Tum 'we're just good friends' kehke yun tadpaya na karo...!!"

All in all, It was fabulous story and I'm enjoying thoroughly..

And Khushi's attitude surprises me all the time.. :)

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1066

15-16.. Superb parts.. Aww, chapter 13 reminded me IPKKND where Khushi had fainted Arnav was there for her.. He helped her and gave her water to drink... There were many questions that were popping in mind, when I was reading chapter 15... But now all my doubts cleared and I got all the answers after reading chapter 16... Khushi called Amman as Bhai.. Because Amna is her Buaji son... I like Amman and Khushi bond...

Right now I'm too sleepy.🥱... InShaAllah I'll continue to read this wonderful story tomorrow...

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1067

After reading last five chapters.. And they had taken me at the time of my school life when I was in 5th standard.. My class fellows and my cousins used to tease me and link up my name with my class fellow.. His name was Nauman and he was just like me, healthy hahaha...woh aksar kehte thy ''tum dono plate mein rakhe 2 gol gappe dikhte ho"

😆 😆

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1068

17-18... So that was the story of Shayam Manohar Jha..who developed feelings for Khushi.. And he can't loose Khushi without fighting for her.. that was quite interesting twist.. But she has no interest in him or in anyone..but certain Mr arnav Singh raizada khuhsi ke Dil o demagh aur uske khawabon aur khayalun pe chaaye hain..Chapter 18: Of Diwali, deliberation, disputation and dulcification... Very unique title, and perfectly suited for this chapter.. lo gol gappe ka zikar aya toh Khushi ne bhi gol gappe choose kar leye...I think girls at any age are crazy for them.. And this whole chapter reminded me fun fair days in my school.. kya din yaad dila diye..Loved it :)

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1069

19.. Interesting.. Ha-ha, how sweet arnav's gang chooses sandwiches... By their stall doesn't attract the audience much..but I'm glad that they fared much better...ommgg!!! Who called Khushi bahbhe.. Let me guess maybe it was Akash.. Because Arnav is not attached to ayushman jitna ki wo Akash se attached hai..Now I can't wait to read chapter 20...

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1070

20... first time ever my 'tukka' guess was right..yeyyy...🥳I'm flabbergasted that Khushi didn't get angry on Akash by calling her bhabhi... Aww, my, my arnav reaction was awesome... Akash ki toh khair nahi.. I like khushi's concerns for arnav health.. And loved the gol gappa competition between friends..Aman is a true friend, or may I say mischievous friend and a perfect match-maker.. hahaha..the whole scene you described very well..maza aa gaya :)

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