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Posted: 12 years ago
Now this is the part which i love... Arnav making up to Khushi... Thanks for the pm. Hope u update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I cannot thank you enough for pming me this story. What you've written is poetry here. Loving the depth you're giving the characters. I'm hooked!
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was an amazing chapter, I really loved it. The way you described Arnav's anguish and emotions, I felt so bad for him! I love when NK is being all serious, it's pretty cute haha. I love that's he's trying to help Arnav out. I can't wait to see what Arnav does to make it up to Khushi! Amazing chapter, can't wait for the next ones. And in sure those hiccups were a result of Arnav thinking so much about her ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The quote! They are among some of my favourite lines in the story. Pride and Prejudice is one of my all time favorites and this quote fits perfectly at this juncture of the story.😊

I loved the way you had written Arnav's memories of the past. The close-shave in the parking lot , Arnav letting Khushi fall from his cabin, the bridal collections shoot , his fainting , the payal returning during diwali , the unraveling of the fairy lights and so many more .It was a new experience reading them from Arnav's perspective. We can easily guess what Khushi's emotions were during each one of these incidents as her face is an open book. That is not the case with Arnav. Half the time his words, clearly spoken, are confusing .One can never be sure the man is speaking his heart or it is the ASR in him speaking.

It is amazing the way you managed to list down every one of the significant encounters in the history of Arnav and Khushi. When they fought, when Khushi intentionally irritated him, when Arnav was being particularly nasty to her, when they were helpless in the face of the attraction simmering between them….all those moments. She was out of his sight for three days and he sees her everywhere in the rain, in his beloved poolside, in his office…everywhere. This just shows the intensity of his feelings for Khushi. But what was even more touching was how he felt guilty not for hurting her alone but for making her think that she was at fault. More than her staying away from him, it is her fear of him and her belief that she had done everything wrong everytime they fought that pricked his heart.

The man is unbelievable!

First when he is forced to acknowledge his cruel actions atleast to himself after reading Khushi's diary he goes into denial mode resolving to not think of it all. And when Khushi continues being aloof he can't stop thinking of her words in her diary ! And what more he stays away from her!

Complex , Complex , exasperating man!

But the one good that came out of all this is Arnav's realization of the magnitude of Khushi's pain. He repents his deeds and has finally understood what she means to him.( I don't want to use the word love because he has still not realized his love! He went on and on about her purity, her goodness and all but not a word about love! Atleast he admitted she matters to him *sigh* .I guess I should be happy with this for now.)Now no one can stop him from making it up to her ,not even Khushi herself ,because when Arnav Singh Raizada is on a mission ,he will not rest until he completes it.😃

Khushi and her hiccups! The girl is certifiably crazy!😛

But it just goes to show how they are always in each other's mind. Even the small things remind them of the other. Payal's words made her think of Arnav immediately ! Why don't they just admit their feelings!*shaking head*

NK is amazing. "The pain in the neck" is telling Arnav Singh Raizada what to do! I never thought I'd see the day when Arnav would bare his heart to NK and the latter would be advising him! Brothers bonding eh?😆 Frankly I thought he would just be in the backdrop and the jealousy and possessiveness will make Arnav act but this is even better.

OK so now I'm eager to see how Arnav is gonna make up to Khushi.😊

For the beautiful quote and for reliving all the Rabba-ve moments I farak you!❤️🤗

PS: I am not quoting few lines from this chapter just because I loved the entire chapter too much. If I had my way I would quote each and every line and tell you what I thought and felt about it!😛

PPS: According to word this comment is 670 words long!😲

PPPS: Also, choti si request? Please don't res, unless you're confident you'll unres later :)

I feel so guilty for being terribly late. Sowwy! Hume maaf kar dijiye!😭

Edited by preethi28 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Another beautiful story by you Nafisa ... joining the ride ...
absolutely LOVE the way you have shown Arnav, Khushi. And I love the time you are taking out to flesh out the side characters. I look forward to some angst filled conversations.
One suggestion though - this story has a certain crispness to it. The crispness can be accentuated if you could incorporate some cynical humour in the style. It would give your story and your writing style that beautiful punch of being unforgettable, that most writers try to get.
Sorry if I overstepped with the suggestions,
Vee
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant. Waiting to read next part soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow.. so it was nk who could see through asr and get to arnav and help him find answers to his despair...

very sweet chapter..
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Posted: 12 years ago
I hope arnav comes up with something good.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved loved NK in this update! Hopefully
he will prove to be the push Arnav needs
to make it up to Khushi!
Also loved the way you've shown Arnav's
regret!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I dont know what it is but your writing is GREAT! and powerful and sooo full of the emotions that had made me love the serial and now make me love your story. This one is soo especially poignant-- love it! Thanks for writing!

Oh! and God I hope they get together soon, the pain i feel while reading this is horrible!

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