Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 1)

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#981

I have just finished reading 12 chapters in one shot and I must say that this is just superb

will comment in detail after finishing the story

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kooltoad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#982

how i wish i was reading it while u were updating it...

loved each and every chapter!!!

arnav's journey from where he despises her to where he likes her and then becomes so dependent on her to his possessiveness for her to him fearing that she'll leave him and then making her stay (by clearly stating as if a verdict or an order and also relenting to her threat at the same time and eating food, so as not to leave any stone unturned, doing whatever is in his power to not let go of her!)... i am loving every bit of it... :))

this FF is making me addicted to it slowly and steadily as khushi grew on the devil's heart... and poor ASR didn't even know when and how?

still two more chapters to go on this thread but i couldn't restrain from commenting after reading the last line of the 10th chapter...

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meinfrau14

@meinfrau14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#983

Originally posted by: yappingduck
simply fabulous.loved it..

I like the way it's going...cant wait for more :)

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#984

read 12 chapters in one go...fantastic concept..brilliantly written.

very ineresting..😊

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foreversarun3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#985

Just read the intro of this FF...very interesting 😊😊

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foreversarun3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#986

just read ch 1...oh no Anjali and Shyam died?? Leaving two kids behind?? What will happen next??

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foreversarun3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#987

Ch 3 was awesome!!! Loved it!! 😊😊 So now Khushi will live in Arnav's house to take care of the kids 😊😊

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foreversarun3

@foreversarun3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#988

Ch 4 was awesome!! So Arnav is starting to like Khushi a little 😊😊

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foreversarun3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#989

Ch 5 was really good...so now Arnav is starting to trust her a little bit 😊😊

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foreversarun3

@foreversarun3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#990

Ch 6 was awesome too!!! Arnav is trying to make mends with her and Khushi is unsure of whats going on in his head. lol loving how the story is going 😊😊