Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 1)

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bluewater07

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Awesome, plz update soon :)

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arnavsgirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

awesome update !!! Khushi is finally in shantivan !!!!! N arshi love story is gonna start !!!!!! Wow ! Pls pls pm me !

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glamourbird

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

very nice update!!

so khuhsi will come & live in shantivan now...

felll bad for her though...

& ASR..u need some serious spanking!😆😆

continue soon

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A, Anon, Nony, Anamika :)

@Anony_mous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

I am again not able to send the required number of PM's as I apparently don't have sufficient number of posts on the forum 😕

Sorry for the inconvenience. I hope you still read the story and comment.

Please buddy me for future PM's.

Edited by Anony_mous - 12 years ago

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penguin143

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Nice update..
Looking forward to the next parts!!
update soon..😊

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Theepthidevi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Nice story. Cant believe this s ur first story. Ur writing is so good. Waiting to know how their love story is going to bloom.

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deewani_29

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Nyc concept , n Khushi in Rm

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Reader_Hobby

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Hey!

Hats off to you! Seriously! With every update this gets better and better in terms of the emotions and feelings of various characters, which are portrayed exactly how they should be. Perfection! 👏

I understand Arnav's plight. He's been decieved, betrayed, hurt ... all in the past and thus has built a guard around himself for self preservation. Having said that, he should atleast try to not take his anger and bitterness out on others especially Khushi.

Beautiful stuff ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Edited by ASRandKKGSRFan - 12 years ago