FF collaboration: IPK.2.0-Doing it right, ch6-p136 - Page 88

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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update, Juhi!
I am so enjoying this collaboration. Each of you is a gifted writer. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update.. Loved it.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
I totally love you EXPELLIARMUS
We get 2 kisses - siiiggghhh and wow! Rocky bhi aa gaya😆 ShyamJi is not leering at Khushi and phew! Anjali has a career- seriously so many things are righted here!
I love how Khushi reacts - waiting to see her change his tyres too!
Poor HP though, Arnav may think he shud keep screaming at him to get "punished" 😆 That was a good one really !!👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
Expelliarmus my bewitching writer you disarmed me with your chapter!

Aaahhh I had a fantastic time reading the emotions/feelings jot down on the dot. Perfect.


I am noticing a trend of 'how dare you _______'...lol.

Arnav is always a step ahead and ready for surprises but not with khushi.

These little thoughts of the characters made me realize how much I miss this show.

So the chapter started with excitement...their kiss...as I was slipping into a spell I was pulled back abruptly to earth along with Arnav. Amused eyes read on the little glitch Arnav had. Thennn my inner woman jumped in glee at the thought of Khushi changing the tire in saree. Suddenly the rain made me forget about woman power and look forward for romance which indeed followed brilliantly. Oh boy I fell into the warmth and softness...you know the same feeling you feel when you eat nonasi's dispaly picture...sigh! Phirrr I did what the hell at those jokers. Just as my devil and angel were cheering on Arnav the hand that stopped him stop me too. Then BAM LOL HAHAHAHAHAHAHA GO KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA ROFL!!!!


See I gave you a detailed explanation on how you disarmed me at every moment of your chapter... :-p

Great work!

*Air Kiss*

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Posted: 12 years ago
Juhi u set such high standards...
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Posted: 12 years ago
i was drowned in a pool of emotions of love, lust ,romance and possessiveness when ms.khushi kumari gupta successfully managed to knock me off my trance with chulbul pandey...
this woman is unbelievable..but yet she exists...!!!!!!!!!
chulbul panday?? like seriously????🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update loved the rain scene was beautifully written but omg khushis last line stole the whole chapter lmao
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Posted: 12 years ago
LMAO! Don't you dare turn away when I'm trying to kiss you!

Hats off to you Mr Raizada =D

Amazing writing! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG...they actually shared a kiss...way to go...much faster than da serial anyways n just like da name of dis FF - Doing it Right!!!

oh but tell me...is khushi planning to deal wid da goons on her own...dis i gotta see...

and belive me it feels so good to know dat dis time around shyam's a decent man...

thnx guys - for dis lovely creation of urs...
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Posted: 12 years ago
My God Anjali & Shyam saw them together in a most compromising situation

Then the hot part

I can't to read what Khushi does with the goons
"Chulbul Pandey ke kasam"🤣

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