ACP Arjun ka Apharan.. updated part 19 on pg 92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#341

Originally posted by: Queen.Bee
lol.. yeah riya to arjun ka band lagatar bajatha rehta hai.. lol..

poor arjun.. n this choree bhi na.. uff shru ko bhi dostana kahani bata diya... so rathore n shruti was a couple..

hey.. i have a request.. make arjun a bit more.. u know.. like arjun.. she torchered him this much na.. i want to see him overpowering her.. i mean her idea backfiring ... i just want him prove who is he to her... before reaching her family...

it would b good if he is free n decides to stay back..

thank you so much...

and i have tried to show Arjun as "the Arjun" in the next update...

and shruti and choree... i love to write about them the most...

keep reading and hopefully you like next update as well

Edited by aptl123 - 12 years ago

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aptl123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#342

Originally posted by: tripti123
yaar!😆👏
it is super duper amazing!!!!!
tumhe to arjun (star plus) ka writer hona chahiye tha!!!
very amazingly written!!
i started imagining how it must have happened!!!
and chotu and shree and even shruti,just unbelievable!!!!
arjun au riya ka kya kahun?
WOW!!!!!!!
A BIG APPLAUSE FOR YOU!!!
👏

oh my god... thank you so much...

wonderful comments...

sounds good to me about "tumhe to arjun (star plus) ka writer hona chahiye tha!!!" but dont think its good for the show...

hahaha

thanks

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aptl123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#343

Originally posted by: DesiiiDivaaa
Awesome!!! This update was worth waiting. I couldn't stop laughing. Very well written and the dialogues were superb👏

Continue soon. Eagerly waiting for the next part😊

thank you so much...

and i promise you wont have to wait long for the next update

keep reading and hope it will make you laugh always...

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aptl123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#344

Originally posted by: Princeess07
Arjun kuch v kare Riya usse ek kadam aage he hai...
Liked the plane part...
Shruti's dream...
Nice one..
Liked it..
Continue Soon..

thank you...

riya is riya... and Arjun is also arjun...

you'll read more about shruti's madness in comming updates

i'll update next part soon

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aptl123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#345

Originally posted by: Payal_156
Rofling
rofling
rofling
rofling
loved it..

thank you...

hopefully this ff will make you laugh always...

keep reading and give me your feedback

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aptl123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#346

Originally posted by: kunchu
what an idea sirji!!!
kya baath hai!!
too good yaar
missed yr updates and now you r back!!

i am glade you like the concept...

you dont have to wait long for next updates...

tird to post asap

thank you

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aptl123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#347

Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...
Awesome update!!

thank you...

keep reading

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Posted: 12 years ago

#348

Originally posted by: madmadona
nice update
omg riya made him fool by lying abt sleeping pills
i doubt it earlier when she gave the bottle😆
shree chotu shruthi superb dostana & their dream omg🤣
aww arjun call her Mrs. Riya Arjun Rawte☺️
how sweet to hear this from him😳😛
superb lovely
cont soon

thank youuu...

the most funny part of this ff is with Shree, chhotu and shruti...

i love their chemistry too...

i wish we could have that type of scene in show too...

where arjun would call roshni or whoever is in oppisite to him, Mrs. Arjun Rawte

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aptl123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#349

Originally posted by: ashmijoseph
SUPER UPDATE DEAR... AUR KAHA JARAHE THE TUM, KITHNE DIN KE BAAD ME YE UPDDATE,...
waise ye bahut superb hai, update jaldi karo na

ya i was in india... to attend cousin's wedding...

so was very busy...

thank you for you comments... dont have to wait long

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aptl123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#350

Originally posted by: MriduB
Awesome! 👏
Vaise kehna mujhe yeh chahiye ki Hillarious update thi! 🤣
Haye Bhagvan! Kya ho raha hai yeh sab? 😆
Eager to know what happened b/w Sam-Shru!
Continue soon!

they all had created such a mess...

each one of them making it more complecated...

sam-shru's past will revealed soon...

thank you