SwaRon FF: Mistake OR Meant To Be.? #3

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Pooja-J

@Pooja-J

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Posted: 12 years ago

#651

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#652

Kria and Sharon's convo was really cute and Thank God, Sharon finally decided to reveal her relationship with Swayam to everyone !! But looking at the last part, it seems like Swayam has already told everyone !! I wonder what's going to happen next !!

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Simren

@DanCing_DiVa_SK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#653

Hey awesome chapter
Kriya and Sharon convo was cute
FInally Sharon made a decision of telling everyone about their relationship...
Waiting for the next update eagerly please update soon...
Do please PM me as always...

Simren👏

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spicyrays

@spicyrays

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#654

Swayam ne bta bi diya oh m g... Ab paka sharon ko panib atck ayega... Its realie... Amazin...update...
Day by day as i read uar updates... M gettin too much indulge in it... Just luvd it... U r doing grt wrk wel d0‹2ne...dear...

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#655

HAHAHA.. You know Manasi everyday when I start going through my PM's for the updates on FF's or SS or any new OS and when I see your PM for this FF I save it for the last. Just because as one eats desert at last for have a lingering effect of that dish in his mouth similarly I read it last because this FF really leaves me happy after each update. This time was no different. I loved Kriya and Sharon interaction. It was incredible. Really liked the way it was penned and how Kriya managed to persuade Sharon about coming out about her relationship with Swayam. Even though there was almost no SwaRon in it but still it was the last bit when Swayam announces that girls are giving Sharon a baby shower made up for it. I knew Swayam would inform other about their relationship soon after geeting permission from Sharon but this fast? Reallyy not thought about it. Awesomely done with last part really left me with a big grin.

P.S- Have I mentioned how much I love small cultural refrence every now and then which reminds me this FF is placed in our world and people in it are not that much different. For ex - I really liked how you used the Terminator refrence of 'I will be back' in an awesome way. There has been mor such refrence in it which I am forgetting now. But waht I want to say is that this all make the reading this FF even more enjoyable.