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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#951

Just started reading this story - my first experience at reading your work, and I love it!

So I have just read the first chapter, and there are two halves of me that are at war.

The first half is the one that's screaming that Arnav is a creep, the side that wants to scream at him and run away. I mean he is taking advantage of a poor, helpless girl!

However the other half is the one that is imagining Barun as Arnav, leaning against the desk, hands in his pockets, the grey waist-coat, a smirk on his face as he looks down at Khushi. And holy shit, I swooned.

So I am excited to read this further and see how it goes!

Exams ongoing, so I'll read while procrastinating, and I'll be sure to drop in a comment! :)

Edited by Krani - 12 years ago

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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#952

Okay so I said that I'll read while procrastinating - and when I wrote that I had meant to say that I am going now and going to finish another chapter in Psych.

But dude, I am hooked. This is awesome.

I am a fan of subtle things in stories - as you can probably see in AM - so when you wrote that Arnav's hand stilled as Payal uttered those words, I got a massive smile on my face. Actions speak so much louder than words.

Great story so far!

Looking forward to reading what happens next :D

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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#953

Oh no, oh no, oh no, oh no, oh no, oh no, oh no!!

Duuude!!

How?!

Was it Sim? *glares at Sim*

Was it Lavanya?

No..it's...who was it?!

I love Payal :D Love, love, love her! :D

Seriously great job so far, loving this story! Why didn't I read this before?! -.-

Stumbled across it when someone made a thread looking for your FF :)

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Jyothsna

@joe4joe

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#954

just love payal a lot in tis ss.
Brilliant work.

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Kiran :P

@Arshi1988

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#955

Never read this before so would totally wish too :( xx

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avika_ShArMa

@avika_ShArMa

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#956

yippie! you're gonna repost it!! 😃

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sheethal

@akshad

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#957

Hi, iam looking forward to read ur story, plz pm me the blog link
sujitha_ashok@yahoo.com

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#958

I recently read your Love interrupted and loved it very much...would love to read your other work as well...can you please give me your blog link...my email id yoga1237@gmail.com...thanks in advance...

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@Jhalak29

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#959

Reading it in one go...

As usual u maze me with this tale..😃

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upss1993

@upss1993

Explorer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#960

Awesome...
I just love the way u write...
keep going...
we love u...
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