FF:Something About You Thread#3 *COMPLETED*

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tanurocks

@tanurocks

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#841

her feel loads better! Then she looked up at him with a small start as he spoke again in a low voice, "Don't shut them out. Don't isolate yourself like this!... Because when you do isolate yourself like this & shut the people out who care for you... you just lose the chance to get it all out & in the process you turn yourself into a person who..." He suddenly looked down at his own hand lying motionless in his lap, "Who becomes... just incapable of that kind of care & commitment again in his life."

EXCELLENT 👏

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divya

@diyadivya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#842

gd dat khushi vent out hr feelings

arnav wud lwz b dr fr khushi im glad

awsum updt

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#843

good update..interesting..continue soon..😊

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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#844

Being polite won't work here..will it,no never...it makes her to feel that she is nt frm the same family...nw she is feeling responsibility towards them,cz of their greatfulness...her outburst to Arnav is understable cz the way they r treating her,it make her realise that she is nt a part of this family and it will put her in an uncomfortable situation..then how come they expect her to be ok... Arnav,he is the one person who she need nw..and nw he is there for her nd for himself,hopefully we can wait...thanx dude for the pm...

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darya20

@darya20

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#845

superb update i loved it sooo much :)

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soppy

@soppy

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#846

i love this!...i love this!...i love this!...thats all i have to say!...please update soon...and pretty please make it a longer update?

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#847

For the first time in their interactions, Arnav was very mature and understanding with Khushi. Maybe right kind of support she needs at the moment. I think of all the people around Khushi Arnav can relate very well to Khushi's feelings at the moment. Though we dont know his past comepletely(padon me if you had mentioned about it earlier), I think he had to face something similar.
It's funny people around you expect you to behave certain way or feel certain way when an incident happens. I found it very realistic the way you captured Khushi's confusion -"I don't understand how I feel" Very well done.
From precap it looked like he was sharing his own experience with her.

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207shikha

@207shikha

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#848

farah bow down to you.! you are such a brilliant writer.!

i mean already the intensity of the past chapters did their job

of killing me and now once again you threw your another bomb.!

gosh man this fanfic is terrific.! argh i love it dammit.!

continue soon..

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.ProperPatola

@.ProperPatola

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#849

The situation between Khushi and her family is so well written. You can actually sense the hurt, worry and caution in each of their reaction to each other.

Glad that Khushi has let it all out to Arnav. If I am not wrong, Arnav is talking about himself in the precap, and he doesn't want Khushi to turn like him! Glad to see Arnav is acting mature here!

I hope both together find their way out of this sad situation and hope she understands what Arnav is trying to say!

You have carried out the amazing intensity throughout the past chapters to this one so so well!

Your each word is so well chosen and put into sentences which perfectly helps in picturing the situation!

thanks for the pm!😊

Edited by SaRunForevertgr - 12 years ago