ARHI FF: MASTERCLASS THREAD 7- NEWCHAPTER 69 PG126

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suma.2911

@suma.2911

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Posted: 12 years ago

#661

i have been following ur story since some time but had not caught up with the recent chapters.. it was little strange how things between arnav and khushi changed so mcuh and so soon. but you potrayed it so beautifully.. when they fall in love, the meeting with arnav's nani, the wedding. it is very nice how you pay attention to detail- the importance you give to subtle emotions..

from the big picture though it looks like such a simple story it is so captivating only because of it's intricacies..

can very easily see how and why nani would react this way. it was nice to see how khushi stands up for him.. all his life he has been fighting for others and protecting others.. now someone in standing up for him and that is one of the best feelings.

condolences for losing your grandmother. hold on to the wonderful memories you have shared with her.

and the update was very nice :)

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AbdulloveIPKKND

@AbdulloveIPKKND

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Posted: 12 years ago

#662

I really love this update and it was very cute.
The message that you put in the end made me cry.
BE STRONG because the people around you need the most. I don't know how it feels to have a Nani because I wasn't even born when my nani died but when I ever hear other people talk about their nani I always feel gloomy and miss her. I never got a better experience with my dadi either. I was small when she died so I didn't even know that much about it but I miss her.
Everything will be fine. Just remember that she is in a better place now and enjoying her after life.

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Jina

@Happy-go-lucky

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Posted: 12 years ago

#663

May your Nani's soul rest in peace... And this was a nice update. Arnav and Khushi will always be there for each other, and if anything, the incident with the photographer only strengthened their bond... And I liked how you are going about Payal-Akash's story :)

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Amrita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#664

I am sorry about your loss... But, that one thing we cant stop... Coming back to Update... I loved the way Khushii protected Arnav and made him look at her in awe... and the last para... I just loved it

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Chocochips

@Chocochips

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Posted: 12 years ago

#665

I have never really commented before , but your're an amazong writer!
I'm really sorry to hear about your nani :(

Stay strong girl!!! My wishes are with you and your family!

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abjeya

@abjeya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#666

it was a really good chapter naina. the way khushi and arnav stood up for each other and the way payal and akash caught the way both of them thought. too good.

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roshaan

@roshaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#667

awesum update loved it feels really sad for ur loss dear i hope u n ur family cope up frm this hardtime soon losing love one is terrible thing i can feel ur pain

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#668

Going to read master class again today from start to upto now

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barbiebala

@barbiebala

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Posted: 12 years ago

#669

nice update
its shows the care of our elders towards us
liked both khushi and arnav standing for both
simple gesture of hugging enough to feel protected

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deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#670

ive just come across ur ff recently and since then ive been spending all my free time catching up with it

a very big congratulations to u, it was mind blowingly beautifully written!

im so in love with this arnav and ive super liked the way love bloomed between them and finally they gave a beautiful name to their relationship. like the way u described the gradual change in arnav from ASR to Arnav.

hope u continue soon

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