ARHI FF: MASTERCLASS THREAD 7- NEWCHAPTER 69 PG126 - Page 58

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First of all... this has to be one of the most touching and beautiful chapters... so please don't say that it is not the best.

To me, this chapter is about your way of trying to cope with the loss of your Nani and not just the story moving forward. I can relate to how it feels as i lost mine 3 yrs ago and i still miss her so much! When our elders leave us, they leave a massive void and sometimes they leave without giving us a chance to tell them just how important they are to us. That warm and secure embrace is gone, the care, concern, the lap to put your head on is gone, but then there are so many things that will always stay with you...the wisdom they shared, the pranks, the smiles, laughter... a lifetime of beautiful memories to cherish :). The only solace is the hope that they have gone to a better place where their soul will rest in peace. May god give you and your family the strength to get through this difficult time Naina.

I'm so glad that you decided to write this chapter... just beautiful. Stay strong girl... time and memories will help you get through...

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just great update di

Seeing you come back to writing is the most beautiful tribute you could give your Nani.

it was amazing part wherein u tried to portray the feelings of the elders in the house. how they try to protect the younger ones in the family and did complete justice to it. somewhere down the line i think u were trying to relate it with u r nani which showed in ur writing. it was a very good update. i know at this moment u are emotionally drained but the update brought out all ur love and affection in form of poetic justice.

sorry to hear about your nani may she rest in peace

chapter was awesome

loved how they defended each other

You updated finally!

It was a beautiful chapter. I liked how Khushi stuck by Arnav and how they protected each other. The emotions were portrayed beautifully.

Naina my hearty condolence to u...