ARHI FF: MASTERCLASS THREAD 7- NEWCHAPTER 69 PG126 - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
Naina,

Thanks for taking time out of your busy schedule and writing this wonderful update.

I was really happy to see an update for MasterClass.

Glad that Arnav and Khushi made the announcement to the family, now they have all their love and support. I loved the line that Arnav made..."Her mentor was so impressed with Khushi... so he married her" 😉 That was awesome.

You did ramanchi Naina...I thought it was Arnav and Khushi kissing each other but it was Aman and Anjali 😲 No probs because you did mention they had a sceret moment, so we still imagine it was A and K 😉

Payal is getting bold..LOL.

Aww how many will you make me say Arnav is such a caring husband yaar...loved how he understood and took care of her

Please cont soon...


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Posted: 12 years ago
S glad that you are not ending this story. I love to read your writing immensely
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update. Can't wait to see how things pan out with the other two potential couples.
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice chapter!!
arnav is so thoughtful..well communication is the key to success, it's good that they try to follow that quote 😊
i'm so glad that you decided to continue this story 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi Naina, 😊

Congratulations for the new thread. 👏 I am so glad you are planning on continuing this amazing fan fiction. 😃

Now on to the update...I really like the way you are portraying Payal in your story. She is so openly flirting with Akash and I like the edgy Akash as well. Really great personality traits in both characters. On to the very sneaky couple, Anjali and Aman! I wonder how Arnav is going to react to the news of his best friend dating his sister under his nose...lol...It would be really funny. 😆

Arnav is so caring towards Khushi needs and tries his best to not lose his temper around Khushi. So sweet! 😊

I am guessing there will be two weddings taking place in the near future. 😛

Edited by Rimz_k09 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ok seriously Naina what the hell are you doing...
What are you DOING!!!
The heat between Arnav and Khushi wasn't enough that you had to add on Aman and Anjali?????
and then the tip of the iceberg...
A very unusual nok jok between payal and Akash...
Like are you not tired of out doing yourself every single time... I mean I'm exhausted with my compliments...
Ok seriously though... contact the production house and show them your fan following and give them master class as a script...
OH no what am I saying... they would ruin it with some nonsensical family drama... but man would I kill to see Barun and Sanaya play this version of Arnav and Khushi!!!!
Outstanding job... see you in the new year...
Lots of Love
S
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Posted: 12 years ago
W P NAINA ...HEY LADY WRITER HOW ARE YOU ,ALL GOOD ??

THIS WAS AN EXCELLENT UPDATE

YOU HAVE A WAY WITH WORDS

LOVED THE LAST PART ESPECIALLY ...ARNAV IS SO TENDER WHEN IT COMES TO KHUSHI

...WOW ...SIMPLY WOW

WHAT A HEALTHY BEGINNING OF A STRONG RELATIONSHIP

ANJALI AND AMAN ...I ALWAYS PICTURED HER WITH HIM [ EVEN IN

THE SHOW I HAD WISHED HIM TO BE HER PRINCE CHARMING]

WHAT A SUBTLE WAY TO ANNOUNCE THINGS ...YOUR ARNAV IS

POISED AND GRACEFUL TO THE HILT


THANKS FOR THE UPDATE


KEEP ME ON HIGH ALERT


LOOK AFTER YOURSELF [TENSION LENE KI NAI DENE KI CHEEZ HAI ]





KKKA


Edited by KKKA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm falling deeper and deeper in love with ur arnav with evey update. He is seriously too good too be true and can only exist in stories. I mean how can a man be so sensitive and compassionate. That's actually impossible in real life.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Naina Darling,





Congrats for the new thread 👏👏👏

Read your comments...I was expecting the same from you 😉😉...do let me know when your gonna migrate your Ff to blog and do PM me the link 😃😃...Enjoyed reading the long update...thanks for the PM. Wish I could insist you to pen the next chap but I know you need time for your family 😃.

You made me happy by penning a long chapter, loved their fight post marriage fight 😆😆...How much more perfect can Arnav get as a husband
...how he defended that Khushi needs to speak to his family about her JJ venture and inspite of him losing his cool for Khushi's behavior he still tried to control himself and explained to her that she would have to speak to his family and delaying it any further would do no good to her. Hmm Khushi finally spoke to the family about her dream to re-start her father's business since he could not continue due to his health issues, Loved the way she started to tell them how she meet her mentor and how he said her off after hearing her plan to open a sweet shop...... however after listening to her plan how he supported her and helped her to secure funds from Amina's firm to start her venture...it was emotional 😃😃...felt like you summed up the FF in one go 😆😆...True to her Character Devyani did give her permission for khushi to work 👏👏

I was thinking NK or Mamiji would ask Khushi about her mentor/teacher, and Bingo Mamiji asked her and the way Arnav replied that mentor was impressed so he married her ❤️
❤️( I love Dammit 😆😆)

OMG Payal is just the opposite to which I saw/watched in IPK serial...she challenging Akash to play teacher teacher 😲...Loved the romantic moments between Arnav and Khushi before they came down for the party ...my reaction after reading it ☺️
☺️ ☺️

Nainz, I have a query in the earlier chapters you had mentioned that Devyaniji is aware of Anjali's relationship...then why are Aman and Anjali meeting secretly... is that other family members do not know about this??...How cum Arnav is not aware of the undercurrent between his sis and Aman ??

Ahha the Party did go well, Aman teasing Arnav and Arnav really did not mind 😲😲...good that Aranv invited Amina to the party since khushi would be working closely with her for her JJ venture and the party was being held for both thier clients ...Payal once again challenging that Akash accompany her to the guest house and slightly ignoring NK's wish to accompany her...Interesting 😆😆😆 Again meaningful communication between Arnav and Khushi in thier bedroom about thier being intimate...how Arnav did not want to hurt khushi and, khushi being herself did think the opposite...loved how Arnav explained that he did not want to hurt her and that they could get some sleep...Nainz it is irresistible to not fall in love with your Arnav😳😳...Will be looking forward to read how the next update would be..knowing that Arnav and Khushi are going to give thier official press conference about thier marriage.


Cheers,

Sai_Neha

Edited by sai_neha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats on thread 7 dear...
update soon please...

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