Hey K!
I'm so so sorry for not having commented on your last five or so updates. I had semester exams and the sad state of the show was really depressing me. But anyway, I'm back and loaded with a massive comment to make up for everything.😃
Let me tell you, if anyone thinks that your story is slow paced and they're damn wrong. This has such an amazing pace of its own that I can't help being hooked to every single update of yours, whether big or small.
Arnav is really being a jerk. I mean I understand that he's frustrated because he's attracted to someone he hates but that doesn't mean that he behaves like this. It's outrageous! And my poor Khushi. I felt terrible for her. Her fumbling journey through Melbourne kind of reminded me of Sridevi in English Vinglish. (A really good watch. Tribute to our Indian housewives) It's not like she's doing any of this purposely. If she could then she would involve herself less and less with Arnav but its just not possible.
Coming to the outburst - It was perfect. Every detail in the description and each word uttered by Khushi enhanced the magic of the confrontation. Khushi had some major steam pent up and when she let it lose, Boy did it get hot in there! And as usual, Arnav had to be a jerk again.
But yay! You brought in a very significant change in him and possibly in their relationship. The apology. The fact that he felt guilty shows that he's not completely immune to her predicament. It means that we have a pretty promising future 😉
That's about all I can muster up right now. And if you update part 29 soon, I promise to leave behind an extra large comment.
Love you to bits K! 🤗
And I hope I've redeemed myself a little in your eyes 😳
Anupamaa
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