Beautifully written. I loved this Update alot.:)
The relationship that siblings share,the love and care and adoration one have for other..its the MOST beautiful bond.Jhagda bi pyar se karte hai..😆I remembered how after fight I used to tell my bro that am not going to talk to him for 12 months,and next within 12 mins I used to be back arguing with him.😆
I loved how you begin with update,a young baby Arnav,wanting to be like his father..immitating his actions..i liked this part.Next,I loved the way you have protrayed the characters ..Payash,Anjali n Rohan.
The conversation between Payash--Akash precisely guessing her reaction-just shows how well they know each other--PERFECT.
Payal's concern for Khushi--the small memory of their childhood-gives a glimpse of their bond.Payal will be always there for Khushi.
I loved Anjali,Arnav conversation.It also gave us peep about their dad..-Arnav addressed him directly by his name,,and he said that they saw 'Real' him,:/,,and the reference to 1998,,So his dad has got to do lots with the past..that made Arnav so cold n dark.
Eagerly waiting for next part.Thanks for pM.
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