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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter 2 was nice and good it is... update res of the chapter soon...😲😲😲😲😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyccc story... but nxt tym do pm dis tym i never got...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awwe ... such a sweet Os !!!

Very nice start dear ...

Both of ya .. good job !!!

Do continue sooon ...

Wannna read more of it ...

P.s- Do PM me ...

Thanq ...

~Sweets =D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mEgical_arsha

Awwe ... such a sweet Os !!!


Very nice start dear ...

Both of ya .. good job !!!

Do continue sooon ...

Wannna read more of it ...

P.s- Do PM me ...

Thanq ...

~Sweets =D



aww ty sooo mch! 😳😳 😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NXT DAY...

rey woke up his eyes were burning he couldnt open his eyes suddenly he remembered last night he got up with a jolt n searched kria in the whole house she was no were to be found...he thinks it was just a dream...n goes to his room freshes himself and left for kitchen to have tea...he prepared tea n sat on the sofa n switched on the tv...

news flashes that a girl suicuided n asking the people came to know her name his kria...

he shouts no on top of his voice...

rey: nahi..nahi aisa nahi ho sakta yeh sab joot hai...joot hai yeh sab...mai nahi manooga...kal raat hi kria mari baahon mai thi...aise kaise??? nahi...nahi...NAHI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(shouted)

he looks at his hands how he felt her -last nite in his arms n remembers hw he felt her face wid his hands...he wipes his tears

he runs up to his bedroom n cud see those gifts lyin on the floor...he grabbed all the gifts fell on his knees crying bitterly...

IN VICKY'S PLACE

the gang were practising (except swayam)...n they were not sure abt the song so they switched on the tv to find some latest song as they were surfing channels they ended up hearing the news all were shocked to the core...

vish: kria??

all statred crying shron was rooted to her place she didnt utter a wrd she ,kept on staring the tv screen...

AT SWAYAM'S PLACE...

swayam recevies a letter the envelope read kria that she had sent him last evening... he immediately opened the letter he reads it...the letter had the thruth of her dil dosti n dance...he never thaught in his wildest dreams that some one could sacrifice so much in their life...he broke down by the sacrifice his bestie hade made for them...he felt guilty that even he could nt understand her...n forgot her...he cried badly...

he suddenly remembered rey without wasting time he moved to rey's place at the same time the gang also reached their...sharon went hugged swayam and cried her heart out...even swayam did the same..
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they moved inside n goes to rey's room...

his condition was hell...he was crying...swayam placed his hand on rey's shoulder...rey hugged him tight n cried everybody was crying...

re: swayam kria???(crying)

sw: sshhh!! rey sambal apne apko...(crying)

re: mai apni baatcutter kop samaj nahi paya vo itna kuch seh rahi thi aur mai...mai apni zindagi mai kush tha...vo mujhe chodkar hamesha keliye chali gayi swayam...mai uske bina kaise rahoonga...

rey: nahi nahi nahi mai bi kria ki paas hi chala jahoonga...mai mai uski bina nahi rehsakta...he ran out of his room n went up to terrace n locked the door...the gang shouted...they banged the door...swayam hit the door so hard that the door flung open...rey was abt to jump but swayam pulled him and slapped him hard...rey was not listening to him...

rey: mai chala jahoonga uski paas...

rey was chanting the same thing...n trying to jump...but swayam again slapped 3 times...

sw: rey pagal ho kya???(n shook him)kria hamesha chahti thi ki tum kush raho mai kria ka best friend hokar uskeliye kuch nahi kar paya...tum bi mujhe chodkar maat jaa...

rey hugged him...

atlast they decide that kria ka sapna dance tha n wo apna sapna poora nahi kar payi...they started a dance academy on her name...

rey in his cabin caressed kria's pic...

rey: baatcutter chahe tum iss duniya mai nahi ho...lekin hamesha meri dil mai rahoge...my heart oly n oly belong to u n no one else...tumhari jagah mari zindagi mai koi nai lesakta...i love u baatcutter

*THE END*





Edited by kreya_pearl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Res😎
Unres...
Read all the updates...
They are awesome 👏
But kriya died? 😲
Thanks for the pm...
Edited by ..Cinderella.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
amazing one bt kriya died 😭

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Posted: 12 years ago
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😭😭😭😃😃😃
superb part👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow amazing update soon wagting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice part..

Ahh kria died... :'(

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