a kr os: ONE LAST TIME

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HEYY MY DEAR KRIYAANSHIANS'DIS IS 4 U GUYSSS':D

Hey guys dis is my vrrry 1st os'n surely itz gonna be vryyy short as well'..m a die hard kriyaansh fan!!! Or to be more precise m fan fan whus dying to c kriyaansh again';)

So letz begin wid it''.d strt is vry simpl as wel d ending'.bt beechka prt wil be tooo filmy to handle :P';)

CHAPPY 1...

It was a ordinary day for extraordinary reyaansh singhania orrr rey'''d guy whu gav his hrt n soul in his vry 1st luv'''d destiny broke dem aprt on a vry cruel note''poor soul thgt he had been hrt'.bt dint knew dat d prsn whu had hrt him'was more dan hrt'.she was kriya ghai'.d mst beautiful'.d mst innocent n cute'..

He thgt falling in luv again was no big deal'n den he strtd fallin 4 taani shekawat'his vry own bestie's sis(shi kch sharam karo rey:P)'.n he assumd it to be luv not realizing d fact dat it was jst an attraction'..poor soul again''.

Guma firake aaj ke day pea ate hai''

So dat day was quiet diffrnt''.he was happy outside bt sumthing kpt pricking him badly frm inside thou he tried hrd to knoe wat is it he failed in his attmpt''..

He returns home at night n thinks,'"rey yaar dude tuje kya hogaya hai suddenly itna distrbd kyu hai tu aaj..let me revise today's day'arghhh'aaj toh sab kch acha he hua yaar'lyk Sharon ko swayam n aashi ka dout bhi clear hogaya''dance ban bhi nikaldiya'neha Vicky patchdup'..so watz makin u sad?? Cheerup guy!..."

Den suudnly his hrt skippd a beat as if sum1..sum1vrrry close to his hrt was in big trouble..or was goin vryy far away..d dist he can nvr covr''..he was confusd n decides to callup swayam'

Swayam's cell rings'

Sw: ha bol rey''.

Rey: ahhh'swayam yaar sab thik toh hai na?

Sw: ha rey sab thik hai..bt ye bata tut oh thik hai na? I mean itni raatko call krke meri halat puch raha hai?

Rey: arey nai nuthin lyk dat'bas aise he'actually'pata nai dude subese kch weird feel kar raha tha..u know as if dil ka koi kareeb insaan is in big trouble'so isliye tuje call kiya'

Sw: oh I c''.

Rey: Sharon thik haina?

Sw: arey ab muje kaise pata hoga ki is waqt wo kaisi hai'.

Rey: ohhh aisa kaisa ho sakta hai yaar'terese acha Sharon ko kon jaanta hai be?'

Sw: (blushes) rey yaar tu bhi na'.

Rey: ha ha sharamana bandh kar'.waise taani kaisi hai'..?

Sw: ha wo toh thik hai'Wait wait! Tu taani ke bare mai kyu pooch raha hai?? Wo tere dilke kareeb ki insaan kabse bangayi??

Rey: dude chill!! Mai toh generally puch raha tha'.

Sw: bt''.

Rey: bt wt kch nai chal bye'g nab muje neendh araha hai'.

Sw: (thinks n smiles) bada ajeeb hai'..

Rey: (thinks)''.agar sab thik hai toh mai kiske liye itna disturbd hu???? He den remebrs he had to giv his cloths 4 dry cleaning he jumps out of d bed''.n removes d cloths frm d cupboard hurriedly'''den suddenly'..he gets a purple cloth or a hanky''(it was kriya's hanky wich she had droppd in d rehearsal hall during dat dilse rey sequence)'..he remember's dat'den flash back in frnt of his eyes'''.he strts smiling uncontrollably while cherishing those momnts wid his baat cutter'.

Rey: (thinks)''kya ye feeling kriya ke liye ho sakti hai?? Nah nah mai toh use kabka bhool chukka hu''waise bhi wo fame ki pyaasi konse bade trouble mai fassi hogi'wo toh dusro ko fasane mai bzy hogi''..huh 4get it dude'.

N den he jumps on his bed'bt while lyin'he cudnt stop worrying 4 his baatcutter'''thou he thgt she had hrt him he cudnt change d vry fact dat he still luvd her''.thus he falls asleep'.

The clock struck 12''.at night''.suddnly an familiar angelic voice calld out'"REY"'."REEY"

Rey slowly n gradually opens his eyes'n cus see a white figure'shining sooo brightly'he rubs his eyes n nw opens it widely''..n he stnds shell shockd to see her there it was kriya!!!! He scrms out "KRIYA!!!!"

So guys hw was it plzz do like it n cmmnt'n shud I cont????? n if I wud den I think it wud hav jst 2 or 3 chapter aproximatly'''.



NOTE On Pg 7...

chapter 2 pg 10

Edited by kriyaansh4evr - 12 years ago

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glmorous_diva thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ita amazing
rey still love her...
loved it...
nxt part soon
do pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res unres... Awsum os... D way u described rey's feeling was awsum...lekin aise koi chodta hain kya...*pout*... Thanks fr d pm...and do continue soon...
Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice Os do cont soon dear!!!!!!!!!!!👏👍🏼
thnks 4 d PM

bdw wats ur name?????
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Posted: 12 years ago
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super awesome.. loved the way rey was feeling like his someone spcl is in trouble.. i wish kriya theek ho.. 😕 pls pls do continue.. eagerly waiting 2 read next part.. n thanks 4 the pm.. 😊
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awesome ... update res of the chapter soon...😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Haha.. I lvd hw u strtd as in ur comments on Reyaansh's love.. Haha


Haila.. Ye kya.. Reyaansh is disturbed.. Ermm someone close to his heart is goin away..
Ermm.. Swayam thk sharon thk n rey ka do cld love t___ b thk !

Kriya ka scaff milna.. All of a sudden !! Hufff

Aghh.. Hw dare u rey.. To thnk abt hr dis way.. Tmko toh pta b nhi wht she hs done fr u.. Aghhh 😡 😡

Yr.. Kriya white figure n shinnin brightly.. Mtlb??????
Ermm.. She's no more?????

Cnt wait to read nxt.. Update soon n do pm me :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanx fr the pm..and awesum lovd it..ur 1st atempt and it was realy v.gud..and u shuld surely cnt. puchne wala que.hai hi nai yeh...and nxt update jaldi kar dena.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome os

Loved it

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome...pls update next part asap...

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