Once Upon A Time In Vegas-SwaRon/KriYaansh

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

fabulous os👏

loved both d versions😃

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

cute and nice os...

really loved it alot...

thnx for pm

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payal sood

@love_arsha

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

amazing...
loved both os
loved it a lottt

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Ardour.

@Ardour.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Payal, fabulously written dear. I loved the entire concept and it was truly a pleasurable read. Their fight was adorable and the ending couldn't have been any better. Thanks for the PM.

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Heya Payal, nuthing to lighten the mood like an OS from u...read the whole story with a grin...very simple with a surprise element which u did not give away sooner and yet let it remain implied...keep doing this coz it is very much appreciated...I know, sorry I havent read ur FF update yet, will do soon😉

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Amazing OS
its a sweet one
gosh this is kriyansh..jo apni hi shaadi se pehle lad rahe hai..
loved it

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Aarushi Gupta

@cool_star14

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

payu...tune os likha aur mujhe btaya bhi nahi. huh...😡
btw os was really awsm...😃
kria n that too pencil skirt... woah.. not bad...😉
kriyaansh same cab.. hehe😆
fights were really cute... 😊
bride n goom entering at d same tym... wow...😳
really loved d os...👏