SwaRon FF: Mistake OR Meant To Be.? #2

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

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Awesome update 😊

The dinner was beautifully penned

Sharon didn't realized when she finished all the food

They both didn't want to end the dinner

Swayam didn't lose the opportunity and kissed her

Hoping Sharon would give him a chance soon

Edited by sanstina - 12 years ago

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sky_fighter

@sky_fighter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

this was simply "awww". Totally loved it swayam really dosent let any opportunity go true businessman i must say haha
this was the best date ever
wondering whts gonna happen next
update soon

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

awww...that was super super cute...so adorable...u took my breath away with the date and the kiss...the fire is same from both the side..so passionate...yet taken back...moving things slowly..not rushing...awww the kiss was so cute...loving this FF...love ur style of writing...plz update soon😳

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Awsum Mannu...very measured writing, u let each moment sink in, each action of Swayam trying to woo Sharon was beautiful in itself...Sharon's reactions were equally well described...I read three updates together and trust me the continuity helped me appreciate your writing even more...class stuff😊

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Nehal92

@Nehal92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

I really the loved the date part!! Loved the way Swayam is all set to make her fall for him! he is sure taking things slow between them...And i must say he is playing safe! i am wondering how they are gonna behave on the next day in office!

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Sowmya

@Joshua_TANHA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

first let me res!! unres after reading :D

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Awieee!! This is one of the cutest date ever 😊

I loved the complete update !!! swayam's goal to get one kiss 😆 😆

From start of the date to end it was all cute !! even the kiss ☺️and swayam s happiness ..paagal 😛

Edited by Joshua_TANHA - 12 years ago

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Lassi_TanHa

@Lassi_TanHa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Liked both d updates..
sharon - simmi convos in ur updates r really cute n friendly.. 😊
swayam sendg herflower... he doesnt want rush want to take things slowly n dnot to make sharon uncomfortable... he so carg n understandg.
swayam really getg impressed by sharon n sharon keeps on blushg..☺️ Swaron disscusg abt deir families.. dats was cute
swayam just cant control himself on sharon being around... swayam really dosent leave any opportunity go... 😆
nice going👏

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Awwhhh, the date sounded absolutely perfect !! I loved the way Swayam was a thorough gentleman and that they has such lovely conversations through out the whole night !! The way Swayam stole the kiss from Sharon was so sweet and the most perfect way to end the date !! Can't wait for the next update !!

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Awesome update
Their convo was really good.The way swayam made her feel special.All blushing n teasing part was cute.N the best was their kiss.
Loved it
Waiting for next part