SS- The Heiress *Thriller/Mature* UPDATED pg7

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Oh wow, totally gripping, loved it! Please please continue...it was super hot and so very interesting...what will happen to Khushi? Hope she is ok?

Thanks for the pm!

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Roshkolovemusic

@Roshkolovemusic

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Read both parts together. I loved the concept.

Their intimate moments were very passionate.

Very well written.

Twist in the tale. Awesome.

The call came form Ar office. Who might have called her.

Eagerly waiting for the next part dear.

Thanks for the pm.

Edited by Roshkolovemusic - 12 years ago

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Amrita

@Amti4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Nice concept dear... Reading the first chapter now... Liked it very much... soo much of suspence.. Hope khuhsii is safe

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Ayesha

@stunning.ayesha

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Hope khushi is OK who is that person..how khushi got this much money arghh so many question and only you have there answer...
PM me and update soon dear

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Zarahatke

@Zarahatke

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Hot sizzling thriller suspense
Wow combination of everything

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MidnightReader

@MidnightReader

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Hi! 😊

This is an interesting story. 👏⭐️ I can see your portrayal of Arnav as a cute lover boy, he calls Khushi princess. So sweet! 😊 However, I can see a bit of ASR still exist in him and I have feeling it will be coming out in the upcoming chapters.

On the other hand, Poor Khushi on her birthday she got kidnapped. I hope she is safe. I wonder what is the deal with Khushi being an heiress Of an eleven core estate and her kidnapping…Who warned or rather threaten Arnav on the phone? 😕

I know with time and updates all my query will be answered so I am going to wait patiently. 😆

Please do continue soon. 😃