The Pursuit of Love - Thread 5 link on page 153 - Page 90

I had started reading this story a long time ago. I was on thread one and I didn't know that it had already reached thread 4!! Gosh I had so much catching up to do!!! I really love the pace of this story and how realistic it is. You don't make them fall in love within chapter 2, its complicated and not as perfect. There are issues, problems, tension, and that too between two very stubborn people. I am wondering what will happen once everyone knows about Khushi and how she is related to Mahi, will this change Arnav's perspective of her? And Arnav, who was so against marriage and whatnot seems to be rushing this so fast. These two really do need to communicate more, and the last update showed how insecure Arnav is. This is all new for him and he does not want to lose her. Though Khushi is confused, i'm wondering why she doesn't want to spend more time with him? And why is she so apprehensive about visiting the Raizada's in their home? hmm. really curious as to where this will go! You have a really interesting story, I love it! and I should stop rambling...

finally the new year update 😃...
just loved this update... and really looking forward to their weekend more than mine.. lol

Ok so this my first ever comment on this story. So scared that i might not be able to pour down everything i am feeling after reading 58 parts.
Honestly i don't know why i didn't read it earlier. By the time i came to know about this one , it had reached it's second thread and i kept it in my bookmark list for later (which came really late). M really sorry for that. You know it's sometimes very difficult to take the start, the first step.
Now i know what i missed . I could read the parts till now but i really missed the chance to tell you how i feel after each part.
I just loved the fact that this is not only an Arnav n Khusi story . There are so many relationships you have shown so beautifully and everything has it's own importance. Loved the characters , the new one like Mahi n Ajith n Kushal , the changed one like Anjali, Buaji, Shashi and most importantly of Arnav n Khusi. I loved one fact that Arnav never manhandled Khusi like in the show or in many story. He has a different way to rile her up . It's gr8 to see the father -daughter relationship , Shahsi n Khusi shared. the friendship Farhan n Khusi ir Girish n Khusi shared. Even i loved the parts where Kushal n Khusi talked , or the part where Buaji told khusi more about garima or the part when Mahi spoke to Arnav about Garima and his past. I know too many characters and it's not easy to place them in the story but you did a wonderful job here Kalyani.

I loved the Arnav in your story. Be it here or in R&S. Two different shades but lovable. 😃
Loved the dinner date and with the ease it went on. They both eager to move forward but want to take one step at a time . Looking forward to the weekend they promised to spend together. 😳

P.S. I loved Ajit and Khusi's relationship in the beginning. if possible do show a little of them in future.

I'm in love with this story. I absolutely adore the way this is going. love the details. can't say it enough...you write amazing stories Kalyaani! I hope you will update soon.

the two of them are just too cute!

oh i love the way you write... both your FF's - Raizada and Sons and this one.

Arnav is really falling for her...and Khushi, well I just love the way you've portrayed this character: strong, independant, loyal, caring, a traditional girl with a modern outlook, intelligent and beautiful. What's not to love??

Awe loved it...super sweet and romantic...continue soon...

Kalyaani,