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Samyxx

@Samyxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#761

Awesome story...

I totally love it!

please update soon..

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Anjali

@acklesmanic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#762

A lovely tribute to those 2 wonderful people...!!!

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gifttag

@gifttag

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#763

That was awesome, that loop really needed to be closed.
You have nailed it and done it beautifully.
Poor Lavanya it was always Khushi for Arnav as soon as they met
and ever since, as he was running away from her and himself he took some very wrong decisions as Lavanya also did't want to face reality of the situation she decided to remain in fools paradise until everything fell apart around her and she had no choice but to face the reality and move on in life and away from Arnav who was never her.
This loop is not completely closed yet, two more parts to come.
Will wait eagerly for them.
Please continue soon.
Thanks for the PM.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#764

Now I'm the one with a goofy smile on my face, you have written my suggestion, thank you so so so much.

Loved the first part, It was Fantastic and a brilliant update.

Love how you wrote from both Lavanya and NK's point of view and how they were not destined with the people they fell in love with.

Lavanya's childhood was quite sad and then her relationship with Arnav, she loved him a lot but she knew he did not feel the same way as she did about him.

It's nice to read she had no bad feeling against Khushi, as she had a lot to be grateful to her about.

So Lavanya and NK finally met, what a superb meeting, just perfect.

Awww bless NK could not think of a dialogue, (I was slightly confused you go sems helped you with the dialogue in your note, where is the dialogue? Is it coming up in part 2?)

Loved the update, it was a amazing read.

Eagerly waiting to read the next part,

Thanks for the PM, continue soon please xx

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#765

Hey ...
Fantastic update !!! :)
I honestly love and adore La to bits and I was literally sad when she left the show ... :(

I used to wish that she and NK got hooked up ...
But alas that wish just remained unfulfilled ... <\3

I honestly wanted to see her emotions after the way she left the RM ... But that was it !!
They never showed her later on ... :' (

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Monasha

@monasha

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#766

Amazing Updates...
Waiting for the part 2 of this Heart is Mine

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#767

Finally... let them find their happiness... :-)

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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#768

Great update
So thoughtful of u to close the NK lavanya loop
Thanks for d pm 😊

Edited by aaradhaya1688 - 12 years ago

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shutter

@shutter

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#769

U know what i was a little apprehensive about reading this loop, because i wasn't so sure what it would be about!!!! but, in the end i couldn't stop myself from giving it a go...

The moment i started reading the fisrt paragrapgh, i was like this is ok... a few more lines n i was like OMG!!! dis is awesome!!!!

Very beautifully and amazingly written... i was floored reading this update...

every single thought, feeling and emotion was perfect to the 'T'!!!!!!!!!

like the way u open up a loop... Magnificent!!!!!!

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#770

Hello Dear Readers,

I hate to be the bearer of bad news, but it has to be done. Since it was a weekend, and we had friends over, we went to an amusement part (Bad decision # 1) When we got there, I got an unlimited pass for all rides (Bad decision # 2), and since I had the pass anyway, I decided to slide down a mile long track, on a 2000 ft mountain, with your only safety being...nada, nothing, zippo. You sit on a board and you slide down the track, with a small stick deciding if you want to break or accelerate (Bad decision # 3).

I would have gotten away with all these bad decisions too, if the guy in front of me didn't decide it would be fun to pour beer down the track and screw all the people behind him over. The result, flipped board 1/3rd way down the mountain, me scraping skin off of half of my hands and legs due to the friction, and a shit ton of bandage.

Anyway...the point of all this is, I need to rant, and I needed to tell you the reason I might not be able to update this week. I haven't written the updates yet, and going by the mother of all pains I am in right now, it's not going to happen tomorrow. I am sincerely sorry, hope you understand.

Love,
Ridz

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