IPKKND:Closing The Loops * Thread 2 Pg 144 * - Page 69

Originally posted by: BlueMystique

Hope you like them :) Let me know what you think!

Where is weekend Treat...I mean Update...:(
i m waiitng...but cant read it now if u r planning to update after an hour or so..

Originally posted by: EXPELLIARMUS

When I made this request I really didn't imagine that you would fulfill that wish and close the Shyam revelation loop in one fell swoop!

This was really a treat to read, since I have wondered so many times about what would have happened if Arnav had gone to the terrace instead of Shyam.

Khushi's thoughts were written well, that's exactly what she would have been thinking on the show!

My favorite part was the letter, and the subsequent encounter.

Now that's what a shaatir dimaag would have come up with!

A confession that felt natural, and a ending that was perfect for the start of the new life together, what more could I have asked for!

Great going, Ridz.

Ab next loop suggest karoon?😆

Thanks, J! I haven't really planned on writing this one, but when you mentioned it I thought, what if Arnav was the one who reached there before Shyam? How would Khushi react to his confession. Would she confess too without him knowing the entire truth?

And this is what came to mind!

You do give me the most challenging and interesting loops, lol.

Thanks for the comment and the pic :)

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Was waiting for you to Res Juhi

Loved the what if...have thought of it many times...perfect story! It should have happened like this...it's late...so will unres in the morning IST!

👏

This was just brilliant...thanks Juhi...I am told that this was your request ...

Just made me realise what a beautiful show we had, with such potential, amazing characters portrayed ever so magically by the two best actors...and what they did to it...

So first of all than you for creating such a wonderful memory, this is my IPK now...

Loved how you brought back all those incidents from during the marriage track where their feelings are heightened...the realisation ...no one ever spoke about those times, how could he believe anything about Shyam and her after the beautiful moments they spent...when they hell did she even have time to meet Shyam to conduct a clandestine affair with him?

Loved how he goes up to tell her loved her apprehension about what she was about to hear...loved how he is mesmerised by her and everything about her ...

Loved how she realises what he wants to say and even though she wants to hear it, there is a part of her that needs to come out in the open ...his anger at being what he thought was her rejection and the beautiful letter...am glad putting aside his pride and anger he takes action...

Loved that Payal confides in Akash, trust is the pillar which is as important as love , respect and honesty to hold a marriage together...

Loved how they stay apart, him his fear of being rejected again, she needing him to accept and trust her truth and respect her decision not to accept his admission of love till she is honest and open with him...

Loved how the pag phera Rasam sees a glowing Payal at home and am so happy that her marriage has its own identity...

Loved her apprehensions and sorrow in wondering if the contents of the later had changed his feelings for him...her grief written so beautifully...

Loved how he comes to her...loved loved how he says he is sorry for not being able to instil the confidence in her that he would trust and believe her if she were to have gone to him and confided in him...that was perfect...as was the ending and them coming together in totality and finally ...!

Magical indeed...love how your thoughts and words flow out ...creating such a vivid visual impact...

@bold: Awww, thank you SO much!

I am not even sure what to say to this awesome reply, except thank you from the bottom of my heart!

Originally posted by: kbtr

Universal Serial Bus= Some computer jargon about transporting stuff and fixing things. But in this case, in internet slang, what defines the show.

LOL! I know the actual USB full form, but this adaptation of it for shows is hilarious! 😆

Originally posted by: Nooro

Res...Okay Its my lucky day I guess...
Unressing...
Amazing...What a closure to as u said A WHAT-IF LOOP...
khushi's idea of wriitng letter was a good one as To let Arnav himself see the truth...But i m glad that he turned up at her doorstep after a week's wait by khushi...n then confession...Aaawww...

Thank you :) The next loop's coming up soon!

Originally posted by: kbtr

What a great way for the truth to be out.

Loved how Arnav just showed up suddenly after a week at her doorstep!

At least his shatir dimaag was of some use here (which seemed to have vanished unless it was dominating or bullying Kushi!)

Thank you! :) Tell me about it! #SMH

Originally posted by: kbtr

What a beautiful letter. And so emotional with the depth of feelings attached to it.

And I am so glad that Arnav got to read the letter and feel Kushi's pain and happiness. His mother unknowingly (or knowingly? Like Kushi, I firmly believe in Divine Help...! And also believe that anyone who passes away becomes part of Divinity) brought them together.

Love how Arnav is trying as much as he can to bring only happy memories, now.

tfs

Comment after The Letter

The thought is comforting, isn't it? 😊

Thank you! :D

Originally posted by: SS88

I love it, I love it, I love it times infinity. Dude, why just why didn't they show something like this in the show? Like the two of them got married to expose Shyam, fell in love, and Anjali was a rational minded woman, who saw sense, and the demons of his past were thus exorcised. And yes, Anjali kept the baby, and didn;t try a DIY abortion, and she went on to be a successful woman , who fell in love again. Instead of that domestic violence- infused with stupid comedy and random romantic moments.

LOLOLOL! That's everyone's wish list right there!

Thank you for the infinite love ;)

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

I always wanted a happy ending for Anjali, but never would I have thought of her as an English teacher. :) Loved it! Thanks for the update and PM!

Thanks :) For some reason, in my mind the job fits Anjali